well that is just the biggest cliffy eva! i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad to know this chapter's ending got some of the effect I was going for. Unfortunately, it may be a while before I can write the next chapter, as I'm barely getting through my homework every night as it is!
That was so sweet and sad! I liked the way Harry was telling Neville's parents how brave Neville was. Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Unfortunately, however, I won't be able to work on chapter 3 until after May 5, when I'm taking a HUGE national AP History exam. Until then, I really don't have free time for writing the chapter... but I do know what's going to happen in the next three!
your story was so good! when are you going to update? i hope its soon! 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks! It's really encouraging to get good reviews. I submitted my second chapter last week, so if all goes well it should be up soon! P.S. I love your pen name! Did you get that from Stupidvideos? That thing was hilarious!
C'mon people! Submit some reviews! I'm dying to know what you think! By the way, I'm about to start on chapter two... haven't come up with the right title yet, though.
That was freakin AWESOME!! I really like your style of writing, and the way you portray Uncle Vernon is exactly like the books. So the whole story is going to be like little stories of other people at St. Mungo's?
Author's Response: Not exactly. The first several chapters are in St. Mungo's, because there are some characters involved with that place that I'm very attached to. But Harry does get to leave, and other stuff happens. I just haven't included that in the summary yet because I'm still not exactly sure of where the other stuff is going to take place, and my ideas are still vague. I just wanted to get the first chapter in right away to make sure I wouldn't get really into the whole thing and then have them reject it because my plot was messed up!