Reviewer: ginny_harry_ron_hermione
Date: 09/04/09 22:27
Chapter: Overdue Confrontation

These chapters are way too short. Please make them longer.

Reviewer: ginny_harry_ron_hermione
Date: 09/04/09 22:24
Chapter: An Adult By Age

Like I said before, too fluffy, and the chapters are too short.

Reviewer: ginny_harry_ron_hermione
Date: 09/04/09 22:21
Chapter: Alone

Bit too cliched, with Harry talking to his parents' graves, and a bit too fluffy for my taste. Okay, not my favorite.

Reviewer: KingTW
Date: 07/31/07 5:04
Chapter: News of the Order

u killed kingsley, dang =(, also i agree that's it's underdramatic, yet I still like it xD

Reviewer: liveonluna
Date: 03/04/07 17:22
Chapter: Aftermath

Whoa. Those were wicked burns. Voldemore is evil, well obvisouly! Excellent job, can't wait for an update...! =D

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 02/27/07 18:31
Chapter: Aftermath

Too long for the next one? Please update soon. This one was good.

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 02/27/07 17:46
Chapter: Aftermath

Too long for the next one? Please update soon. This one was good.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: pammiez_x3
Date: 02/25/07 21:26
Chapter: Aftermath

wow! can you say action!? awesome job! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: HG_HR551
Date: 02/25/07 20:30
Chapter: Aftermath

WHOA!
That was unexpected! Poor Harry getting all burned. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks...You are reviewer #50...Contact me through here with your question.

Reviewer: HG_HR551
Date: 02/25/07 20:24
Chapter: Return to Hogwarts

Good Chapter.
I think that Snape is loyal to Dumbeldore to, but i still don't like him. He hates Harry to much!

Author's Response: That's exactly how I feel!

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 02/21/07 4:25
Chapter: Return to Hogwarts

Hmmm... good! Keep writing.

Author's Response: Will do, thank you!

Reviewer: pammiez_x3
Date: 02/20/07 20:23
Chapter: Return to Hogwarts

ooo cliffy! good chapter, kinda short, but good and to the point! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you very much:)

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 02/20/07 19:52
Chapter: Return to Hogwarts

You are mean! This was good. Short, but good. Update soon, please!

Author's Response: I will, thank you!

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 02/20/07 19:28
Chapter: Return to Hogwarts

The ending left me a bit confused with the cliffhanger but I love the chapter. Update soon!

Author's Response: Shall do, thank you!

Reviewer: lilly_fleming
Date: 02/15/07 22:33
Chapter: News of the Order

loving the story keep p the good work cant read next chapter? please feel free to send to me at wizarding_princess19@hotmail.com


Author's Response: The chapter just hasn't been validated yet is all...Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: the_wind
Date: 02/12/07 4:31
Chapter: News of the Order

I've just read the whole story once through, and it's pretty good. I did see a fair few belmishes, though:

Firstly, it's a bit light-hearted. There's far less action than you'd expect in a war, and despite Voldemort apparently knowing of Harry's feelings for Ginny, there has been no attempt to capture or murder Ginny in three-four months.

Also, I often am critical at fanfiction writes for being overdramatic. This fanfiction is flawed in the opposite direction - it is underdramatic. There is barely any angst. The romance is too fluffy. There are no cliffhangers, most of the chapter plots are resolved quite well by the end of the chapter.

On a more positive note, though, this story is looking quite promising - the quick updates help a lot! - and, despite its flaws, is one of the better Book 7 fanfics I have read. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you for your opinions...However, I don't write to sound good, I write fot something to do to pass the time until July. So if people like it, that's awesome. If they jusy think my writing sucks, they're right, so why bother reading it?

Author's Response: Sorry for the spelling errors, I am typing with a baby in my arms.

Reviewer: moody s friend
Date: 02/12/07 0:09
Chapter: News of the Order

Up to now your story is very good.Keep it that way.Harry must get back with Ginny,because she is very powerfull already.Don't forget that Ginny is the seventh child of her family.She is gifted.I don't know if JK have sent us a glimpse of HP7 when she have written that when Harry is close to Ginny he smell a flowery sent from her.That means that she have a very unique talent:ubiquity........

Author's Response: I assure you that I am an avid H/G fan...Thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: pammiez_x3
Date: 02/11/07 15:59
Chapter: News of the Order

good story. update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try hard to write, but not promises on speed while I'm still sick...

Reviewer: hpluver365
Date: 02/11/07 14:52
Chapter: News of the Order

omg. this is such a good fanfic. i absoloutely luv the plot line! keep it coming!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm working on it between health problems...

Reviewer: Ginny Guerra
Date: 02/11/07 14:06
Chapter: News of the Order

This was a good chapter. Short, but good. I hate Draco, but I like the idea of Harry defending him.
Update soon, please.

Author's Response: I'll update as soon as I can, health problems have slowed down my writing. I used to hate Draco too, until I read HBP the second time...

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