Reviews For Lost
Reviewer: lupinluver
Date: 02/02/07 20:28
Chapter: A poem for my greatest love

WOW! there are no other words to describe what an incredible writter you are. it was fantastic! i simply LOVED it ! never give up writting ur amazing
~lupinluver~

Author's Response: Thank you very much :-)

Reviewer: Crazy Rat
Date: 08/01/06 23:08
Chapter: A poem for my greatest love

I'd love to have a guy write something like that to me. Hermione'd better appreciate it. :-)

Author's Response: :-)

Reviewer: SarahGitty
Date: 07/18/06 19:17
Chapter: A poem for my greatest love

This is.... amazing. I love 'A sea of chocolate, I'm drowning in your eyes.... Intelligent perfection.'
Great work. 10/10!

Author's Response: Thanks Sarah :-)

Reviewer: Lilypudding
Date: 02/25/06 8:10
Chapter: A poem for my greatest love

Ooh, I really liked this! The food analogies really made me smile, and were very Ron-like. It actually made me hungry as I read it, which tells you that you have excellent description! I want to make a review that rhymes, But I don't really have the time, So let me tell you this first, This review quenched both my hunger and thirst, For poetry of the very best kind! Ok, so I'm not the best at poetry, but I can distinguish a good poem when I read it and that was a GOOD poem! Delicious!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. That what so funny, I can't stop smiling :-)

Reviewer: bredalot
Date: 02/16/06 20:56
Chapter: A poem for my greatest love

Nice. I absolutely love the line "Parchment and tangerine My Amortentia is you." It's brilliant. Not sure I like all the food analogies, though. There are just too many! But still, very cute.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'm glad you liked that line, it's one of my favourites.

As for the food, it's because I wanted to find something Ron could be familiar with and food was just the answer;-)

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