Reviews For Her Voice Within
Reviewer: greenbuggy6000
Date: 03/04/06 21:38
Chapter: Her Voice Within

it was so sad! i could've cried but like a TON of people were in the room and i would have been soo embarisd!! i loved it!!!

Author's Response: Hehe, thank you! I know how that feels. That's why I try and read a neutral story when I'm with other people. Otherwise I look like the idiot whose laughing at the computer, or crying at just words on the screen :P

Reviewer: expecto_patronum_this
Date: 03/04/06 17:56
Chapter: Her Voice Within

This was beautiful. I had tears in my eyes throughout the entire thing. You captured the emotions of a grieving person perfectly and ran with it. Good job. A full ten out of ten.

Author's Response: Thank you very much:) I hoped that when I did write it, at least a few people would get tears in their eyes, and that it wasn't a complete dud of a story ... it's nice to know I accomplished that.

Reviewer: PadfootBaby
Date: 02/21/06 8:23
Chapter: Her Voice Within

This is a great one-shot, one of the best I've ever read! I really like the depth you put into Adrianna, I felt like she waas a real person. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Aww, really? That means so much. I'm acctually quite please as to how this turned out. I'm glad she was realisitic. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Hilary
Date: 02/20/06 19:27
Chapter: Her Voice Within

Amazing one shot, I was looking at your other storyies and waswondering what happened to what i know true love is.. Keep up the work

Author's Response: Well it's completed, just not posted on this site. I'm beginning to revising it so I can post it on this site, so maybe within the month is should be up. Thanks.

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