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Name: muggle_magic7 (Signed) · Date: 05/07/08 14:56 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
Oh please don't stop. It is soooo good. I hated that she left draco hanging there at the end though. please dont take a long time to update, and to finish. update, update, update!!!! please and thank you!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah...everyone was like 'Hermione! Why did you leave Draco there like that!?' but, lol, I'd planned this before and I thought it would be more exciting than just making her fall in love with him then and there, don't you agree?? =D You have nothing to fear! I won't stop! It may take time for the next chapter to get posted up here, but it WILL be up sooner or later lol..! Thanks for the review!

Name: jenna_weasley x3 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 14:55 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
yayy that was so exciting!
but i'm really not sure how long i can wait to see what happens.. update soon please please! =)

Author's Response: Glad you found it an exciting read! Ah, well...I honestly don't have a clue how long i'll take for the next chapter to be completed. My school end on the 12th of June and i'll only start writing then, so it may take some time. But no worries! Chappie 24 WILL be up - no matter how late!

Name: songbird_13_13 (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 10:26 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
thank you for finally reveiwing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Hahaha...Thank YOU for for reviewing *winks*

Name: magical_nightz (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 8:21 · For: The Cruise
and also wanted 2 say, i totally LOVED the chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =D

Author's Response: Hahahaha...Thank you!!!

Name: magical_nightz (Signed) · Date: 05/05/08 8:15 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
u know i just decided smthng......i just absolutely HATE hermione!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i cant help but coz draco sounded sooooooo sincere and she just said sorry, i mean is she like mad???????
anywayz, u were saying dat u want constructive critism...well, off lately, draco seems a bit OOC....although i totally LOVE him like this and this is a Dramione ff so draco is SUPPOSED 2 be OOC, but it would be more realistic if Draco was more of his egostical self, but if u think this draco is more accurate 4 the plot, then i have no probs coz i love the sensitive and romantic draco 2!!
anywayz, ciao! =D

Author's Response: Yeah I do agree with on the Draco not being so IC....But, but, but I couldn't find a way to move the story forward AND keep Draco the way he usually is lol..!! I really did try to keep IC...but with him, it's sort of hard to do that...! I'll try my best to revert him back to his normal egoistical self in the next chapter - promise! =D

Hahahaha I love the romantic side of Draco too! I think every1 does *laughs* But I really do want to keep him IC at the same time, so i'll work on that! Thanks for letting me know =D Oh and yes! Thank you for reviewing!!!

Name: Moonlight Goddess (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 21:41 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!! This chapter was awesome! I would leave a critical comment but I honestly have nothing bad to say about this chapter :D

Author's Response: Aw! Thank YOU so much for leaving a review! =D I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! More updates soon to come (okay, maybe not THAT soon), so keep a look-out *winks*

Name: IS bookworm (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 15:38 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
I loved it! Please update soon! This one took a little too long. I can't think of any other critical comments really. It was just so good. I'm sad that she left like that but as long as you update soon I'll live with it. Loved it! :7)

Author's Response: Heey...!! Yup, I totally agree - I took ages to put this chapter up, but exams have been pouring down on me this year and there was really nothing I could do unless I wanted to get my butt kicked out of my house lol..! But updates will come more often once school's over. Merci beaucoup for leaving a review! (Hey! That almost rhymes!)

Name: RonsNewGirlfriend (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 14:31 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
W.O.W. thar was definitely worth waiting for. it was amazing!! i do want to know why Hermione ran away for what she wanted!! don't keep us waiting for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you SO much!! You'll find out what was going through Hermione's confused head once I put up the next chapter, don't worry =D Thanks a ton for leaving a review!

Name: dan_me_4ever (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 8:39 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
OMG!!! they kissed, they kissed.. m soo happy... i thought hermione would also tell draco how she felt about him... i just hope that she does.. and soon.. coz i love to see them together.. i hope tht when she explains everything to draco he will understand her and they get together... tht would be awesome.. by the way, it was worth the wait.. brillant chapter...

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much!! Glad I didn't disappoint you with this chapter *smiles happily* I know it would have been a good ending if Hermione confessed her love for Draco then and there, but it wouldn't have been satisfying enough. The story would have ended there and I didn't want that to happen lol..! You'll find out what happens in chapter 24, so hold on tight till that comes up..! =D Thanks a ton for leaving a review!

Name: Horris (Signed) · Date: 05/04/08 1:06 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
YES! I've been waiting for this chapter and you totally delivered! It was awsome! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

Author's Response: Hello..! Another reviewer that i'm pretty familiar with..! This is just awesome lol..! I am SO glad you came back to read more and it's brilliant to know you enjoyed this chapter! Next chappie will still take some time to get updated, but it won't take forever =D Thanks for leaving a review once again!

Name: ravenclawslostdiadem (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 23:21 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
Very cute, but the ending is kind of confusing and abrupt; I wish there was more!

Author's Response: Lol and there will be more...promise! The next chapter will explain what in the world was going on in Hermione's head, so it'll clear up all the confusion =D Sorry 'bout the ending - I hope it wasn't too confusing! Glad you liked the chapter overall...!

Name: black_ink (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 21:32 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
The kiss I've been waiting for!! Perfect! I think you wrote it wonderfully! I'm curious about the ending, of course, and why Hermione ran off. I know she likes him, its quite obvious, but I want to know why she just ran off like that. Hmm...I eagerly await the next chapter! ~Sara

Author's Response: Hey, Sara!! It's good to see familiar faces...or let's say, 'pennames' once again lol..! I'm glad you're not hating me 'cause of the ending *laughs* I'll do my best to explain what all that was about in the next chapter...it may take a while, but the chapter will be written and will be posted up once I'm done with school! =D

Name: Werewolf lu (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 20:22 · For: The Cruise
I LOVE the kiss scene ! And you had better get the next chapter up soon. I really hope it works out for Draco and Hermione.

