Reviews For Journey On Water
Reviewer: hp_krazey
Date: 09/10/09 16:22
Chapter: Ice-Capades

great fic..i would never have come up with Dramione on water...you portray the characters very well...

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not quite sure how I came up with the idea myself lol...! I started this ages ago and I tend to forget things =P Thanks for taking the time to review! After being away for so long, I realized I really miss them ^^

Reviewer: linux_Ginny
Date: 09/10/09 10:01
Chapter: Ice-Capades

hi..... love ur story...... BIG FAN.... second fav. after unseemly proposal (sry... .cant help it) . BTW, r u gonna continue?

Author's Response: Hello!! Hahaha...don't worry, being second to Unseemly Proppsal is a huge compliment in my opinion =D I ADORE that fiction!! Yup, of course I'll continute! There's no way I'm giving it up after coming so far ^^

Reviewer: MsHellfire
Date: 09/07/09 3:40
Chapter: Ice-Capades

wow its been a while since you updated but thankyou so much anyway!
i thoroughly enjoyed reading this chapter and can't wait to see what happens next.
Favourite bit: Hermione holding on to Draco's waist. That sense of them having to depend on each other as they were flying/skating was great.
Could be better: More kissing action! lol
Hope you feel inspired to update again soon (please dont make us wait as long as last time haha)
All the best

Author's Response: It has, it has! This is the longest time I've taken to update a chapter! =S Sorry about that; however, I'm really happy you liked the chapter! Ah..that bit was rather tricky to write as I has to show that felt both uncomfortable and yet pleased to be in that situation ^_^ Lol I guess everyone wants a bit more going on between the two of them, but let's not rush things =P But I do try to make it somewhat fluffy - not overly done though lol...! I hope I feel inspired to write too! There are days when I just can't seem to type out anything, but sometimes it just flows out!! Let's see what happens...! Thank you SO much for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 09/06/09 22:28
Chapter: Ice-Capades

that was s romantic. I love that they are talking agin. It was evil to leave us hanging for so long over a year. But this does make up for it. Just try and update soon. I love this story and this chapter especially I can't wait for more

Author's Response: I completely agree with you - I was terrible to keep you all hanging for nearly a year now! At least Ice-Capades is up now though, right?? *smiles* Thank you so much for reviewing for this story once again! It's really nice to know you're keeping up with this story! I'm sure I'll be hearing from you again in the near future! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! More will be on its way soooon!! xoxo

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 09/06/09 20:42
Chapter: Ice-Capades

Nice to get an update. I loved the skating scene! Looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response: And it's nice getting reviews! XD Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed that part. I tried to make the mood as magical as possible so I hope I did that lol..!

Reviewer: GreenFairy
Date: 09/06/09 18:29
Chapter: Ice-Capades

OMG it's been too long! I'm so happy you updated. Of course this chapter was as wonderful as the rest. So romanticc!!! The ocean, the flying, just everything! And the quality of your writing is as great as it always has been. Keep up the awesome job!

Author's Response: GreenFairy! It really has been a long time! I'm happy to hear from you ^_^ Thank you so much! I tried to keep my writing style in check after so many months of not updating, so it's good knowing that I delivered in that aspect lol...! Really glad you enjoyed the chapter overall and I sure hope it was worth all the wait! Hopefully the next chapter won't take as long =P

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/06/09 17:28
Chapter: Ice-Capades

Yay!!!!!!!!!! I was soooo excited when I recieved an email saying this fic was updated!!! :-) Excellent chapter and I hope you have the opportunity to update again soon!!!

Author's Response: Hahahaha..! I got super excited myself when I saw that they had validated the chapter! I don't think I'll ever get tired of getting the mail saying, 'your chapter has been approved by the mods.'...!! It's really a lovely feeling =D Really glad you enjoyed it! I'll try my very best to update as soon as I possibly can! xx

Reviewer: Blackfairy
Date: 09/06/09 16:15
Chapter: The Cruise

Hi again! I really liked this new chapter because even though it was romantic and fluffly it still held their characteristics! Like when Draco clutched Hermione as he was skating and even though he was scared stiff he still managed to tease her threateningly! It was really cute and it was totally worth the wait! Don't worry, it wasn't that short, you did a great job! Can't wait for more so I can review it!! See you soon!

