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Name: GinnyPottergirl (Signed) · Date: 12/12/06 15:25 · For: Morning After
Aaawww, that is so sweet! Please update!

Name: GinnyPottergirl (Signed) · Date: 12/12/06 15:13 · For: The Dream
Creepy dream. Was it there for a reason, or just to be there? 'Cause it was really awful! (Not the writing, the dream itself)
Good ending, though.

Name: GinnyPottergirl (Signed) · Date: 12/11/06 22:50 · For: The Party
Hooray, they won't be in constant danger! Yes!

Name: GinnyPottergirl (Signed) · Date: 12/11/06 22:43 · For: The Family

Name: GinnyPottergirl (Signed) · Date: 12/11/06 22:39 · For: The Engagement
Yay! Love it!!!! : D

Name: GinnyPottergirl (Signed) · Date: 12/11/06 22:34 · For: Prologue
Good overview.

Name: pandafan81 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/06 1:24 · For: Morning After
I have to confess, the characterization in this is a bit off. Hermione sounds rather materialistic and a little to obsessed about her looks in this chapter. Although I like that she and Ginny want to share their clothes. I also don't really see Ginny as that worried about her clothing either, especially since she has another year of Hogwarts uniforms in store for her. I also don't think Harry would say that he wants Ginny to "have all the pretty little things", I understand the sentiment- money is no object to him and he wants to share it. But I feel like that statement is rather demeaning. Like he'll have a pet to pamper rather than a wife who is an equal. I know this sounds rather critical, but characterization is key and I feel like it's gone astray here. Otherwise I love the premise. I like the comrodery the girls are building. And I loved Ron's comment to Harry about Hermione being HIS fiance! I also liked how he put his arms around them at the end, a sign that they'll be friends forever.

Author's Response: You are right. I welcome any reviews... good or bad because they help me grow as a writer. When I look back on this story I find several things I would have changed. This is the first story I ever tried my writers hand at and I almost laugh now at how fluffy it is and you are right how materialistic Hermione sounds. But I have a little rule not to majorly change a chapter when it's done and this chapter has been done for almost a year now and it would break up the feel of the story to change anything majorly so I will have to leave it the way it is although I understand and thank you for your constant reviews. They are greatly appreciated.

Name: pandafan81 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/06 1:02 · For: The Dream
Whoa! That dream was starting to scare me! The suspense and emotions were palpable. Excellent work- best chapter yet.

Author's Response: Thanks... If you like that one you'll love the other stuff I wrote.

Name: pandafan81 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/06 0:43 · For: The Party
Very sweet. One issue though, don't you think Hermione's parent's would have told her previously that they were planning a big trip like a second honeymoon. It just seems odd that they'd tell Molly to tell her. I don't know, maybe it'd be more of a surprised if Hermione thought they were already on their trip when they showed up to surprise them. Just a thought. Anyway, I liked the chapter and I'm moving on.

Author's Response: Um... they might have but in my story they planned it last minute so they never got a chance and since they were writing to Molly they probably figured that she could tell her for them and of course they wouldn't leave without saying goodbye to their only child.

Name: pandafan81 (Signed) · Date: 06/11/06 0:21 · For: The Family
Very nice. I like how Mrs. Weasley is sad that she's an "unneeded" mother. But of course, her kids will always need her- especially when they need a babysitter!

Author's Response: Yea, they will definitely need a good babysitter. That and they will ALWAYS need their mother.

Name: pandafan81 (Signed) · Date: 06/10/06 23:59 · For: The Engagement
ahhhhh! that's so sweet!

I KNOW I have read this chapter before, but for the life of me, I can't believe I never reviewed it before. Must have gotten lost in the shuffle. Anyway, I'm glad to see there are more chapters. And I'm eagerly moving on to the next chapter.

Author's Response: It's so ok that you didn't review I'm just glad that you enjoyed it. That's why I write so that people can feel and enjoy the story.

Name: pandafan81 (Signed) · Date: 06/10/06 23:19 · For: Prologue
ahhh, you have an interesting start going here. Obviously there isn't going to be a lot of plot points in a prolouge, but you've caught my interest.

Author's Response: I'm glad I've caught your interest. That's what I wanted... lol!!!

Name: CannonChaser (Signed) · Date: 05/29/06 14:34 · For: Morning After
come on update and then i will add you ot my favorite authors and your story will be on my favorite's to!!! ! ! !! !!!

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked it.

Name: MissGinny1977 (Signed) · Date: 03/31/06 11:03 · For: Morning After
very good chapter and so sweet of harry to think of ginny and know she wouldnt accept it if he gave her the money so he gave it to hermoine to spend on ginny! very adorable and sweet!! cant wait for the next update! this is really good so far! keep up th good work

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it and I'll try to keep it up.

Name: hpnut (Signed) · Date: 03/13/06 6:28 · For: Morning After
That was a great chapter!! I like how this story is going. Keep it up and update soon.

Author's Response: Thanks!!! And I will.

Name: Hot48cricket (Signed) · Date: 03/11/06 17:30 · For: Morning After
Brilliant idea to have Harry give Hermione the money to spend on Ginny!!!! Can't wait for quiddich!!!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I've already written the quidditch chapter so I'll try and submit as quick as possible so you can read about the whole quidditch thing.

Name: MissPriss86 (Signed) · Date: 03/11/06 17:27 · For: Morning After
yay first review! first off, i wanted to say that i love where this story is going second, i think its cute how he gives it to hermione because ginny wont take it. third, i never thought of how ginny would feel if she borrowed hermiones clothes! its actually kid of sad b/c the weasleys are the nicest people ive read about, even if they are poor! -Marissa-

Author's Response: I know. I never understood why Sirius didn't leave everyone he loved (like Lupin) something. He was a very rich man but shared it with only one person who, rightfully so, was already rich. I'm glad you liked it by the way. Next chapter will be coming soon.

Name: Hot48cricket (Signed) · Date: 03/09/06 23:52 · For: The Dream
Freaky!!!!!!!!!!! It seemed so real!!! Am I glad that it was only a bad dream!! (Harry too!!) good to hear the next chapter is in queu!

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm glad you were freaked out but also know you can trust me. I promise no more chaptures like that. At least in this story. LOL!!!

Name: MissGinny1977 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/06 18:42 · For: The Dream
had me freaked there for a minute.....i was starting to turn blue from holding my breathe to find out what was happening lol good chapter cant wait for the next update.

Author's Response: LOL... I'm glad I had you there for a second but don't worry I'm not that cruel.

Name: MissPriss86 (Signed) · Date: 03/09/06 17:17 · For: The Dream
wow! i was like about to cry because i thought his dream was real...awww i like the end when he was like only a dream! 10/10 :)

Author's Response: You're so sweet. Thanks and I'm glad you liked it.

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