I really liked this! And I did like that you included an Umbridge in there, I love when Robyn punched her. Spot? That's funny! Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! When old-Fudge's character fomed in my head, I knew he'd need an old-umbridge, so she came into the story, and I'm kinda glad she did. As for Robyn's name, it was, like Boar's, modeled after Newt Scamander's.
Cool! I like that you mentioned names that we know -- like Fudge, Umbridge, Scamander, and Mallfouy. I like your explanation for how the Mallfouys became rich.
The whole idea of a Sphinx Science War reminded me of the debates about Darwinism that took place around that time period, and the claims about the existence of a sphinx and dragons reminded me of the "sightings" of the Loch Ness monster.
But I'm also a little confused. What did Robyn do that was so bad? Why did Fudge send Umbridge to arrest her? (I'm assuming Robyn is a girl based on her reaction to the clans' attempts: "just like men" -- sorry if I'm wrong!) It just seemed a little abrupt ...
But great job on your first fanfic! Do you think you'll write more?
Author's Response: Sorry for the late response! No one ever reviews this, so I stopped checking, and yes Robyn is a girl. I'm probably going to write a chaptered fic one DH comes out. That way I won't have to change my fic to AU halfway through the story, and the Summer will be clear of school and Homework. ^_^