Reviews For Fading Into Grey
Reviewer: MissPurplePen
Date: 11/05/06 19:46
Chapter: Chapter One - October 1970

Yaayyy!!! Chapter seven in queue...I'm SO EXCITED!!! [Begins giggling uncontrollably] Let me go calm myself down...can't wait!!

Author's Response: YAY! ***giggles with you*** I also wanted to let you know that Chapter 8 is flowing like MAD and you will not have to wait near as long for it. Thanks for checking back!!!! <3

Reviewer: TrueMarauder
Date: 11/02/06 14:12
Chapter: Chapter One - October 1970

I looked all over for your name in the Quicksilver Quill compo! I hope winners weren't chosen for votes, or I feel so guilty for not voting.

I'm sure all your fans here will work to help you be recognised by the wider public by PUTTING THIS STORY ON THEIR FAVOURITES! Right guys? And girls? Everyone?!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh, yeah: can't wait to read chapter 7 :)

Author's Response: Awww thanks, TM. Just to let you know, I've sent CHAPTER 7 to MNFF so it's in the que. =D Thanks for the comment!!! <3

Reviewer: Magical_Lily
Date: 10/29/06 12:52
Chapter: Chapter Six - December 1971

poor trixie
evil Woman
cant wait for more
is lily goign to make an apperance

Author's Response: Hello ML, thanks for stopping by and commenting. =D I just sent Chapter 7 to the que here at MNFF so look for it soon. And yes, I do believe Miss Evans does make a very small apperance in this chapter along with a few others... Thanks again! <3

Reviewer: TrueMarauder
Date: 10/19/06 11:10
Chapter: Chapter One - October 1970

99% complete! AHHHHHHH!!!! You're holding me on a thread now, I can't take the tension. I am so very excited.

I think mourning time is over for the puppy, but I can't wait to see if Sirius is brave enough to tell his friends about it.

I think I'm getting really hyper now though. So I'll probably stop now before I go through the great one thing.

Reviewer: HalfBloodPrincess7
Date: 10/14/06 10:43
Chapter: Chapter Six - December 1971

A powerful story. It's just amazing. You made a very sympathetic character out of Sirius Black. It's a nice twist that you added with the whole Sirius doesn't hate Regulus thing and is just trying to protect him. Brilliant! Also, I love how you are slowly making Sirius, Remus, Peter, and James friends. :) Good luck with the rest, and I'll without a doubt read the rest.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comment. I've really been in a slump lately with this story and just recently got working on it again. Comments like this really get me motivated! Chapter 7 is now nearly 99% complete and I will be sending it to my beta within the next few days. Thanks again for reading!!! <3

Reviewer: wildmagic
Date: 10/11/06 18:42
Chapter: Chapter Six - December 1971

poor them they loved the dog and then momy dearest killed her
write moree soon

Author's Response: Chapter 7 is nearly 99% complete and I will be sending it to my beta within the next few days. Thanks again for reading!!! <3

Reviewer: TrueMarauder
Date: 10/11/06 15:13
Chapter: Chapter One - October 1970

ah! I feel so guilty! I haven't reviewed for so long! I wouldn't be suprised if you don't remember me!
I am ex uk_rulz. Remember, the faithful supporter of the past. I will return to review practically everytime I go on-line. (i haven't gone on for a while).

Please forgive me, great one.

P.S. I love your fanfic!

Author's Response: Haha don't feel guilty! Chapter 7 is nearly 99% complete and I will be sending it to my beta within the next few days. Thanks again for reading!!! <3

Reviewer: Padfoot is MINE
Date: 10/02/06 10:15
Chapter: Chapter Six - December 1971

This story has been on my favorites list for a long time and i haven't reviewed it...but I love it, the characters aren't OOC at all, and overall, it's just really great. PLEASE update soon!

Author's Response: Chapter 7 is nearly 99% complete and I will be sending it to my beta within the next few days. Thanks again for reading!!! <3

Reviewer: Big_Kelpie
Date: 10/01/06 17:48
Chapter: Chapter Six - December 1971

May i ask you to update soon(like in less than 3 days)?

