Reviewer: EatMyPixieDust
Date: 08/10/11 17:08
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

Hilarious, witty, extremely creative, and just the right amount of sarcastic fluff. Now, I don't normally support Dramione, but this is the exception. I laughed the whole way through, bravo.

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 09/27/08 14:56
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

excellent poem! im a poet myself .. although ive never really enjoyed free verse but i love the sarcasm and wit in yours. also unlike some other readers, i could see the sarcasm in draco's "romantic" stanza and knew he didnt mean it. i was blindsided when u said they were married bcuz id assumed it was pre-relationship until the end. (however i had just read yr fairytale fic the day bfore so i wasnt completely shocked.) keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I'm afraid life has made me rather cynical, so I'm glad to see that the sarcasm was still recognizable. I just love Draco's attitude.

Reviewer: Indigoenigma
Date: 04/03/08 19:50
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

Ah, that was definitely an interesting little poem. I rather liked how Malfoy's sardonic attitude was apparent throughout, though especially in the beginning. I also enjoyed the stanza of Hermione's that rhymed. Perhaps it was just me, but I kind of hoped that her other stanzas would rhyme as well, just to really offset them from Malfoy's. I was certainly not disappointed by the fact that they didn't rhyme, though.

Nice job!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I admit I originally had many of Hermione's responses in rhyme, however, with the words I wanted to use it came out too sing-song like and wound up being distracting, so I switched to free verse (which I'm more comfortable with anyway). Thanks again.

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 03/25/08 10:21
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

Wow, coppercurls, this is one stunningly great story.

Both characters are perfectly in character. I liked the sarcastic wit that Draco had, it was refresing! I am so used to the dark, angsty Dramione story that yours seems to be the light of the day, and all the others the darkness of the night. You managed to make them believable and still be a cheerful story!

Your poetry was also very well done. I have never read a Dramione poem before, so this was an excellent change. My favourite lines were:

Because, frankly it’s insulting to both of our
Levels of intelligence, or at least mine.


That was so very Draco, and this:

You really are despicable at times.
However I will concede to your point
About the rhyme scheme which seems
To be rather juvenile in retrospect.
But you still haven’t fulfilled the assignment.


It is most like Hermione to scold him about not fulfilling the assignment.

Great job, this was truly great!

-Haylee

Author's Response: Thank you for all the kind words! I know what you mean about the angsty! Dramiones, I personally find all the fun in the pairing to be in the banter! They are so funny when they start sniping at each other. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: R_Ravenclaw
Date: 03/21/08 11:28
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

Even though I'm a die-hard R/Hr fan, I thought this was cute. Draco seemed really IC, as did Hermione. I loved Hermione's rhyming verse scolding him about how he needs to sound more poetic. The only problem I had was how abrupt Draco's shift from sarcasm to love poem was. It just seemed surprising to find out they were married. But maybe I was just being oblivious! >.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I suppose that Draco's switch may have seemed abrupt, however, I always hear it as sarcastic more than romantic. In fact, I wrote it rather as a farce and bad hodgepodge of romantic poetry rather than something to be taken seriously. To me, the most touching part (by Draco) is only in his last poem. The rest are simply bantering and teasing. Perhaps that is only me being cynical, which is why the transition seemed abrupt, but I hope that clarified it a little!

Reviewer: SpottedOwl
Date: 08/28/07 18:19
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

hehehe. Loved it! I didn't see the whole "married" thing coming, and boy was it a shock! I was like, "wait, they're married?" But Draco's "goddess" poem was so like him, sweet and romantic but sarcastic at the end! One of the funniest Hr/D fics I've ever read!!

****SpottedOwl

Author's Response: Thank you very much for all your kind words. I have to admit I was intending to broadside people with their affair, so I'm rather gratified you didn't see it coming. Anyway, you have to love Draco, especially when he's trying to be sincere (it doesn't always work very well, does it?).

