oooo i like this story!! its very good with the romance and violence! more people need to read this story because it is very powerful and well written!
Author's Response: Oooh, thanks! Not a lot of people have reviewed this story on any of the four sites I post on. I don't lose too much sleep over it, because it's not really one of my favorites, but I'm certainly glad when people get around to reviewing it. I'm glad you enjoyed the romance and violence, etc. :D
wow, great detail, a really powerful story
Author's Response: Ooh, thank you! Glad you liked it, because this story doesn't seem to be as popular as the rest of mine. So thanks for the review.
I like the combination of violence and romance. I also love your ability of giving a whole personality to somewhat minor characters in the limited space of a one-shot.
I remember that this was the first ever Argus/Irma fic I'd read (and I couldn't review back then). I really enjoyed it; I can't think of any constructive criticism to give. Splendid job!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! This story, while more popular when it comes to the amount of hits, has gotten barely any reviews. I don't know if that has anything to do with me loving my other stories better than this one or not. Don't get me wrong--I love every fanfic (and original story) I write. But I'm glad you really enjoyed this fic. And thank you for taking time to review, because like no one else has :)
Whoa, this was a good combination of violence, death and romance. I liked it. It was unusual, and different from other violent fics... I must admit - Argus and Irma's confessions of love were a bit funny to me as well. sorry. Don't mind me if it wasn't meant like that though, it was still very good. The ending was really romantic and dark and violent, as I'm sure you intended it to be. I just have two tiny errors to point out though, Demelza's last name is Robins, not Roberts. "His spell tore the boy’s in two.” - that must be 'the boy' or 'the boy's body'. Just thought I'd point that out.. A great job on the whole though. Oh, to answer your other response, I usually try keep track of the fics on my favourite list, and one of yours was on it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! And for pointing out the errors; I'll have to go back and change them (I'm so embarrassed about the "boy's" mistake--I normally don't mix up possessive adjectives and plural nouns like that!). And I'm glad you liked it; I liked it, too. Keep reading; I hope to have another fic up within the month