Author's Response: Chapter 7 is nearly 99% complete and I will be sending it to my beta within the next few days. Thanks again for reading!!! <3

Reviewer: AKA294
Date: 09/29/06 15:53
Chapter: Chapter Six - December 1971

OMG she is EVIL.... I am sooo sorry for sirius... and I keep reading and thinking during those lines about Bella killing him, and that's just sorta weird to think about... This is GREAT!!! I can't wait to read some more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to comment! Comments give me reason to write more! Yay! Chapter 7 is nearly 99% complete and I will be sending it to my beta within the next few days. Thanks again for reading!!! <3

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 09/26/06 21:19
Chapter: Chapter Six - December 1971

Heres what I think of you story:


Story Title: Fadeing into Grey
Author: PuckerUpRemus
Category: Marauder Era
Link to Story on MNFF: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=44498
Reason for Nomination:

Ah...Fading into Grey...the first story I ever reviewed (I think) and the first story that made it onto my favorite list. Fading into Grey is a very interesting story. It takes the relationship of two brother, Sirius Black and Regulus, A relationship that most of us thinks was non-existent and turns it around. It is exactly how I pichered young Sirius to be like with his brother, responsible, playful and nice. I love how at he beginning of the story Sirius loves his family and like ever one else thinks that muggles are bad. Because I'm sure that is what Sirius thought at first. And he was lucky enough to have good friends that showed him different. What really made want to read this story was the summery:

Do you think it’s easy to run from your family?


When Sirius Black is ten years old, everything in his life is black and white. He is a wizard. He is the heir to his most noble house. He is eager to please and willing to be everything his parents have ever dreamt for him.


Then, at Hogwarts with the ability to explore the world differently he starts to question what he has been taught his whole life and finds that even though he is a brilliant wizard and studies and most things come easy to him there is still so much he needs to learn about life outside of Grimmauld Place.


Follow along with me as Sirius Black’s world starts Fading Into Grey.


Possibly the best summery I have read on mugglenet fanfiction, powerful and dark. I really can't describe how good the story is, it is astonishing! I can hardly believe that J.K. Rowling herself had not written this story, it is amazing!



Author's Response: Why thank you! <3

Reviewer: mgle_teacher
Date: 09/14/06 22:59
Chapter: Chapter Six - December 1971

I love your story. =]
I specially like when you write Regulus and Sirius together. I totally imagined them being close - growing up as each other's support in an abusive home. I wonder...do you plan on explaining the rift that later happens between them?
It would be awesome to read. You have a great story here...can't wait for you to update again.

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for the comment! I love getting comments, it gives me hope that people are reading! =oD Yes, I do plan on taking this story all the way thru to that fateful day that SIrius runs away. *sniff-sniff* I am currently working (very slowly) on Chapter 7. I am not in need of ideas but TIME in which to write them all down! I'd say it's approxiately 60% complete. Thanks again! -gina (PUR) PS - Sometimes I post snippets and silly stuff on my LiveJournal, and I've actually fast forwarded to something I wrote years ago that will most likely go into FIG later on....read at your own risk!!! But there are other silly Sirius stories up on there too. Let me know if you like them! Laterzzzzz

Reviewer: MissPurplePen
Date: 09/09/06 20:58
Chapter: Chapter Six - December 1971

Wow...you are truly a brilliant writer.

Firstly, I am in love with all of the dialogue. I also really admire and enjoy your presentations of Sirius' thoughts on how his bedroom and four-poster at Hogwarts are both so different from other boys' his age...I thought that was beautiful writing.

I'm also at a loss for words at how you incorporated the Snuffles bit...and while it was so tragic, I think the drowning of the puppy at the end of the chapter was a very good bit of story-telling...even if I am choking up at the moment.

I'm also loving the developing conflict between Regulus and Sirius...I can definitely start to see that they are growing apart in their ideas, which is so sad considering the closeness they will soon lose...

