It is FANTASTIC!
I really like the way you capture Cho's emotions so delicately and so realistically. I thought the way you tied in 'She walks in beauty' was really clever. I think it's nice to have some fan fiction about Cho!
Well done, I think it's brilliant story!
Author's Response: You don't know how much this means to me. I really appriciate the review and your kind words will stay with me. I really tried hard to capture emotion in the purest sense of the word here. And I agree, Cho is not some character to be shoved asside! She has the power to be a major point in the plot. Thanks again for the review!
The poem was beautiful - I thought you did a pretty good job choosing it! Cho is always a sad, sly, mean character in many fics, but I think your Cho was perfect. She was sad, she hated herself, but you've made me understand her better. The last verse of the poem was a lovely ending to the story. I enjoyed it a lot.
Author's Response: Thank you very very much for the review! I am really glad that people change their opinions of Cho once they've read my story. I only hope that some people quit making Cho into a 2D character. Oh, well...but thank you and I'll be sure to take your compliments to heart.
Excelllent fic! I have to admit that Cho is one of my least favourite characters, but you made me understand her emotions so well that I felt really sorry for her. The poem worked very nicely with your story - it finished the story off perfectly. Good job!
Author's Response: Well, thank you very much! I have to confess to have been an avid Cho/Harry shipper in the begining. It made me quite sad when I had to leave my beloved ship behind...but anyway, I am glad you could identify with Cho. It was my whole purpose of this fic. I was tired of Cho-Bashers and wanted to show them how I think Cho felt. Thank you again and I hope to see you around!