Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 02/11/07 12:38
Chapter: News of the Order

Oh yay! I have to say that I have a soft spot for Draco. I do think that he isn't that bad, he's just been mislead for a very long time. Anyways, I love the story, update soon!

Author's Response: I strongly agree about Draco. Thanks for the review, I'll update when I can, with all these health problems going on.

Reviewer: dumbledorefluertwins
Date: 02/11/07 11:53
Chapter: Not My House

I really like this story, you've got the charaterization just right and from what I've seen so far it's got a good plot too. One small thing though, make sure you always have question marks when a charater asks a question. I probably just being fussy but that's my pet peeve.
Still, it's a really good story and I'm adding it to my favorites!

Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm working on the question mark thing, it was one of my biggest grammer problems.

Reviewer: HG_HR551
Date: 02/11/07 11:02
Chapter: News of the Order

Good Chapter.
I always thought that Malfoy was good when he couldn't kill Dumbledore.
Keep them coming!

Author's Response: I'll work on it, but they'll be coming a bit less frequently for a while until my health gets better. And yes, I agree about the Malfoy thing, I write what I agree with...

Reviewer: Obliviated_Auror
Date: 02/09/07 14:38
Chapter: Spelio Animus

Just found your story and have really enjoyed it I especially like how you delt with the Hogwarts situation and Ginny not being able to go with them.
Thanks for writing

Author's Response: Thank you muchly!

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 02/08/07 22:51
Chapter: Spelio Animus

Second?! Hermione's lied loads of time to save their necks! What about when she lied to Umbridge about the "weapon" that Dumbledore was supposedly making the keep track of!

Author's Response: Oh, sorry, good call. Thanks!

Reviewer: harryginnyforever
Date: 02/08/07 21:54
Chapter: Spelio Animus

Oh, wicked, wicked Harry!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 02/08/07 18:46
Chapter: Spelio Animus

Why does everyone always have such "good" timing! Harry's and Ginnys moment was going so sweet and Hermione came!
Great chappie, though.

Author's Response: I write my kind of luck, horrible. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: HG_HR551
Date: 02/08/07 14:46
Chapter: Overdue Confrontation

Good just keep just make them longer!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: HG_HR551
Date: 02/08/07 14:45
Chapter: Spelio Animus

Nice Chapter, Hurry up with the next. Quick post i like that.

Only thing is don't like is that they are to short!

Author's Response: The next one's still with my beta...I can't make them longer because then it's painfully obvious that I'm dragging it out...Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 02/05/07 19:33
Chapter: Overdue Confrontation

That was an interesting setup for the next chapter. I wish I had had a bit more of Ginny's party, but the chappie was good.
Update soon, please!

Author's Response: Unfortunately, my next chapter is still with my beta, but I will put it up as soon as I get it back...Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: _Peeves_
Date: 01/29/07 20:22
Chapter: The Wedding

OMG this is an awesome story but u spelt proohecy wrong lol "propheCy...


Author's Response: Thank you! I shall keep writing!

Reviewer: lizlovegood12
Date: 01/29/07 13:41
Chapter: An Adult By Age

Hi! Your story is excellent, I really like it... I hope that you're still writing it, because I want to read it all; This is the first Fiction that I've read since book sixth went out in which Sirius and Dumbledore are still death, you know what I mean... We all liked both and I'm really sorry the fact that they've been murdered but I accepted it (well... I still have some doubts about Dumbledore) So many people think that sirius will be back as a person... please let him go and rest in peace!
Now going on to more pleasant topics I wish Harry think better about breaking up with Ginny and go back with her... he needs her... they're the most wonderful couple... winning To Lupin and Tonks on a few points (hey! I like them too!) About Ron And Hermione is too soon for them... You put them already as a couple so soon... I think it will take much more than Dumbledore's death to them to admit their feelings for each other. Ron have to grow up a little bit more... and with Gabrielle in the Burrow it will be a nightmare for Hermione... and I don't think she would be thinking on marriage either, Come on!!! They are too young to think about that, all of them!
You made me notice about the fact that Mundungus could have stolen the locket... I didn't think about it until now...
Well that's it for now, just for now... I'll wait for the next chapter, don't take long with it or I'll be a pain the you-know-where until you update... See you soon and congratulations! bye!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I put Ron and Hermione early because I knew that I couldn't write Ron having feelings for anyone else, I don't have that in me, as I'm avid about putting only canon stuff in my stories. Plus, Gabrielle was into Harry, not Ron. But yeah, I agree about letting Sirius and Dumbledore go in peace. I am an avid Dumbledore is dead supporter because I believe that Harry needs to go the last step without him. And sorry the next chapter is taking so long, the mods deleted it or something and I never noticed until today because I didn't receive and e-mail about it or anything, so I resubmitted it this morning. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Lady of the Lake
Date: 01/22/07 20:30
Chapter: An Adult By Age

Please give us the next chapter.

Author's Response: Just submitted it. And I love your username. And yes, I do know where it's from. My SCA name originated from that story/movie.

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 01/22/07 18:10
Chapter: An Adult By Age

This was good. Alittle short, but good.

Author's Response: Thanks, I have trouble making them long. I've tried, it just doesn't work for me.

Reviewer: milesje
Date: 01/22/07 8:46
Chapter: An Adult By Age

This has been an excellent story so far and I am really looking forward to reading the rest of it. If you need some else to maybe help with the beta reading for this just let me know. I should be registered and accredited beta reader at PI fairly soon.

looking forward to more!
Jacob Miles

Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate the review...I will think about the beta thing and let you know either way. Thank you again.

Reviewer: sskywalker00
Date: 01/22/07 4:52
Chapter: An Adult By Age

great chapter update soon

Author's Response: Thank you, I will as soon as I get the chapter back from my beta.

Reviewer: Nutters4Potter
Date: 01/21/07 18:06
Chapter: An Adult By Age

Another great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: moody s friend
Date: 01/20/07 21:52
Chapter: An Adult By Age

Great story.You are a very good writer.I like it very much.Keep writing.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I shall keep writing, and update this story as soon as I get the next chapter back from my beta!

Reviewer: shortysmalls
Date: 01/17/07 21:31
Chapter: Godric's Hollow

I love this!!! It seems to be only inches from the awesomeness of the Mrs.Rowling herself. It is perfection, DO NOT STOP WRITIING PLZ!!!!!

Author's Response: I haven't stopped, don't worry, but I will never begin to compare to JK, she is a writer in her own league. Thank you so much for the review, though.

Reviewer: BlackPearl
Date: 01/15/07 12:40
Chapter: Information

not bad but very undetailed almost like the characters are robotic

Author's Response: I didn't think it was THAT bad, but thank you for taking the time to review anyway.

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