Reviewer: Greenelfhpfan
Date: 06/15/07 13:40
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

I have to tell you that I don't usually read Hermione/Draco, but it was good...If I am correct in saying this, I believe that was actually the first one I've ever read and I have been reading for quite a while. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks very much for the kind words! I know a lot of people don't like the pairing, but I feel like they work well together if well written.

Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 05/28/07 19:05
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

AWWWWW!!!!!!!! That was soo cute :) *~*CowGirlHPFan

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Babieblonde5629
Date: 05/28/07 18:05
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

that was awesome


Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: crazy_purple_hp_freak
Date: 03/11/07 10:07
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

That was very different to anything else that I've read! Very refreshing too! I love the way that it starts off my allowing us to believe that the two of them actually hate each other. My favourite part is –

"Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Poetry is annoying,
And so are you."


It seems so childish and yet so “Malfoy” at the same time. Great poem! I’ll be sure to check out your other stuff!
~Suzie


Author's Response: Thanks! As a devoted D/Hr shipper, I think I had more fun writing this than just about anything else- I love it when they bicker like six year olds. *grins sheepishly* And that really is my favorite part too. Thanks again!

Reviewer: dollfaceDISASTER
Date: 01/06/07 21:38
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

that was so adorble. I loved it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: SingingBird
Date: 01/05/07 19:09
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

I don't know if this was supposed to make me laugh, but it did. I liked the retorts they made to each other. In fact, I liked the whole poem. :)

Author's Response: Yes, it was supposed to make you laugh! Or at least listening to two people bicker like that tends to make me laugh... So I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: cammi
Date: 12/16/06 0:34
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

Oh my god...I loved it. Fantastic work!

Author's Response: Thanks and glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: tonksosme
Date: 11/14/06 20:36
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

Awwwwwwwwwwwww!I love it! and i don't even ship Hermione/Draco!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it works for people who don't usually ship my OTP... I appreciate the review!

Reviewer: Celebwen
Date: 11/02/06 2:05
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

I HATE Hermione/Draco shippings.......
and yet this was good. Very good. I liked it. I loved how it went from malicious to condescending to teasing to adoring. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I know a lot of people don't like Hr/D because it is always presented so implausibly, but if you give the relationship a chance to mature (very slowly) it can be a lot of un to play with. They are so funny when they argue. So thanks again!

Reviewer: Sai
Date: 10/09/06 14:48
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

usually i dont prefer H/D fics, but this was actually pretty good. I only wish that it was longer though.......

Author's Response: oops, double post. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Sai
Date: 10/09/06 14:47
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

usually i dont prefer H/D fics, but this was actually pretty good. I only wish that it was longer though.......

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I admit I was afraid that if I made it too long I would just lose people's interest, but I will definately keep that in mind!

Reviewer: grangergurl
Date: 09/30/06 23:06
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

Oh, this is so sweet, but only one thing confuses me. Did they get married some time between letters or were they married at the beginning? A bit hard to tell, but otherwise it was beautiful. Completely delightful, even. More than a one-time read!!

Author's Response: This is a series written on Valentines Day, during the course of the day. So yes, they were already married. But that really is no reason for the dynamic between them to change too drastically. Thanks for the review and glad you liked it!

Reviewer: GreyLady
Date: 08/21/06 21:48
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

Really, I have no complaints except that I wish that there had been more. I think the effect of the piece as a whole would have been better with even more build-up. But that's irrelevant now, so don't worry. It was lovely and witty and I loved it. (Even though I don't like dramione at all!) So congratulations are in order. *congratulates* I'll be looking forward to any of your future writings.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. I was afraid that if I stretched it out too long it would lose some readers intrest, particularly if they were not fond of the ship. I really just meant it to be a bit of a lighthearted joke. Thanks again.

Reviewer: comewhatmay
Date: 08/21/06 20:28
Chapter: You are insulting my delicate feelings again.

aww i loved this one so sweet i love hr/d stories and poems keep up the good work!


Author's Response: Thanks, I'm always glad to get another D/Hr shipper on my side!

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