Reviews For Journey On Water
Reviewer: viktor n me
Date: 12/20/07 19:09
Chapter: The Woman in Red

can u update soon... i really cant wait... hope ull update before xmas... it will be ur xmas gift to us, ur fans!!! lol

Author's Response: hello!! I'm SO sorry, but I don't think I can put it up before christmas because of the queue! I can only update it once it opens up again, so I hope you can wait until then. It'll be like your new year's present *smiles*

Reviewer: countrygurl514
Date: 12/12/07 19:32
Chapter: The Woman in Red

omg! really good! thanks for updating! update again soon!

Author's Response: Thanks!! I'll post the next chapter up once the queue re-opens! Hope you can hold on till then! =D

Reviewer: Niadora
Date: 12/06/07 22:18
Chapter: The Woman in Red

Hope school's going ok for you hon, just can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is fantastic!

Author's Response: Aw thank you soo much! School's alright..I have holidays now! (woohoo!! lol) I'm working on the next chapter at the moment..Unfortunately I couldn't post it up before the queue closed, but it'll definately be up once it re-opens! =D

Reviewer: kritinagupta
Date: 12/05/07 22:51
Chapter: The Woman in Red

you know what i really appreciate about you? it's the fact that you actually respond to the reviews that the readers write..and that's somehting that's really good. I have read so many stories that are amazing but when i go to the reviews, the Authors hardly ever reply back. And you must be like the first author I have come across whose story is absolutely amazing and also replies to the reviews!


please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! =D You know...I absolutely adore responding to everyone's reviews! It's fun share my ideas and vice versa and I think it's a wonderful way to get to know each other *smiles* It is sort of frustrating when you leave a review and you don't get a response always want to know what the author feels, right? lol...I'm glad you appreciate what I do! I have fun doing it! Thanks a ton for leaving a review and I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter!!

Reviewer: draco_lover333
Date: 12/01/07 16:35
Chapter: The Woman in Red

It is, at /very/ long last, time for Hailey's review. =]

Okay, so first off I must totally apologize for being a total thickheaded brat and not checking this story soon enough to see that its been updated for a long time now! And also finding time to read it but not enough to manage a simple short review telling you how much I enjoyed this chapter, let alone my usual policy of making the review ginormously huge!
So.. yeah. I'm really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really sorryy for not reviewingg. =/

Anyway, down to buisness. I should tell you that OMG I ABSOLUTELY ADORED EVERY MINISCULE FRACTION OF A LETTER OF THIS CHAPTER!! It had been sooooooooooooooooooo long since you last updated with the last chappie, and i had grown sooooooooooooooooo impatient -- but i swear, every second was worth it!!! It was written sooo well, seriously, it's amazing.

There's just one thing I'd like to mention: the very first sentence.
"The slender red-wine rose lay poised beside the animal themed bracelet that seemed to twinkle cheerfully on a small round desk beside Hermione’s bed." -- First sentence of this chapter, and the second I read it I fell in immediate love with it. I dunno why, really.. maybe cause it's such a brilliant way to start the chapter. Not like, Hermione did this, Draco did that. Instead of jumping straight into the chapter, it sort of brought the two most important objects to Hermione from Draco to it (the bracelet and the rose), as if it were giving some sort of background information. I loved that! It was absolutely amazing. =)

Haha, okay. Actually, if I had my way, I'd give you 5 paragraphs on each sentence in this chapter about how wonderful it was. But as we all know, it's probably not possible.
Hmm. Well maybe it is. I'll try it sometime =D

If the last scene was cliche, then I absolitely positively adore cliche! Forget that it was like the Titanic, that just makes the whole thing even more romantic and sweet and cute because the Titanic's such a romantic and sweet and cute moviee (except for the end, duh.) Anyway, what I'm trying to say is that I really really loved everything about the last scene. The way Draco was speechless at first, and how after all of that expanded moment of just staring into each other's eyes, all he says is, "You look... beautiful."
Lmao. I'm sure Hermione did. I wish I had someone like that to tell me that (=

Well, that's about it. Truthfully, it's not it because I'd just about love to make this review ten times longer -- no, scratch that -- 50 times longer because I've just got sooo much to say about it!
I mean, come on, you know my fabulous record of past-reviews, how long I love to make them ; but ugh it just takes so much time and thesse days it seems as though I havent got any of that leftt. I know this review is /nothing/ compared to my old ones, and I really feel that in this review I didnt exact communicate how much I loved this chapter to you nearly as well as I would have liked, but I really hope you dont mind.
I'm sorry for taking so long to review for this chapter, and for the review to be so short, cause this chapter was bloody brilliant (YOUR BEST ONE YET) and you deserve one of those gigantic whopping jumbo sized reviews I used to givee, probablly even longer.

It's just pretty fascinating (I'm trying to think of a word other than amazing, I think I've said that too much already) to read this entire story over again, and examine each chapter carefully. It's like having one of those blowpop lolipops -- layer after layer goes by and it gets better and better until the best part, the gum. I know, horrible metaphor, but it does sorta explain. If you look at the chapters, its absolutely (thats another word I've said too much today) mind blowing as to how your writing has beecome soo much better. This chapter, for example, has so much more detail and humor and figurative language and imagery than one of the earlier chapters.
It's soo cool! And it shows a lot about your madd sick skill. =]P

Haha, well, time's up. =/ Once again, sorry for the long wait, and for the not so great review, and the annoyingly prominent repetition of words, but I hope you dnt mind. =]
Thank you so much for this a;sdlfiha lsgjfa FREAKING GOD DAMN HELL OF A MAGNIFICENT chapter.
!!! =]
I loved every bit of it. Fantastic job!! Update sooon pleaaaaaaaaaase!

