Reviews For Black Magic
Reviewer: Boffin AK
Date: 01/12/07 13:56
Chapter: Satisfied

Good. Hermoinny or whatever your name is, you are so weird.

Reviewer: Herminoninny
Date: 12/02/06 17:03
Chapter: Satisfied

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you get the picture, well do you?


Author's Response: Yes! Sorry but this is a ONE SHOT! I am in the process of trying to get another story submitted!

Reviewer: Herminoninny
Date: 11/29/06 7:24
Chapter: Satisfied

Well I think you can't write a poem let alone a story (joke) (it was fab (joke (joking))!!!!!!!! Hahahahahaha you are a nerd (joke, joking, joke)!


P.u. (getit) Um haha great story write another!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Omg you are a nutter!

Reviewer: joshpotter
Date: 11/10/06 11:13
Chapter: Satisfied

wow.


Author's Response: I take it you liked it! Thanks!

Reviewer: cecehloe
Date: 09/28/06 13:32
Chapter: Satisfied

CARRY ON please!!!!! :) see you at school :) i love the story :) hehe lol ceecee

Author's Response: Thanks! Look out for my new stories! Samuri xxx

Reviewer: Crockshanks
Date: 09/27/06 7:27
Chapter: Satisfied

Hi d-o-o-d(joke (joking))


It's Herminoninny's diff user (like no man)

Author's Response: hey!

Reviewer: Herminoninny
Date: 09/10/06 9:18
Chapter: Satisfied

HI

Joke

I did like it

Joke

anyway have a wash u stink

joke (joking (joking))

calm down now Hermy

joke (woooooooooooooooooooow i am wierd)



P.U. (get it) I did like it

joke (joking)

Author's Response: ok... thanks?

Reviewer: Herminoninny
Date: 09/07/06 11:17
Chapter: Satisfied

U smell

Joke

Ur story was soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo bad

Joke (I SWEAR)

It was really cool i loved it


Joke (Joking)

WRITE MORE CHAPTERS SO I CAN'T WARN PPL NOT TO READ IT

Joke (again *roll eyes*)

I will stop cos i am very annoying


Joke

Author's Response: hiya Herminoninny. You are absolutely potty! Thanks by the way... I think you liked it?

Reviewer: johnny from swaos
Date: 06/02/06 5:31
Chapter: Satisfied

hmm. quite like this. Voldemort rules. 10/10 for you. oh, and any peeps, read my bio its cool and it'll confuzzle every1 apart from rileyowen and other peeps who go to SWAOS i reckon!

Author's Response: Thanks and yes Voldemort rulez!

Reviewer: jessieantoffeerule
Date: 06/01/06 11:40
Chapter: Satisfied

that's quite spooky!
10/10

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Dory_the_Fishie
Date: 03/18/06 13:34
Chapter: Satisfied

Wow. This was really great. The imagery is really intense, and that's a good thing. I could picture everything and feel it all happening. It flows nicely and everything is described so well. The only piece of criticism I have is to break up your paragraphs. The first one and the last one is really long. It would work a lot better to split them up. Just easier to read that way. But other than that, this is great. You could leave it as a one-shot, but it would probably be good as a chaptered fic too. Up to you, really.

Author's Response: Thank you! I describe stuff well, because I want everyone to see what I saw when I wrote it. I've decided to leave it as a one-shot because I don't have enough time to wrote the rest!

Reviewer: rileyowen
Date: 02/17/06 13:47
Chapter: Satisfied

hiya sammy! great story, very descriptive. 10/10. i think its great as a one-shot, but if you left it then you'd need to change the blurby-thing about sam evern. however, you can build on this to make an even better story about sam evern beating voldy or whatever. good job! (by the way its danielle)

Author's Response: Yep. I dunno if i should change it though! I need more peoples' opinion. Thanks Danielle

Reviewer: Severius0606
Date: 02/16/06 21:19
Chapter: Satisfied

Noooooo it can't end there ._. i think it waz cool, it didn't have the best ending (i hate cliff hangers) i want to know what happens next. >^..^<

Author's Response: So you think I should carry on with the story. Hmm.

Reviewer: FriendsOfSnape
Date: 02/16/06 12:50
Chapter: Satisfied

I'll be perfectly honest: I had to read this story with a grain of salt. I'm more of a humor person, meself. There was good descriptions, though. I'm curious why you didn't submit this under the Dark/Angsty catergory. Happy birthday, btw. ;)

Author's Response: Thank you! I might move the story if I change it to a one-shot, but the oringinal idea was more mystery.

Reviewer: Samuri Rose
Date: 02/14/06 11:39
Chapter: Satisfied

I know this is weird but i need your help. Should this story remain like this, as a one-shot, or should i carry on? You decide!

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