Aaaw, this story was wonderful! It was so cute and sweet in a way, maybe because you portrayed Cedric as such a sweet guy. Anyways, I've never read anything of this pairing, but you really convinced me that this could have been. I think you wrote this story exceptionally well - not only is there a good plot and a nice way of writing it, but there aren't any grammar or spelling mistakes. That can bug me a lot, some fics with many errors really shouldn't be approved. Well, now when my meaningless babble is about to come to an end, I just want to thank you for writing this wonderful story, and hope that you'll write more of this sort! 10/10 =)
I really enjoy this style of writing, not only because it appears to flow a lot more fluidly than most, but because the style is so different from what I am used to so it was a joy for me to read. Of course, wondering into this new style I am but a child, so cannot technically say what you did right or, indeed, wrong with that style. All I can give is my honest opinion, and in my opinion, it was one of the easiest reading stories I have read. Not even once did I come close to wanting the story to end, nor did I scroll sown the fic, skipping out sections which could have made the eyes turn weary. Well done for an enthralling story!
As a big fan of Cedric’s, I m delighted that there is a story out there that really does him justice. I am also enthralled by the way you chose Hermione to be Cedric’s “Partner” in the story, taking into account that they barely met in the actual story it is quite an unusual choice, but very original and I like it! Tired am I of reading fic after fic of Cedric/Cho and crying out for at least a little originality. You have saved my sanity and I thank you!
The emotion in which you pour into Hermione’s character is beautiful, the reader can really feel that there is a hole felt in Hermione’s person and that is a very difficult thing to achieve! Well done!
I also enjoyed the description of Cedric’s breath being carried by the wind, that is an excellent piece of imagery and I must again congratulate you on that.
I conclusion I look back over this review and wish that somewhere I could have put in some criticism, but alas, I cannot. I enjoyed the story too much therefore criticising it would be lying. Well done, and please write more stories like this!
This was wonderful! The way you wrote it made it extremely enjoyable, and I enjoyed Cedric's and Hermione's thoughts nearing the end. And the ending was just ... wonderful. The way you weaved Oread/Echo into all this was good. The way you inserted her and wrote her our in the fic was beautiful. Just wondering, was Oread younger or older than Cedric? Overall, a very enjoyable read. Good job!
"She realizes she can't remember who started the first conversation." I loved the whole tone of this little faery-tale. It was so refreshing a style to read. It was free from melodrama, though it was very poignant and serious. The whole thing actually felt like a breeze rolling by. I enjoyed it a lot.
that was really good!!! that was a well thought out story with an awesome plot!!! i am adding this to my favorites!! 10/10
Wow, I really liked that. It's an unusual pairing, yet you told it in a way that made it feel completely natural. I liked the different style of storytelling as well, and the sense of familiarity it had. My favourite bit was the description of the kiss - it was all so innocent and narrated beautifully. You could truly feel the level of understanding between them, which is hard to acheive in a one-shot. Congratulations on a brilliant story.