Reviewer: bredalot
Date: 02/19/06 17:12
Chapter: Call Me Tonks

I want Tonks's t-shirt. Bloody brilliant. Anyway, I pretty much agree with what everyone else said. Great characterizations, and I like your style, but I kept waiting for Sirius to go, "Wait . . . Tonks? Are you Andromeda's daughter?" He wouldn't recognize her at all (even if she weren't a Metamorphmagus!), but her mother was his favorite cousin. Keep it up!

Reviewer: Starmaiden
Date: 02/14/06 19:03
Chapter: Call Me Tonks

Very, very nice. I like it a lot. In fact, I like it so much that I had better finish my own version of this story before I end up stealing your ideas! The characterization is good, the dialogue suitable -- generally very nice. No grammer mistakes, either, which drive me wild. Oh, and I really like the title. Great job, will be back for the rest!

Reviewer: Lizet M
Date: 02/14/06 18:32
Chapter: Call Me Tonks

I enjoyed it. Though, you left the whole issue of Tonks and Sirius being cousins out, which can be unique but it kind of bothers. Anyway, I am looking forward to your next chapter, so update soon. It's a very good beginning.

Reviewer: Piper Phoenix
Date: 02/13/06 22:06
Chapter: Call Me Tonks

A little confused why you left out that Tonks and Sirius are cousins...I think that is a great element in the whole Remus/Tonks relationship. I really like that Remus was interested in Tonks right away like that--that was good. Great start, I will be watching for an update!

Reviewer: Piper Phoenix
Date: 02/13/06 22:05
Chapter: Call Me Tonks

A little confused why you left out that Tonks and Sirius are cousins...I think that is a great element in the whole Remus/Tonks relationship. I really like that Remus was interested in Tonks right away like that--that was good. Great start, I will be watching for an update!

Reviewer: Sylvia Winston
Date: 02/13/06 15:48
Chapter: Call Me Tonks

I reall liked it. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: Sylvia Winston
Date: 02/13/06 15:48
Chapter: Call Me Tonks

I reall liked it. Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: petiteloupegarou
Date: 02/13/06 14:07
Chapter: Call Me Tonks

Not bad. You've got the characters started nicely. Just the one thing- Sirius and Tonks are cousins, remember? Even if they don't know each other that well, they know that they're related. You seemed to make it kind of unclear and out-of-canon when you had Sirius refer to her as "that Tonks." Otherwise, nice job!

Reviewer: rainbow_haired_auror
Date: 02/13/06 11:42
Chapter: Call Me Tonks

Wonderfull! Very well writen and the reactions where perfect. Just one question; what about her being cousins with Sirius? Not that it took anything away from the story it was still one of the best I've read!

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