Reviews For Fading Into Grey
Reviewer: Kimberley
Date: 02/20/06 17:08
Chapter: Chapter One - October 1970

*squeee* I found you! I know you said you'd posted here, but I didn't realise it was in the exact same category. *squirly fangirl moment* Ooh looks like folk are liking it so far, good for you hon! *huggles*

Author's Response: Oooh, Kimmy, look. Look at all the spaces! Oh no! Look at them! They are everywhere because it's MY WAY! *gigglesnort* This wonderful writer of TUoBD is my beta...and a great beta she is. If you haven't already, (and you love Sirius) read her story! It's fab-o-tastic! Thanks sis! *wink*

Reviewer: chudley_cannons_keeper
Date: 02/20/06 16:59
Chapter: Chapter Two - December 31, 1970

Wow, still enjoying it. Oh my god, amazing. I love your ability to say so much in such a small paragraph. I can't wait until the chapter that Sirius decides he doesn't agree with his family's beliefs... I'm sure it will be a long way off, but I already have confidence that it will be beautifully written.

Author's Response: Wow back at you! Thank you for the compliments. Sometimes I feel like I'm rambling in a paragraph but you give me confindence when you say I say alot in them. All I can say is "Awww shucks" and *blush* Thanks for reading & commenting! Hope you enjoy what's coming! =)

Reviewer: nenya
Date: 02/20/06 12:00
Chapter: Chapter Two - December 31, 1970

I'm have to say, this next chapter has been as enjoyable as the last. Muggle-hunting! Just think! I like how you have young Sirius looking up to his father. He wouldn't have been rebelling against them just yet. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading & commenting (again)! You honestly give me a fangirl moment when I read comments like this...makes me wanna *squee*. I'm so happy you like it...it's going to get more difficult to write but hopefully you'll enjoy what coming. Thanks again!

Reviewer: chudley_cannons_keeper
Date: 02/18/06 19:32
Chapter: Chapter One - October 1970

I enjoy your take on the character of Sirius. Most people who rebel against their parents' ideals originally agreed with them. I also find your portrayal of many of these characters to be very realistic... they remind me of people I actually know. Very, very good job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment! Comments are my lifeline! I'm happy you feel the characters are realistic because that's exactly what I was trying to do. Thanks again for reading.

Reviewer: nenya
Date: 02/18/06 11:20
Chapter: Chapter One - October 1970

I really enjoyed that first chapter. You have given the characters a chilling realisim! I'm definatly looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Oooh, thank you! That is exactly what I was going for. Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: loligo8me
Date: 02/17/06 6:02
Chapter: Chapter One - October 1970

this sounds really good so far! The others have already said what I wanted to say lol. It's nice to read a story where Sirius isn't born with ideas he has later, but ideas his family shares. Good work!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I have always felt like Sirius had a love for his brother and family but ask he grew older he found out what they all believed was just so wrong. This is going to get difficult to write in the coming chapters! I just sent Chapter 3 to my beta and 2 is in the que! Thanks again for reading!

Reviewer: hp_princess
Date: 02/17/06 0:10
Chapter: Chapter One - October 1970

You do a very nice job of showing the relationship between Regulas and Sirius, well done. I also like how you potrayed his parents.... Keep up the good work. It is an interesting story. I look forward to the upcoming chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've just always wanted to read a story about Sirius's home life and I've always felt he didn't hate the Dark Arts when he was little...growing up around it he wouldn't know any difference. Chapter Two is in the que! Thanks again for reading!

Reviewer: Fraulein Weisenheimer
Date: 02/14/06 21:51
Chapter: Chapter One - October 1970

Hey you have a preety interesting story going, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Why thank you! I've just finished chapter three and shipped it off to my beta so I'll post chapter two once it's OK'd by the mods. Thank you for reading!

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