Wait... Draco can feel?!
I bet he was a cute little kid. I especially like the third verse/stanza. Great poem, great idea!
I really liked this. The way you told an intriguing story by using such great rhyme was fascinating! I can't say any more but great job!
That was awesome. I also believe that the lucius/narcissa marriage is rocky (that's what you were trying to point out in one of the verses, right?), and I loved the inherited eyes part.
YOU ARE BRILLIANT !!!! u rock twinkle
Author's Response: Thankyou Meaky. Very nice to know. But about the brilliant part, well, I've known that all along.. Just kidding! Thanks!!