Reviews For Two friends
Reviewer: Ginnyfreak95
Date: 07/13/06 17:23
Chapter: My friends

whatsup dood cute story. in your bio CHANGE ASHTON IN BEING YOUR FRIEND! NOW

Author's Response: Sorry ginnyfreak. Haven't updated that in a while. thanks for the review though!

Reviewer: Princess Of HP FanFiction
Date: 03/18/06 19:51
Chapter: My friends

*SNIFF* That's a little heart-wrenching don't you think? But, yeah I do agree a bit on this poem. I guess that what would Harry think if Ron and Hermione completely ignore him and start spending time "coo-ing" each other. I find that a bit sad. But, despite that, it's brilliant! Good job! *CLAP*

Author's Response: thanks, i was thinking of that. i guess i should just make it clear in the summary,right? well, anyway, thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: greenbuggy6000
Date: 03/04/06 21:05
Chapter: My friends

I like the peom. it is cool e o!!!!! i think harry would feel a bit differently but i realy like the poem. ur peom is alot better than ANY of myn!!!

Author's Response: thanks. I wrote this because i sorta feel this way now that my two friends are together. ijust thought he might feel a little sad because what happened in book6. thanks for reviewing, anyway.

Reviewer: acire
Date: 03/02/06 3:56
Chapter: My friends

This poem is very sweet...I do like it. The way you put '2 the numeral' rather than 'two the word', shows that you like doing your own thing in writing poems, which is half the fun of writing poems. Keep up the good work. :)

Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you liked it!! i really appreciate your review

Reviewer: danz_girl05
Date: 02/27/06 2:50
Chapter: My friends

That is very sad yet what Harry would feel! Update with somemore please!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!I'm thinking of adding another chapter.

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 02/21/06 18:06
Chapter: My friends

Cute story! Its not the most elegant or fancy poetry I've ever read, but I really like how it is. The fact you use numbers instead of writing out numbers especially intrigues me. I also like your short, snappy rhyme. Your style seems to be along the lines of E.E. Cummings- you write your own way. Some may contradict you as being too controversal and striving too hard to change the rules of grammer, but I really like your poem.

Author's Response: thanks. I wasn't really thinking much when I wrote it because I didn't want to put it on the internet. But my cousin persuaded me to. I really appreciate your review!

Reviewer: Pirkadatka
Date: 02/18/06 16:01
Chapter: My friends

Oh, I'm first to review? Never mind... This was nice, this poem... You should try to write also something a bit longer!! It was cute!!!

Author's Response: thanks! I'm glad tou liked it! I'll try to write something longer,but I'm not the best writer.

Author's Response: thanks! I'm glad tou liked it! I'll try to write something longer,but I'm not the best writer.

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