Author's Response: Hiii...!! Oh wow! I'm so glad Ice-Capades is up! Yay! First off, it's really nice knowing you enjoyed chapter 25. I'ts been ages since I last updated, so it was sort of difficult to start up again. Characterization is always hard when these two are paired together and it's an interesting challenge to write the scenes out! Its really nice to know you enjoyed the chemistry between them! ^^ As always, thank you so much for reviewing! (Off topic comment: I saw on your author's profile that you watched Ouran High School Host club and I just wanted to say I LOVE that show! lol)

Reviewer: southern_pride
Date: 08/28/09 22:19
Chapter: The Cruise

please please please PLEASE!!! Don't desert your fic! I was hooked on "the unseemly proposal" by sparx too and he ditched! Don't be like him! please!

Author's Response: I absolutely adored 'The Unseemly Proposal' and was pretty upset that she/he had given up on updating (Is it a he?!?) I know how it feels to read an unfinished fic and I will not abandon this one. It may take some time for me to post a new chapter due to certain circumstances, but I definately will finish this one *nods gravely* So no worries! =D Chapter 25 is in queue, so look out for updates!!

Reviewer: paw_DDT
Date: 08/18/09 11:26
Chapter: Bold Moves

you do remember who i am, no??
well, lets see... peanut sized, walnut sized... normal... ring a bell???
^-^
i don`t mean to be rude or anything but it was goddamn funny...
wasn`t it??
*bursts out laughing*
i`ve been missing you dude...

Author's Response: Of course! How can I forget the 'walnut sized' comments that you had made previously? It didn't seem like a joke at the time (was it?? lol), but yeah...I usually start to memorise the pennames of those who regularly review the story - I know quite a few of you! =D Anyway I'm back with chapter 25, so hopefully it was worth the wait ><

Reviewer: 4_leaf_clover
Date: 08/13/09 20:31
Chapter: Bold Moves

You really should finish this, you know. The beginning was a little bit slow, but it got much better. Great Story!!



4_leaf_clover

Author's Response: Oh, but I am going to finish it! O_o Don't worry... I know it took forever to post up Chapter 25, but it's in queue now so it's only a matter of days before it'll be up and ready to read ^^ I thought the beginning was too fast lol...I didn't like the pace and I honestly can't bear to re-read the first few chapters :S I think i'll work on it some more once I complete this fic! I'm glad you didn't give up on it though! Thank you so much! xx

Reviewer: tomslovevishu
Date: 08/12/09 8:41
Chapter: The Cruise

:) i am excited about the update too.... and al the best for "the verdict" ... i totally knw how u must be feeling rite nw... i was in the same situation 4 yesrs back.... but after u hav successfully entered ur favoured uni.( i'll kip my fingers crossed for u to get into one of your choice) plz be more regular and quick in updating... :) God Bless!

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for the nice comments ^^ I got through the horrible ordeal of waiting and got through! *jumps around the room* Anyway! Chapter 25 is FINALLY in queue - yay! Hopefully they'll validate it soon, so you guys can have a look xD (I think you keeping your fingers crossed worked! *smiles*)

Reviewer: paw_DDT
Date: 08/05/09 0:34
Chapter: Bold Moves

you here....? man, did you go??? its been quite a while...

Author's Response: Sorry for my disappearance - I haven't gone anywhere! I know it's been like forever since I last updated, but chapter 25 will be up real soon! I finished it yesterday and sent it off to my BETA. The minute I get it back from her I'll post it up =D

Reviewer: meganzo
Date: 08/04/09 14:24
Chapter: Bold Moves

omg!!!!!!
jst luved dis fic!!!!
cant wait 4 next 1!!
it ws bloody brilliant..
especislly in d romantic scenes?!! my heart literally stopped!!

Author's Response: Oh, yay!! Thank you, thank you! Truly glad you enjoyed it overall..! It's actually nice to know you got all hyped up about the romance scenes - I tried to make them as heart-thudding as possible *winks* Look out for chapter 25...It's on the way!

