Reviews For Maybe it was rose
Reviewer: mrsharrypotter28
Date: 07/17/09 10:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

omg that was really good. you have to write another!

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 01/10/08 22:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was a really cute story. It got the point across well but there were certain things lacking in it.

Fist off, your story is almost entire based on dialog alone. Dialog is admittedly a strong plot devise but we, as writers should never underestimate the power of description. Setting your surroundings and clarifying your emotions is something that helps the reader enjoy your story even more. As the age old saying goes, show mot tell!

Now I realize that this was a one shot so you were somewhat limited lengthwise bit thats no excuse. There are some amazing one shots out there and MNFF allows a one shot to be up to 10 000 words.

I am so sorry if I'm being mean but I would love nothing more then to see you become the best writer you can be *hugs*=Sammy

Reviewer: Harryz Girl_123
Date: 07/08/07 19:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awesome!!! I sooooooooo loooove this fic. It is like my favorite one. I read and reread it every day!! It is like soooo cool that there are actually people who support the HHR relationship. I soo can't see Ron with Hermione.

Reviewer: Harryz Girl_123
Date: 07/08/07 19:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awesome!!! I sooooooooo loooove this fic. It is like my favorite one. I red and reread it every day!! It is like soooo cool that there are actually people who support the HHR relationship. I soo can't see Ron with Hermione.

Reviewer: gingercat
Date: 05/30/07 0:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love adult Harry and Hermione, and them already married is even better. Harry needs a Large Family

Reviewer: R_Ravenclaw
Date: 05/23/07 12:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

It was cute, and the Draco/Ginny mention made me shriek with joy.

Reviewer: Harryz Girl_123
Date: 04/13/07 18:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awwww!! So Cute

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 02/19/07 13:43
Chapter: Chapter 1

OMG i loooooooove this story! I've read it about four times, and I just re-read it again, and I loooooooove it! you should SO write more!

Reviewer: foreverstrange
Date: 07/23/06 9:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

lol love it...but..what would they name their child?

Reviewer: ryan_chang
Date: 07/19/06 13:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

Man that was so Good,so Sweet.I love u for writin this.

Reviewer: DanFan93
Date: 07/08/06 18:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great Job!! Update as soon as you can!!!

Reviewer: oliverps
Date: 06/07/06 0:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wonderful! 10/10

Reviewer: mrsnorbert
Date: 06/05/06 14:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love it1 please make sequels.

Reviewer: mrsnorbert
Date: 06/05/06 14:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love it1 please make sequels.

Reviewer: RonLover123
Date: 06/01/06 19:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

HAH its funny=)
Cute Story

Reviewer: RonLover123
Date: 06/01/06 19:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

HAH its funny=)
Cute Story

Reviewer: Mis Granger
Date: 05/19/06 17:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was so cute! love it continue!

Reviewer: Clarena
Date: 04/22/06 15:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aw, this story is really sweet! ^^

Reviewer: darklordsnightmare
Date: 04/21/06 20:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ha!!!! Really cute.I like it.10/10

Reviewer: The psyco marauder
Date: 04/21/06 20:10
Chapter: Chapter 1

I liked the end, it was funny and cute. This was a very good fic. Write more pleeeeeeeeeease.*does puppy eyes*

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