slight tidbit of concrit: i think ginny's reaction to the prophecy was a little stilted/articificial.. but yes.. don't kill me, i still like the story!
Author's Response: Lol, I have a hard time writing certain things, and Ginny's reaction was one of them...
i like harry's reflections in this story. especially at the end - i thought those were spot on.
Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate the reviews.
I think this last chapter is by far the best. To me, I think that the story has been improving every chapter -both writing style and plot, so I'm giving you a 10/10 for this chapter. Good work
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I've been trying hard to improve my writing, but sometimes I just get stuck in a mess and can't seem to get out. But Godric's Hollow was hard for me to write, but I'll be honest, there's another chapter coming up that I was DREADING having to write...
Nice story, I like how the plot includes Hogwarts being closed, I havent read any post-HBP stories that accomplished that. It would be nice to introduce the castle to the story at some point, there's so much you could do there. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I do, in fact, have plans for the Hogwarts castle in a while. It's great to hear that someone else likes the idea of it actually beeing closed. I'm trying to get through this at about one chapter a week, provided my beta has the time.
good story, now i just need more ; D
Author's Response: Ha ha, I submitted the next one today and my beta has the next chapter. Thank you for the review, it means a lot to me.
But in reality, could he have kept her from doing what her heart told her to do? I see similarities betwen Ginny and Lily. Neither of them would lay low while the men fouhgt. Not in their nature.
Author's Response: That's something that Harry needs to realize is that he can only can control himself. He needs to realize that he can't protect everyone, I think. Thanks so much for the review.
is this done?
Author's Response: not done, it was just on a hiatus due to a very rough pregnancy, I've started working on it again this week
cant wait till the next chapter!!!
plzzz update...it's goin great so far
Author's Response: Thanxz, next chapter will be up soon, sorry for the LONG delay
It was a really good chapter but waaaaaaaaaaaay toooooooo short!Update soon!
Author's Response: So sorry, it will be up soon...
Good job! Keep it up and update asap.
Author's Response: Thanks, sorry for the long delay, pregnancy did not agree with me
Too short!!!! Glad to see Harry & Ginny back together! Rude awakening???? Can't wait.
Author's Response: I agree, Ginny and Harry need to be together, the importance of love and all that. Hopefully the next chapter will be loads longer. Sorry for the long wait.
Chapter 3 was GRRRRREEEEEEEEAAAT.ON to chapter 4
Author's Response: In progress and will be up soon
Author's Response: Has been submitted, YAY!!!
In! MY! FAVORITES!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am currently working on chapter 4!
Nice job!I liked it a lot!Keep up with the good work and update soon
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on it:)
I liked it, good job! Keep it up and update soon.
Author's Response: Chapter 3 has been submitted, but it will take longer now. I am in the middle of writing 4. Thankfully, I don't use a beta, so I won't have to wait on that.
Awsome!!!This a brilliant start even though ron was a bit out of characther.Oh well, since when has a lilttle OOC-ness hurt anybody. 100000000/10
Author's Response: Because Ron and Hermione are officially together now in this story, I see Ron making several good good changes, and voicing his thoughts will be one of them...
This is great start to your story!! Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you, that was my first review and it was very encouraging. Chapter 2 has been submitted.