Reviewer: harry_siriusly_rocks
Date: 05/21/06 17:07
Chapter: The Wronski Feint The Ronski Faint

lol... i love the last line! very good! write more, please!

Reviewer: born4purple
Date: 05/08/06 9:08
Chapter: The Wronski Feint The Ronski Faint

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! cute and fluffy for me but good none the less will you plz add somthing like hermione being abducted by aliens and ron going on a journey through space with ginny and harry to save her?? great story update fast

Author's Response: Haha, I'm not sure if I can squeeze aliens and space into the storyline I've already worked out, but it sounds like an interesting idea nonetheless! Updates to come shortly..

Reviewer: ginny_babe92
Date: 05/05/06 22:19
Chapter: The Wronski Feint The Ronski Faint

Great! I loved the last line lol. Your description of the ball was brilliant, and I love the idea of Ron's robes making him faint at the sound of Hermione's name. Great work!

Author's Response: Why, thank you. I hoped it would be funny. More to come soon!

Reviewer: Identically Opposite
Date: 05/03/06 20:53
Chapter: The Wronski Feint The Ronski Faint

Hahahahaha! Great! The room sounded simply beautiful! I especially loved the part where Ron's robes were jinxed to make him faint! I couldn't stop laughing, and again my dad thought I was insane.... *cough*... Lovely story though, update soon please.

Author's Response: Oh, that's terrific to hear... I mean, that you liked it the ballroom and found Ron's robes funny, not that your dad thinks you're insane. And don't worry, I'll try to submit a new chapter by the end of next week so that it'll be up by June. Happy reading!

Reviewer: Tay73
Date: 04/30/06 23:18
Chapter: The Talkboard

nice scheme. points for ginny

Author's Response: I certainly agree. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 04/26/06 19:15
Chapter: The Talkboard

ack for some reason the rest of my review got deleted. weird. anyway, the above line was awesome and I'll definetly come back to read 4 in June! a gazillion out of ten.

Author's Response: Yes, definitely definitely come back in June!

Author's Response: By the way - CONGRATULATIONS! (And thank you...) You're my 50th reviewer!

Reviewer: saveginny417
Date: 04/26/06 19:13
Chapter: The Talkboard

OMG that was absobloodylutely (My Fair Lady! YAY!) brilliant. loved the bit about the dress robes and the lead singer Puck Goodfellow. (Shakespeare!) "Floor, meet Ron. Ron, meet floor. Oh, you've already met?"

Author's Response: Woohoo! Someone who understands my references! ...It's moments like these that make nuanced writing worthwhile.

Reviewer: meg the snowflake
Date: 04/22/06 8:55
Chapter: The Wronski Feint The Ronski Faint

This is brillant! I loved the last part when hermione messed up :) well i hope you write more soon.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. Check back in about a month, and hopefully the next chapter will be up!

Reviewer: Amianha
Date: 04/22/06 1:17
Chapter: The Wronski Feint The Ronski Faint

Lol, I love the last line...

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you do. Hope you'll be back for Chapter 4 in June.

Reviewer: axelvaz
Date: 04/21/06 16:01
Chapter: The Wronski Feint The Ronski Faint

That was unexpected. I liked it. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Again - Thank you. I'll certainly try!!

Reviewer: axelvaz
Date: 04/21/06 16:01
Chapter: The Wronski Feint The Ronski Faint

That was unexpected. I liked it. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'll certainly try!

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 04/19/06 15:06
Chapter: The Wronski Feint The Ronski Faint

AHAHAHAHAHAH! This is hilarious! Muse Sublime, meet Brilliance. Oh, you've already met? I loved the 'illicit smuggling of sequins' and Seamus and Dean putting on lipstick. The last sentence is great. How can something be this cute and mushy, believable, and hilarious all at once?

Author's Response: Haha... what a compliment! Thank you. I guess I wouldn't mind being friends with Brilliance, if he wouldn't mind being friends with me. I only hope he'll be around for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Schmerg_The_Impaler
Date: 04/19/06 15:02
Chapter: D Words are Dangerous

So funny and so adorable! This is just like Ron. "Gabriel? No. Um... he smells..." I liked all the names you made up for guys, and the removable post-it notes? TOO FUNNY. I can just imagine Ron abusing the bludgers, too... Ron reminds me so much of my friend.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you had a fun time with Ron. Goodness knows I certainly did. During the fight section, I found myself constantly admonishing Ron, "Just tell her already!" ...And then I'd remember that I was the reason he wasn't telling her. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Monster Book of Monsters
Date: 04/19/06 0:12
Chapter: The Wronski Feint The Ronski Faint

Awww yay! Been waiting for you to update. Wasn't disappointed. Love the "Wandflower" name. Very creative! Looking forward to chapter 4. I'm a total sucker for R/H stories...

Author's Response: The funny thing is... I had originally intended to name the ballroom the Sparaxis Ballroom, sparaxis being the formal name for wandflower (yes, it actually is a flower). But I figured that readers would simply assume I made up the name and not look up Sparaxis to get the reference. Anyway, that's not important! I'm glad you like the chapter.

