Reviews For Family Obligations
Reviewer: Phoenix3
Date: 04/24/07 22:25
Chapter: Family Obligations

Hey I know you posted this story ages ago, so long that you've probably forgotten it, especially seeing as it hasn't garnered any reviews, which I find very lamentable because this was marvelous! No really, I enjoyed this one-shot. I particularly enjoyed the POV of the great-grandmother's portrait. Narcissa was pretty spot-on and I think you explained her very well. Besides that, the execution was excellent, not too frilly, good characterisation and combination of action and dialogue.

Bravo, I say!

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Under the Southern Cross by FloreatCastellum 1st-2nd Years
Rolf Scamander has ventured to a remote archipelago to study a rare and exotic...
MOMENTS OF BLISS by moonymaniac 6th-7th Years
Remus Lupin is a man with a tragic past, filled with pain, suffering and sorrow...
The Walpurgis School for Superior Children by Kerichi 3rd-5th Years
Draco Malfoy wanted to stay home, but he was sent to school instead. Lucius...
Today Will Be Better, I Swear! by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
'I'm going to miss you, Mr Ollivander,' said Luna, approaching the old man.'And...
Honestly by Gmariam 3rd-5th Years
Seven months after leaving Hogwarts, James Potter is fighting for the Order...