Reviewer: xheheitssamx
Date: 08/03/09 21:29
Chapter: Bold Moves

wow. so i just sat here today and read this whollee fanfiction (at least what there is of it)
its amazing! i absolutely LOVE it. reading about them in muggle surroundings can be quite amusing:] and its brilliant how you made hermione's and draco's relationship progress:]
and then i looked at when this was last updated and it depressed me! i just hope i dont have to wait to long to read more of this wonderful story.
:]

Author's Response: Wow! You read all of it in one sitting?! That's awesome! I'm kind of relieved that you got hooked onto it. I was re-reading chapter one and felt like smacking my head, because I sounded so immature. It's great to know people don't give up on the story by merely reading a few chapters, because it does actually get better in the future ones...i think...lol! Oh and there's no need to worry about waiting any longer for the next chapter, because it's all done! It's just getting edited at the moment and once I get it back from my BETA i'll immediately post it up! Stick around a while and look out for updates soon! Thank you so much for reviewing the story! It's good to see new faces/pennames coming in... =D

Reviewer: F Fran
Date: 07/30/09 10:41
Chapter: Bold Moves

I`m so glad to hear your voice, Yes,reading English is hard for me but I`d love to read your story. It`s a fresh experience for me. In fack,I already
got the link from Google. I search the title of your fiction on the Internet. what a pity,she only translated your story untill chapter 17,I swear there are many Chinese readers looking forward your story. I hope that you can understanding what I say.English communication is harder than English reading for me.So I stay here to read your story again and again .I`m sure it`s good for my English and I will never tired.

Author's Response: Hello!! I can easily figure out what you're trying to say, so you have nothing to worry about =D I'm really, really glad to hear that you're continuously reading this dramione (Draco/Hermione) fiction and i'm surprised you even searched for the chinese translation. It's only updated till chapter 17 is it? Well I better get in touch with her and remind her to update. Thank you for letting me know. It gives me great pleasure in knowing that I am, in some small way, helping you to learn a bit of english! Thank you so much and I hope you can stay on and wait for chapter 25, which will be here very soon!

Reviewer: tomslovevishu
Date: 07/30/09 5:37
Chapter: The Cruise

this must be i dnt knw my 8th or 9th review for only this chapter... please please ... update....

Author's Response: Oh, but I love reviews! <3 But i guess it's annoying for you guys, especially if I'm not updating lol..! Chapter 25 is done, so it'll be up soon =D

Reviewer: tomslovevishu
Date: 07/30/09 5:33
Chapter: Bold Moves

u are really cruel to keep ppl hanging like that .... it takes you a lifetym to update and i hv to read the whole story.... i dnt mind reading it a hundred tyms which i mite hv done already but dnt u hv little mercy left in u for your fans???? :(

-Vaishnavi

Author's Response: Oh, dear...an angry reader! =S Will a new chapter make it better, because chapter 25 is officially DONE! *jumps in excitemen* I know I've been pretty lazy, but it really has been a crazy year, what with being my last year and stuff. I'm currently awaiting my verdict for Uni, so i'm a bunch of nerves at the moment; however, I managed to finish the next chapter, so hopefully it'll be up in a while! Look out for that! (And i LOVE my fans! truly I do!) :)

Reviewer: Jamie_Riddle
Date: 07/26/09 20:14
Chapter: Bold Moves

This is a really good story...can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I can't wait to post the new chapter lol...!

Reviewer: F Fran
Date: 07/26/09 9:33
Chapter: Bold Moves

Hey,SK witch!
I really love your story and try my best to read your story!
I hope you can go on to write it !

Actually I come from China
So my English is not very good,hope you don't laugh me

Author's Response: Hello!! *waves enthusiastically* First off, I want to say that I'm really, really glad that you're taking the time to read through this. It must be slightly harder for you, but seeing that you're trying your best makes me feel truly happy! Never give up! Reading is the best way to learn another language and I think you're doing a fine job =D Also, previously I had a reader who was chinese and wanted to translate the story. She has translated many of the chapters, so if you'd like to take a look then i'd be happy to give you the link. Let me know! =D

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