Author's Response: Thanks a ton!! You have no idea how much I wanted the kiss scene to be absolutely perfect! Everyone's been waiting for it for so long, I was scared I'd disappoint, but I'm glad you enoyed =D I'll post up chapter 24 real soon... Hope you can wait a little while..! Thank you so much for reviewing!

Name: groteskq_fatality (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 18:58 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
damnit! how could you!
ahhhh.haha.damnit woman!
that was sooo good.
but at least they can stop playin games and finally have an understandin bout their feelings.

update soon please! :D

Author's Response: Lol sorry...! But you're right, they can finally stop trying to hide their feelings now! The 'secret' is out and all they have to do is try to figure out what to do with themselves (poor Draco..!) hahaha...But thanks for leaving a review! I'll update once my school's over and i'm exam-free!!

Name: cocomaloco (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 18:34 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
NO no no no no noooooooo! she can't do that to him! please get Vy to sort things out because that was just cruel and horrid! evil, evil, evil but wonderful author grrrrrblisms and a half!

Author's Response: AHahAHahaha...sorry 'bout the ending, but it really was fun to write out that scene...! You'll find out what happens (and whether Violet will help them get together or not) in the next chapter! Hope you enjoyed the read!! =D

Name: sakrosankt (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 18:17 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
The chapter was very well-written, but I must say that I was a teeny weeny bit disappointed. While I was reading it, I felt like there was something missing, something that was always there in the other chapters but wasn't in this one. After some thinking, I finally figured it out. I couldn't FEEL the chemistry between them. It was there, but I couldn't really understand it. I'm sorry, this is such a poor way of articulating my thoughts, but I've tried my best.
Good luck with the other chapters! Can't wait to read 'em... I hope Hermione has a good excuse. Poor Draco! :)

Author's Response: No chemistry?! Aw dang it..! I Better watch out for that one then! I promise to try and bring forth the chemistry in the next chapter. I'll re-read this one and try and figure out what exactly is missing =D I've said this before, but there really was something bothering me with this chapter. One of the other reviewers said it was a little too fast paced and now you're saying that it might be the chemistry that's missing...i'll try to look out for this next time =D Thanks a ton for mentioning this!

Name: Pirkadatka (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 14:27 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
Hi there!
First of all, we're glad that you're back ;) Don't worry about the wait, it's been repaid thousandfold :D
As for the chapter... it was brilliant... I would leave a critical comment, but I just can't. The charaterisations are perfect, none of them is OoC, not even Draco... whom I think is the hardest to keep IC in a DHr. The pace of the whole plot is just awesome... small but steady steps, to get them closer, wonderful job on that one two...
And the kiss... loved it. How it all started with a simple peck, and how she blurted out that it was too short XD Brilliant :D Everything is just at the right place, Hermione getting angry with Jessie, getting angry with Draco, him being arrogant, as usual. It's amazing how you can keep everything so IC. And I even liked the end. It's cool that it's not all over with the kiss, the confession, and that's all. We only have to wait... but I bet it's going to be worth it again.
Wish you all the best, enjoy life as much as you can. And don't forget, that we'll be waiting for you to get done with next chapter, should it be one week, one month or one year. Just remember it ;)
~ Pirkadatka, devoted fan of yours ;)

Author's Response: Pirkadatka...! You know what? Your one of the few reviewers that I actually sort of know lol... cuz of all the reviews you've left for this story, and I think that is just AWESOME! =D You've beared with me for quite some time now and reviewed most of my chapters...I really DO appreciate it! *beams*

I am SO happy you like the ending!! Hahaha...! Not many people are happy about the way Hermione acted, but I think it's in her character to pull of something like that. It was really hard to move the story forward AND keep Draco IC...I think he was a bit too forward, but what can I say..? Hermione brings out the best in him! *laughs* I'm really glad you enjoyed the story! I try my best to keep you guys entertained! Aww, thanks! I know you'll bear with me even if it takes me a while - you guys are GREAT! =D It really encourages me to continue writing! Thanks a ton for leaving a review once again!

Name: dracodescendant (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 11:10 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
The wait was worth it!!!!!!!
I REALLY hope the next wait won't be as long!!!!

Author's Response: Ah, well...no promises! On june 12th i'll be completely free of exams, so I will be putting most of my effort at that time, but till then I don't think i'll be posting up any more chapters. I've got exams coming out of my ears and I've been completely swamped these past few weeks...! You guys have been absolutely wonderful so far though. I've taken ages to put up this chapter, but you guys are still by my side and - Yeah! You all rock! =D

Name: Werewolf lu (Signed) · Date: 05/03/08 10:00 · For: The Woman in Red
It's gooooooood! Forget about school & write more.

Author's Response: AHahAHhaa...! I'd love to do that, but then I'd get kicked out of my house cuz of all the bad marks i'd get! lol

Name: ember (Signed) · Date: 05/02/08 20:57 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
What the heck? U finally give them a kiss and then she runs? whats that all about? I was looking forward to a really good ending to the chap because u did take so long to get it up and then u pull something like that off? What was going through ur head.

Author's Response: I'm sorry that you were looking for a happy ending, but I'd planned for this to happen and it just had to be. Personally, I think it is in Hermione's character to pull off something like that... She's still very unsure about the feelings she has for Draco and the kiss they shared was intense and that scared her. I couldn't make Hermione completely fall in love with him after that kiss - she's been denying for some time now and it would it wouldn't seem like her to suddenly give in to Draco. I know it took a long time for this chapter to get posted, but I can't change its contents just because It took me a while to update.

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