Reviewer: Tink
Date: 04/17/06 17:51
Chapter: The Wronski Feint The Ronski Faint

Oh man. I just about died reading this chapter. Where to begin? Okay, the bewitched dress robes were ingenious. Classic Fred and George. I loved the description of Hermione's dress and the Wandflower Ballroom. It really made me want to go there because it sounded so pretty. And of course, Hermione's little slip-up at the end of the chapter was pretty hilarious. I'm pretty sure that would be something I would do myself, because I always flub my words. I'm really anxious for the next chapter, so you'd better hurry up and post it!

Author's Response: This chapter, too, was partially written from personal experience. But I won't delve into that. I'm beginning to think that I should post a link to a diagram of the Wandflower. As for the next chapter, I'm sorry to say it won't be up until June. I'm in the middle of exam right now, so I only have time to respond to reviews at the moment. But definitely be sure to check back. The next chapter will be posted, and it WILL be JUICY!

Reviewer: Tink
Date: 04/17/06 17:23
Chapter: D Words are Dangerous

Awww, that was so wonderfully awkward and adorable at the same time. I loved the argument that they had in the beginning- typical Ron and Hermione. And poor Ginny's desperate attempts to get them together didn't really work out the way she planned. Anyway, great chapter and I'm really excited to read the next one!

Author's Response: Haha, that argument actually reminds me of the way my boyfriend and I fight. Maybe that's why it was so easy for me to write that section! But even if Ginny's plan didn't work out the way she thought it would, it still worked out nonetheless - just in a different way. Ginny, to me, has always been a smart cookie. She may not have predicted everything that was going to happen, but she knows essentially what's going on.

Reviewer: Tink
Date: 04/17/06 17:03
Chapter: The Talkboard

I randomly came across this fic while just surfing through the site, and I have to say that it was the title that caught my eye. Although I hate to admit it, I'm a sucker for any romantic comedy, especially involving my absolute favorite couple: Ron and Hermione. So I decided to give it a try, and I must say, I love it! I love the entire concept of Hogwarts holding a Sadie Hawkins dance (er, ball...). I think it'll be really interesting to find out if Hermione decides to ask Ron and how she does it. I also love their relationship. They like each other, and they've admitted it to themselves, but they still haven't fully crossed over and told each other how they really feel. I'm also really glad that Harry and Ginny got back together, because they are just so adorable! I'm anxious to see what kind of scheme she's concocting. And one more thing: I love the overall tone of this story. I don't know why, but I really like the style that it's written in. Great job, and I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Well, I'm certainly glad that you stumbled across my fiction! And don't worry, I'm a sucker for romantic comedies, too. And you'll see in my profile that Ron and Hermione are without a doubt my reason for writing. I'm so glad you like the Sadie Hawkins idea. At first, I wanted to write about a date auction, but the mods said that might be unrealistic. So I tried to come up with something else that would have the same potential for humor and originality. That's why it means so much to me to read that people like the Sadie Hawkins idea. And, yes, I couldn't write a Ron/Hermione fiction without having Harry and Ginny together. To me, R/Hr and H/G go together like peanut butter and jelly! You know what I'm talking about...

Reviewer: shellabella818
Date: 04/17/06 10:59
Chapter: The Wronski Feint The Ronski Faint

please please plase PLEASE please double triple please! keep writing!!!please please plaes plaes lpa !

i love this storays direction. SO PLESE PLEASE PLASE!

Author's Response: Haha, no need to beg, really! As I've said to other reviewers, I'm currently very busy with exams and the like. BUT - I intend to make good on my promise to have the next chapter posted by June. So be sure to check back then!

Reviewer: winky123
Date: 04/12/06 9:33
Chapter: The Wronski Feint The Ronski Faint

Fabulous chapter! I was grinning most of the way through. I loved the 'Leaning tower of Weasley' hair, oh and while I remember in that same line you have an extra 'a' that shouldn't be there, anyway, moving onwards. The 'illicitly smuggled sequins' had me laughing quite hard too. The Ronski Faint is a really clever idea. I was so excited because I picked up on what was going on before 'Harry' realised. :) My most favourite line in this chapter had to be “Oh, Ron, I would love you...' it was very sweet. Also I just want to say how spectacular the ballroom was described; the picture in my head was wonderful. However, if it were me, I think I would be worrying about the running water making me need to pee lol...note to self: don’t say pee...(oops I did it again) :D Fantastic work!

Author's Response: You did?! Hooray! I was really hoping that the reader got the the "Aha!" moment before Harry did. It gives you a real sense of sleuth-like satisfaction, doesn't it? And about the ballroom... I must say that this chapter made me feel very much like Jo Rowling herself. I had to map out and draw a good many things to make everything make sense in my head. Although I'm unsure if I still have it, I had constructed a pretty elaborate set-up / floorplan for the ballroom. It helped to pin down the visual details and to get myself excited enough to write about it.

Reviewer: winky123
Date: 04/12/06 9:08
Chapter: D Words are Dangerous

Well they totally ruined Ginny's plans, but they also made up by themselves so that was good. I definitely liked the post it note idea. Glue would be a bit uncomfortable after all. Now I am just left wondering what they are going to wear! I mean Fred and George bought Ron new dress robes didn't they? I hope so ... :)

Author's Response: You seem to be inside my mind somehow - so strange! Yes, Fred and George are "nice" enough to buy Ron new robes. I'm sure that, by now, you know why I write "nice" instead of nice.

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