I'm getting the impression that this poem was from the point of view of a reluctant death eater, what I mean to say is someone who was forced into serving Voldemort or is having second thoughts about serving him after seeing what is expected of them. I apologise if I've got the wrong end of the stick, but in any case I enjoyed your poem it was very good.
Cool poem, I did understand it and I really liked it!
i understood it! *yay* does that make me smart? only messing, great poem real great insight into the thoughts of a death eater. Go You!!! lol
^^ Thank you people. it's GREAT to get such nice reviews! :D
Sorry, three reviews are WAY too much, but when i said l liked how your stories are anonymous, I meant that your CHARACTERS are anonymous.
OK, I got it. I think Bella in Blinded by Sly Severus really describes this character. Also, I like how your stories are anonymous. It's really cool. I will read your other peoms NOW. :-) And also, you're in my favorite authors =)
I guess it's about a Death Eater (obviously!) who is sort of scared and regretful, and--ooh, I just though of the perfect story that describes it. One minute, I'll submit this and go look it up.
:) really good. I don´t know if I undersatnd it right, but maybe it´s the regret of been a death eater, you always have too live with it and you never can escape it in your mind...even if other people dosn´t know...And you´re always trying but you never succeed
I think I'll guess what it means...It's about a death eater who's tired of being one, and is frustrated that he can't do anything to improve himself other than close his eyes, and even that won't help, but at least it will make him feel that it's only a dream....
Oh well. Enough of my stupid theories.
I liked it nonetheless.
I loved it! You are really good at identify emotions that Death Eaters are likely to experience. This was really truly wonderful!
beautiful poetry written by a great poet!!!!!
In my mind, I think it was about...mm... this is tricky... I'll take a guess- a DE murdering someone??? I'm probably wrong. Anyway, I LOVED EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS! IT ACTUALLY RYHMES! THIS IS LIKE THE FIRST ONE OF THOSE I'VE READ (I can't ryhme myself) IT WAS ABOUT DEATH EATERS YAY! I LOVED THIS!
Author's Response: Yay. =D thankkkksssss
I UNDERSTOOD IT, AND I LOVED IT!!!!!!!
Author's Response: thank you, what was it about in your mind then?
Really enjoyed reading that, the repeat of 'Close my eyes' made the poem flow well and the lines were carefully chosen. Good job. :)