very cute, i like it
awwww now thats cute!! and great story above all!!!=D
neat, though it did end a bit abruptly... well done noetheless
Neat idea, but i thought the second dream suggested that she was unhapy with Ron or something. It got a bit confusing and I didn't see why when he came down in the morning she was so sure she was in love. Grade: B-/C+
I really like this. I think that this is such an interesting point in the series that we never really get to read about, seeing as the books are told mostly from Harry's point of view. Anyways, rock on!
Ah, interesting perception of what could have happened. I like stories that could have actually taken place within the story, so kudos on that. I'll admit, I had to go back and re-read the part where Hermione trips on a rock and lands on her back. I was like, huh? But then I got it - so she could wake up. Cute story.