Reviews For Take What I Give.
Reviewer: Eyela38
Date: 01/30/08 8:23
Chapter: Take What I Give.

That was really good =D
Nice style, i loved the way u wrote it...
Hmm... why is there like no reviews??? I'm surprised u haven't been showered with compliments on this! THIS IS A REALLY GOOD STORY PPLS!!!!
Great work!

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment. I'm always so used to passing by unnoticed, so I guess it doesn't surprise me that many people don't review or even read the things that I write, but I love to write so lack of reviews won't typically stop me :). Your comment about the style made me smile, most people ignore that aspect of my writing and I think the poetic aspect of this helps it to stick out more.

Reviewer: Mrs Liz Potter
Date: 06/18/06 12:42
Chapter: Take What I Give.

I saw that you had no reviews for this tor and thought it was a total shame. This was beautifully written and I couldn't think of any other, better way to write this. It was so sweet and raw and pure. I loved it and I hope you've written more things because to not share you wounderful gift with the world would be a sin. Love Always...

Author's Response: Thank you so much, it was my first shot at anything remotely poetic and your review means a lot to me. Thanks for helping to keep me motivated in writing, I've taken such a long break from it that I'm itching to get started again thanks to your comments.

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