-Hailey x33

Author's Response: Hailey!! I was waiting for your review! I know the wait was extremely long and you got impatient and all that..and I apologize! I literally had the entire summer to write, but noo...I got lazy and school started leaving me with absolutely no time at all! *sigh*

hahaha...I am SO glad you liked each and every bit of this chapter =D In all honesty, it's not one of my favourites...not quite sure why, but it's awesome that everyone enjoyed it! It gives me a great sense of feeling to know that I didn't let you guys down. I knew I had to give you all something good to read after that horribly long it's awesome that you enjoyed each letter and each word! lol...

Yay! You liked the first sentence and my cliche - brilliant! Actually I love those too *smiles* They were gorgeous scenes to write and I'm looking forward to writing more of those type of scenes in the next chappie! *wink wink* *nudge nudge* lol..! Oh I adore your metaphor! It actually makes sense! using lollipops and gum as a metaphor is so cute! =D topic!

I'm soo happy you've noticed how my writing has grown from the first few chapters! Lol i was reading them a few weeks ago and was like 'Did I actually write that!''s cute really =P

Thank you sooo much for your review (once again! lol) I loved reading it (as always hehehe) I'm sure i'll hear from you soon =D!!

Reviewer: ellie_hplover
Date: 12/01/07 7:43
Chapter: The Woman in Red

This last part reminded me of cinderella!

Author's Response: lol...! I wanted that fairytale ending, so I guess I did that? *smiles happily* I know...cliche! but It was just too tempting!

Reviewer: ellie_hplover
Date: 12/01/07 7:31
Chapter: Hermione's Red Rose

Awww! I want to go on a cruise, and fall inlove with someone I hate...although I reallly don't hate any guys, so that could be a problem!

Author's Response: I hope so too...!! As wierd as it sounds... I find that more intriguing! It's boring if it's a normal relationship...rather more fun if there's that spark eh? hehehe...

Reviewer: ellie_hplover
Date: 12/01/07 7:21
Chapter: A Kiss Attempt

Dude Hermione should totally lecture, and read to her boring books...hahahahaha ok i'm the only one who thinks that is funny

Author's Response: Lol she should..she should

Reviewer: ellie_hplover
Date: 12/01/07 7:13
Chapter: Identities Revealed

It is like totally a witches cruise! lol

Author's Response: hahaha it is, isn't it!? =D

Reviewer: ellie_hplover
Date: 12/01/07 7:06
Chapter: The Night Safari

I think they should take the perfume, and put regular perfume in it! Jesse will try it, and it won't work!

Author's Response: lol...but then how in the world would they explain how they got it?! lol...!

Reviewer: ellie_hplover
Date: 12/01/07 6:56
Chapter: Close Encounters

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I laughed outloud during this chapter, which is really bad because it's the wee morning here!

Author's Response: Wow! Early morning eh!? Well I'm sure glad your taking the time to read and review the chapters!

Reviewer: ellie_hplover
Date: 12/01/07 6:49
Chapter: A Punch, a Push and a Hug

Awwww...this last part made me smile! And I want Violet to be my bff!

Author's Response: Aw great!! I had fun writing the 'hug' part =D lol..I think VIolet is everyone's dream of a best friend..she's awesome! =P

Reviewer: ellie_hplover
Date: 12/01/07 6:43
Chapter: Amorodor

Finally Hermione gets what I have been saying the whole time! I'm with Draco on one thing though, who cares about bird parks?

Author's Response: Aw, why..! I adore bird parks =D Oh well..everyone has their own Draco and Hermione hahaha!

Reviewer: ellie_hplover
Date: 12/01/07 6:35
Chapter: Mixed Emotions and Confused Feelings

A LOVE POTION! For being the smartest witch of her age, Hermione is soooo stupid! Witch+(BWitch-W)=evil plans!

Author's Response: hahahaha...! Jessie is unbelievable isn't she?? *giggles*

Reviewer: ellie_hplover
Date: 12/01/07 6:29
Chapter: Draco and Jessie

So Jesse's perfume has a love spell on it!

Author's Response: Yup...! =D

Reviewer: ellie_hplover
Date: 12/01/07 6:24
Chapter: Confessions and Realizations

I wonder who that witch could be? It would be hilarious if it was someone like Magonagald (I totally spelled that wrong)

Author's Response: hehehe You'll have to read on and find out!

Reviewer: ellie_hplover
Date: 12/01/07 6:19
Chapter: Cocktail Bar

I don't think Hermione would drink just because she is mad. That is totally not like her!

Author's Response: Yeah I totally agree with you...She is OOC in this chapter, so hope you can bear with me on that! But I guess she was to frustrated...with Draco and Jessie...but you're right, she shouldn't have been as effected...But I do hope you liked the chapter over all?

Reviewer: ellie_hplover
Date: 12/01/07 6:11
Chapter: The Breakfast Lounge

Draco saved Ron! WOW! I bet Draco, and Hermione will end up sharing a room somepoint, and not killing each other!

Author's Response: lol...Nah...I won't make it THAT cliche *winks* And besides, Hermione isn't that sort of person to just movie in like that...however goreous Draco is! =D

Reviewer: ellie_hplover
Date: 12/01/07 6:05
Chapter: Protected

It doesn't make sense that Draco would know CPR...after all, isn't that a muggle thing?

Author's Response: ah well..! Draco's just full of surprises =D I can't really say whether its a muggle thing or not...they haven't mentioned it anywhere in the books, so I just thought I'd use it to get the story along in a more exciting way =D

Reviewer: ellie_hplover
Date: 12/01/07 6:02
Chapter: Breathless

I would probably have laughed outloud too. Stuff like that cracks me up!

Author's Response: I do hope you mean that in a good way!

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