And finally, James giving Sirius that camera was just the icing on the cake...again, you are brilliant...

Author's Response: Hello! Well, I LOVE writing dialog! It's the easiest part for me! Thank you for taking the time to comment and to say all the wonderful things you said, it is truely appreciated. I love knowing that people are really actually reading all these words I'm throwing together! Chapter 7 is coming, slowly, but it's coming. I'm not lacking ideas but time in which to actually WRITE THEM DOWN! *giggles* Soon tho, soon! Thanks again! -gina (PUR) PS - Check my LJ if you want to read more. I've got silly snippets on there that you may enjoy. =oD

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 09/07/06 20:29
Chapter: Chapter Six - December 1971

it's been 50 days scence you've updated... :( why?? are you abanding the story?? pleasepleaseplease tell me you arent!!! please!! your the first story ive ever reviewed!! the first story that was ever on my fav. list!! please update!! i miss this story!! *tear*

Author's Response: Hey hey! Nope, not abandoning the story, I've just been really busy. I'm not lacking ideas at all, just time in which to write it all down. Chapter 7 is probably about 60% complete. I promise, it's coming!!! =oD Thanks for checking up! - gina

Reviewer: wildmagic
Date: 09/01/06 20:15
Chapter: Chapter Six - December 1971

i hate his mother alot i hate her so much i love the brotherly love so cute write mroe soon

Author's Response: Thank you for the comment! More coming "soon", I promise! =oD

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 08/19/06 14:47
Chapter: Chapter Six - December 1971

*sigh* come on!! i think im going to die if you dont update soon!! i miss you story! the first on I had ever reviewed and the first fav. story on my list! only now i wanna change my name too! i wanna chang it to...padfootismysexybeast...hehehe only i dont think im going to...well any ways i hope that you update soon!!

padfootnflawks (what was i thinking when i names myself that??)

Author's Response: Please don't die. =( Chapter 7 is coming...just slowly! I want to make sure it's right. =) Thanks for commenting! Keeps me going!!! <3

Reviewer: GiNGeR HaiReD GiRL
Date: 08/11/06 14:49
Chapter: Chapter Six - December 1971

This story is one of my absolute favorites! I love how Regulus and Sirius are friends and I love how you portray everyone. This is one of the best fanfics I have read and I am suprised that there are only 71 reviews! I don't know how anyone could write a negitive review. Two thumbs up!!

Author's Response: I <3 you, Ginger Haired Girl, and I don't even know you. Thank you so much for the review and compliments! I've been struggling with getting this fic out there for people to read, but I must say I'm so thrilled to have the people that do comment, makes my <3 squeeee! *giggles* Thanks for reviewing, keeps me going! Chapter 7 is coming along, slowly, but it's coming along. There are some "semi" major things that are going to happen so I want to make sure I get them right! Thanks for reading!!! <3

Reviewer: padfootnflawks
Date: 08/10/06 13:38
Chapter: Chapter Six - December 1971

Update soon!!!

Author's Response: Chapter 7 is coming...soon, I swear! It's just coming a little slower than some because some semi-major things start to happen so I want to make sure I get them right! Thanks for checking in and commenting, keeps me going! <3

Reviewer: Hermione_Rocks
Date: 08/07/06 11:23
Chapter: Chapter Six - December 1971

Aww...the doggy's dead. :( I thought that James giving Sirius the camera was really sweet. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting! Feedback! I THRIVE on feedback! Chappy 7 is coming, but slower than I'd like! Ugh! Thanks for reading! <3

Reviewer: Evans and Potter
Date: 08/03/06 15:50
Chapter: Chapter Six - December 1971

Great cliff-hanger! Can't wait for your next post. I also love how your chapters are long. Keep it up! Your idea of how Regulus and Sirius get along was a great idea. (P.S.- The title is cool)

Author's Response: Thank you for the comment! You know, I really struggled with the title for this. Titles and chapter names are so hard for me! So, I'm happy you like it! Chapter 7 is coming, just slower than I'd like! Ugh! Thanks for reading!!! <3

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