You've captured the dreadfulness of Azkaban quite well, really that was chilling! I love several of your ideas here, like Sirius being unfamiliar with using his own voice because he spends so much time alone. How sad! And, the idea that one could find solace in one's thoughts and dreams is very comforting. Have to sneak in those bits when the Dementor's are not around! Great job!
Author's Response: =D I thought I'd try and figure out what Azkaban was like from a prisoner's point of view, especially one that wasn't supposed to be there. Seems I did pretty well. I know the feeling of not knowing if you can speak because you haven't used your voice in so long, and that wasn't even for a whole day! I can only imagine for poor Sirius. I'm glad you enjoyed! It is quite comforting, and I think Sirius deserves some comfort like that. Indeed! Thank you so very much!
This is very well written with only minor errors. The story is a bit depressing, but then Azkaban is a bit depressing, eh? You really got inside Sirius's head. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Yeah, I suppose it is a bit depressing, huh? Oh well, you're right; Azkaban is a morbid place. Thank you! I thought it might be fun to explore his thoughts. I might do it again some time. Thanks once again for the review!
*Sniffles* This story is so sad! I love how you added the song at the beginning and end.
Author's Response: =] Thank you so much! Yes, I suppose the story certainly does have a sad tone to it, but that's sort of what I wanted to achieve. I guess I got it right! And yes, I did enjoy the song. I thought it fit well with the story, so I turned the one shot into a song fic. I'm glad you liked it!
its soo sad, but i love it!!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! I wrote it for my friend... I'm so happy you like it! =D
That was really good. The imagery was great and Cred reminded me a bit of Hagrid. I enjoyed it. Well done
Author's Response: Thank you very much. <3 I loved writing Cred... He is sort of like Hagrid, isn't he? Well, thank you for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it!