Awwww.... That was so sweet. And this is like the first G-rated fanfic that hasn't made me gag on it's sweetness. Awwwwwww.... 10/10
That was great! It's a shame you're not making it longer. I would love to see a part about when she has the baby though.
Very sweet. She's lucky you know. Her first sign was a missed period. Some girls get to upchuck everything they eat for weeks as a first indication.
Awww...how sweet!!! Thats so cute and really imaginable to me! Yeay! 100!
Awww that was sooooo sweet !!! I just love this story... It's awesome... I wish that that would happen in the books... all well people can always dream... Please write more stories like this one... You're an awesome author... 10+++
Cool!! I really like this fanfic! Its really sweet but i think theres only one problem. You should write more chapters!! It would be really sweet!! But you ended it well for a one-shot. You kind of gave us this image into the future of Hermione and Harry looking really happy together with lots of children in their backyard running around. Awwww!! Hermione would make a great mum and i can imagine harry holding a toddler on his shoulders! Perfect. PS and yay! I'm the first-ever reviewer!