Reviewer: Mystik_Ecko
Date: 04/12/05 5:50
Chapter: Chapter 18: Earth and wind

Wow..i love it!..Imperfect though perfectly done!..I've been waitin-too long for the update-hope u hurry up the other chapters-apart from that-itz great.:)

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review! I have just updated - I will try to quicken the chapters although I don't want to rush it.

Reviewer: Jenry
Date: 04/12/05 0:31
Chapter: Chapter 18: Earth and wind

that really was very good, i loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: padfoots gurl
Date: 04/09/05 23:33
Chapter: Chapter 18: Earth and wind

i can't find words to discripe how good that chapter was

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Jeeb
Date: 04/09/05 21:24
Chapter: Chapter 18: Earth and wind

Excellent written chapter. Was really enjoyable. Update soon

Author's Response: Thanks! I have just updated.

Reviewer: Jenry
Date: 03/30/05 15:33
Chapter: Chapter 17: The power of water

how good would that be, an endless summer hol with the woman u luv...i think ur idea of season magic is so gr8 and original and it really works well with wot JK has built up to in her story. congrats once again, best of luk, jmz

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review; sorry it took so long to respond but it was taking ages to get logged in.

Reviewer: kernkraft_21
Date: 03/29/05 20:05
Chapter: Chapter 17: The power of water

Hey This story is one of the best i have ever read. i like your whole concept with the power they have and what they have to do. I just dieing to read the next chapter. sorry that i have reviewed your other chapters but i will from now on. deserves more then 10. just keep goin on with the need to be together to control and make the connection stronger. i just cant tell you how much i love this story.

Author's Response: The next chapter should be up soon. Thanks for the great review!

Reviewer: elfgive
Date: 03/28/05 18:21
Chapter: Chapter 16: When time stops

wow now you really now how to make an excellent chapter moderating it. this thing of season magic is so impressive that i cant stop imaginating all the things that you can do with it. keep on writing

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: dave 049478
Date: 03/27/05 10:29
Chapter: Chapter 17: The power of water

Sorry forgot to review. Great Chapter please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I will be updating soon.

Reviewer: mudblood1200
Date: 03/25/05 21:12
Chapter: Chapter 17: The power of water

This is such a good story! I LOVED IT! Keep updating...and do it SOON!

Author's Response: Thanks! Should not take long to update.

Reviewer: Mystik_Ecko
Date: 03/24/05 12:57
Chapter: Making Plans

It's great..never have i read a better fic!..plz hurry..update!..the wait is a torment! 10 :)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Jeeb
Date: 03/24/05 1:03
Chapter: Chapter 17: The power of water

Loved this chapter!!! :D update soon will ya !!! im on holidays so im lookin forward to more updates lol

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm on holiday so it should not take long to update.

Reviewer: lonliness12345
Date: 03/23/05 17:57
Chapter: Chapter 17: The power of water

GREAT STORY update soon

Author's Response: Thank you! I should update soon.

Reviewer: UltimateHr
Date: 03/23/05 17:54
Chapter: Chapter 17: The power of water

Awesome!!!!!!! I truly can not wait to see what happens next. Please update soon. By the way, I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Easter hols start tomorrow so it should not take me long to update.

Reviewer: TNT_Angel
Date: 03/23/05 15:00
Chapter: Chapter 17: The power of water

haha im first! I like this story a lot! Sorry about the critisism before! I guess I shouldnt do that, since I couldnt write a decent story if my life depended on it! Anyways, another 10

Author's Response: Criticism is ok, I really will try to improve. Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: TNT_Angel
Date: 03/23/05 0:14
Chapter: Chapter 16: When time stops

OK here it is...I Love this Story! Im a huge Harmony shipper and this story is one of my favourites! But, ok heres my constructive critisism> I dont really like the way Harry and Hermione are talking... that came out wrong, anyways they talk like robots and not real teens! Also, I would like to add that in many cases you have switched words on us (ex. saying wand instead of and, etc.) its just that I would love it if those were fixed, it would make reading this story so much better....10 anyways!

Author's Response: Thanks, I will try to imrove the dialogue and the errors in the future.

Reviewer: Jenry
Date: 03/22/05 15:55
Chapter: Chapter 16: When time stops

that was xtremely good, i loved it. the way you keep introducing new ideas all the time, its just gr8!...well, i suppose JK had a gr8 idea to make a childrens novel on magic...there are limitless possibilities, and ur doin a gr8 job carryin on from her! keep up the good work, best of luck. james

Author's Response: Thanks alot!

Reviewer: Seriously_Sirius
Date: 03/21/05 15:22
Chapter: Chapter 2: Millennium Eye

nice story... :D

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Jeeb
Date: 03/21/05 2:03
Chapter: Chapter 16: When time stops

hahaha nice chapter... very short though... and you left it on a cliff hanger :P DAMN IT!!! update soon!!! lol

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter will be longer, I am about half way through writing it.

Reviewer: SnitchSeeker
Date: 03/20/05 3:59
Chapter: Chapter 16: When time stops

PLEZE UPDATE SOON!!!!!! i love your story!!

Author's Response: I will update as soon as I can. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Avagurl13
Date: 03/18/05 14:12
Chapter: Chapter 16: When time stops

Your story has a very romantic theme good job plz updated quick ill die if i dont know wat will happen :D A PERFECT TEN!

Author's Response: Thanks! I am about half way through the next chapter.

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