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Reviewer: DontSayImpossible
Date: 07/29/11 10:20
Chapter: Chapter Sixty-four: Draco Malfoy - My Heart

This story was brilliant. I wasn't sure I would want to read a Draco/Pansy story because I never liked Pansy in the books but I'm glad I did. You made it possible to empathise with the characters without making them out of character.
Really enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: mulligas
Date: 01/21/09 21:38
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Pansy Parkinson - Devotion and Benevolence

I am curious about the history of House Elves in your universe and why they allow themselves to be enslaved.

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem
Date: 12/31/07 15:20
Chapter: Chapter Forty-six: Pansy Parkinson - An Opportunity Missed

The format of this one was hard to read for me, just to let you know. Great story!

Author's Response: Ah, thanks, RavenclawsLost Diadem, for telling me. I've just fixed it. Hopefully there won't be any more like that. I hate to think of you reading my story with formatting gone awry! - Susan aka SIW

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem
Date: 12/31/07 14:27
Chapter: Chapter Forty: Pansy Parkinson - Zach Smith Arrives Again

Oh man, Zach the lying cheat is at it again. And Pansy is falling for it. No!

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem
Date: 12/30/07 22:20
Chapter: Chapter Thirty: Pansy Parkinson - The Masquerade - Part V

I would not like my review to be deleted for use of profanity in describing exactly what I would like to do and say to Mr. Smith at the moment, so I shall just say you are both wonderful authors.

Author's Response: *is laughing hysterically* Thanks for reading! - Susan aka Sea Isle Witch

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem
Date: 12/30/07 22:12
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-eight: Pansy & Draco - The Masquerade - Part III

Bad Draco! Bad!

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem
Date: 12/30/07 21:39
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-six: Draco Malfoy - The Masquerade - Part I

Evil cliffie. Evil. ^_^

Reviewer: honey bon
Date: 10/16/07 17:25
Chapter: Chapter Sixty-four: Draco Malfoy - My Heart

Its a very very good story! I like it very much. You two are quite talented at writing - gbut you probably already knew ;.)

Reviewer: slytherin_princess89
Date: 09/17/07 13:47
Chapter: Chapter Twenty: Pansy Parkinson - A Delightful Evening For Shopping

Draco runs away?:)....

Reviewer: goobersam9
Date: 08/21/07 23:26
Chapter: Chapter Sixty-four: Draco Malfoy - My Heart

I was a little frightened about reading 64 chapters...but they were worth it. I really wish this story had more credit because I felt it was one of the best written, most original FF's on this site. And to keep it going for over a year is amazing! You deserve an award! Bravo!

Reviewer: Dessslok
Date: 07/23/07 9:20
Chapter: Chapter Sixty-four: Draco Malfoy - My Heart

I absolutely approve. You did a far better job than I would have done. I'm glad I could help get this going. I'm sorry I vanished on you, but knew you'd complete it with the same high degree of quality you demonstrate in all your writings. Everytime Pansy pops up in the movies or books, I think of you.

Reviewer: MrsGinnyMalfoy
Date: 06/27/07 11:36
Chapter: Chapter Sixty-four: Draco Malfoy - My Heart

I really enjoyed your story.. I wasa bit frightenedwhen I saw it was 64 chapters long but I'm glad I read it:) I only have one complaint, the lastchapter wasa bit hard to read due to the fact that there was no paragraphs.

Author's Response: OMG! I have no idea how that happened! Well, I fixed it. I hate the thought of anyone trying to read the climax of my story without line breaks! Thanks for bringing it to my attention. I'm happy you enjoyed the story up to that point. - SIW

Reviewer: omg i love sirius
Date: 06/17/07 15:07
Chapter: Chapter One: Pansy Parkinson - An Incomplete Autobiography

wow i've been reading this story for a year and it's finally complete. you should know that i've never read a multi-chapter story all the way through before.

i have to say that you are a fantastically detailed writer and this is just one of the ways in which you have engaged people's interest.

i'm so happy you decided to write a long and well thought out story for draco and pansy. most of the fics i've seen are a brief description of the way they were always meant to be bla bla bla hey look! they're engaged and pansy's knocked up.

you've written a story with a plot that's so much more elegant than that. also, i'd like to say well done for practically inventing a whole new side of the wizarding world. with harry etc. we don't see the other side of society, but you've managed to create a world for pansy and draco using almost no base material.

anyway, just gotta say: i love this story

Reviewer: LunePhoenix
Date: 06/14/07 12:04
Chapter: Chapter One: Pansy Parkinson - An Incomplete Autobiography

First off I want to say that I loved your story! The duelality was brilliant and you turned two characters that we hate into ones we love.

I have to say though that I was disappointed with the last chapter, it felt rushed, like you just wanted to finish off the story. The style was completely different and since it occured so far after where the previous chapter left off I felt disconnected. Also the happily ever after was a bit cliche for a story that started off so innovative and fresh. Overall it was a great job and I was pleased you included the Vows ceremony since that aspect was built up from the very beginning.

Reviewer: broken memories
Date: 06/13/07 13:48
Chapter: Chapter Sixty-four: Draco Malfoy - My Heart


Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 06/11/07 15:40
Chapter: Chapter Sixty-four: Draco Malfoy - My Heart

omg omg omg! that was PERFECT j'adore the marriage vows and im sooo glad she chose Malfoy too!!! a fantabulous story by a fantabulouserer writer!!!

Reviewer: HiDiHi
Date: 06/11/07 11:34
Chapter: Chapter Sixty-four: Draco Malfoy - My Heart

A brilliant ending to an excellent story :)
I've loved reading this!
The plot was gripping and original (you had me screaming at the computer screen for Draco to join Pansy in hexing Cormac McLaggen in Chapter 60), the characters were thoroughly explored (you really showed every side of Pansy - though I think I enjoyed the Polyjuice in Chapter 58 most!) and the entire story was beautifully written.
I'm quite sad it's over! But yeah, I think it was great.
Thank you for months of enjoyable reading :)
HiDiHi x

Reviewer: GryffindorPrincess
Date: 06/10/07 23:05
Chapter: Chapter Sixty-four: Draco Malfoy - My Heart

That was such a good ending to the story!!! Yay so happy they ended up together they are just meant to be together!!!

Lol fantastic story a pleasure to read, just loved it!!!!

Reviewer: CowGirlHPFan
Date: 06/09/07 21:02
Chapter: Chapter Sixty-three: Pansy Parkinson - Seeking the Truth

OH,MY, GOSH!!! i LOVE this story,even though i hate parkinson in the books.well the only thing to say now is CHOOSE DRACO!!!!! Great story!! *~*CowGirlHPFan*~*

Reviewer: shewhoshantbenamed
Date: 06/01/07 18:08
Chapter: Chapter Sixty-three: Pansy Parkinson - Seeking the Truth

I love this story.
can't wait to see how it all pans out.
I hope she ends up with Draco though, I've never been a big Pansy fan, but ANYTHING is better than Smith...
smarmy git.

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