Where is the Wolfstar list!?

Great story! I think this is the fourth or fifth Remus/Sirius I've read of yours, and I love them all. Everyone had been different, but real. Keep it up!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the ones you've read and I hope that you read the rest. Thanks so much for reading!

Slian! So, I got around to finally reviewing, didn’t I? And, more surprising still, it was one of your Wolfstar ones! Go me! Okay, but seriously? The first thing that gets me in the point of view, and the tense. I love it. It’s different, but by adding the dialogue from the start you’ve made it comfortable.

“He can’t get Remus out of his mind, doesn’t want to.” I love this line. Because it’s so true! I think you’ve reflected upon the puppy love well enough, here. I like the simplicity, and yet it’s so complicated because he can’t get him out of his head.

“Sirius moves away a bit. “What’s wrong?” he asks, the relationship new enough to cause him doubt.” I think I like this line. A lot. Because, no matter what type of relationship there’s always that nervousness, and the doubt of the others person’s feelings. I like this line, I think because it signals the early stages of the Wolfstar shipping, and it’s nice seeing people unsure and awkward, sometimes.

“He’s a half-blood with a Muggle father;” About this fact – Whether or not Remus knows is isn’t really the question. I’m sure he could have found it out somehow. I just don’t think that Snape would appreciate people knowing he’s a half-blood – he’s like Voldemort, remember? Pure and proud of it. I think that if Remus knew, perhaps he’d be a little more secretive about it. He’s talking about feeling the pain Snape’s going through and yet he tells Sirius that could be potentially dangerous to his life in a crowd of death eaters. It could just be me. Remus is OOC, I just think that shred of information doesn’t quite fit.

“They all laugh; the memory of Professor Slughorn’s expression when the cauldron exploded, spewing it’s rainbow colored contents all over the walls, priceless. The look on his face when he had find the little rocket that had done it though....” Sorry about the long quote. I like the proud tone this has. It’s very Marauderish. And the practical joke sounds very imaginative – have you written a fic about it? I’d love to see it. And the insertion of the canon detail, as always, makes it more believable. I loved it at the start, with the inner thoughts and the dialogue line from Snape’s Worst Memory, too. I think it connects it to the canon stories, when you include stuff like that,

“A/N: This is number 81 on the Wolfstar list: “Because Sirius didn't notice ANY of the girls in the penseive scene.”” I think you’ve justified this line well, even though it seems slightly comical. There’s nothing really comical about the roots of this story – it’s real. It’s life. It’s love, and it’s wonderful. And I think I really do need to go see this list, and I think you should most definitely write out your justification for the whole list, mate, because I loved this.

this is good. Please be my Beta. Please!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed, and I'm flattered that you'd like me to look over something for you, but please make requests through the beta boards to find a beta that'll really work for you. Thanks for reading!