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Name: anna_kate (Signed) · Date: 06/29/08 10:39 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
this was really awsome! jus wish u wudn't take so much time to write a chapter!

Author's Response: Ah, well...there's not much I can do, unfortunately...! I want each chapter to be well written and unique, which does take time lol...I made a mistake with chapter 23 actually! I was under pressure with that chapter...! I hadn't updated in forever (my school is merciless with exams) and everyone was just waiting on me for it...I did eventually rush through it! I don't want to repeat that again! I was so afraid chapter 23 wouldn't be as good, you see! Thank heavens you guys enjoyed it *smiles* BUT! Chapter 24 really won't take as long..! Promise! =D Thanks a ton for leaving a review!

Name: youfun (Signed) · Date: 06/29/08 4:40 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
when will chap 24 come out????????

Author's Response: Soon, soon...! I promise! i've got my summer holidays now, so i've got loads of spare time to write chappie 24 out =D I'm workingon it at the moment, so it's only a matter of time..! Hope you can hold on a little while =)

Name: honeydukes0209 (Signed) · Date: 06/28/08 18:52 · For: The Cruise
I hope you can get ch. 24 up soon! When can we expect it?? I love this story soo much!

Author's Response: I really have no idea when I'll specificaly finish it...I'm working on it now, but I honestly don't have a clue how long it will take. It won't take that long, i'll give you that! =D Really glad you're enjoying the fic! Thanks for reviewing!!

Name: aivishl (Signed) · Date: 06/26/08 4:19 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
i love dis thing jus forget wat i wrote earlier..............

Author's Response: Triple post?? Lol...!

Name: aivishl (Signed) · Date: 06/26/08 4:18 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
i love dis thing jus forget wat i wrote earlier..............

Author's Response: Double post! =D you can see my response below...!

Name: aivishl (Signed) · Date: 06/26/08 4:18 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
i love dis thing jus forget wat i wrote earlier..............

Author's Response: Wow...! Well, I'm sure glad I got you to change your mind..! i do agree however, that my initial chapters were rather immature...I myself have trouble reading it, but I had written them 2 years ago and my writing style has grown since then... I really appreciate the fact that you read on, though! It's great you eventually came to like this fic *smiles happily*

Name: aivishl (Signed) · Date: 06/26/08 1:32 · For: The Night Safari
this chap. is d cutest till now.......

Author's Response: Thank you..! It's good to know you gave this fic a chance =D

Name: aivishl (Signed) · Date: 06/25/08 5:38 · For: The Breakfast Lounge
and u noe wat still after all the story is sweet and brings a smile to ur face.........

Author's Response: I'm really glad it does =)

Name: aivishl (Signed) · Date: 06/25/08 5:23 · For: Breathless
y is hermione drowning being an a-class which?heard of magic n wands?this tale atleast till chaptet six does not show a minute amount of magic plus hermione does not seem to be the real hermione with her 'less than calm' slappy attitude malfoy is too sweet.both the characters are portrayed in a poor light the jist of the characters are lost.......

Author's Response: Hello there...! First of all, you have to know i've written these few chapters 2 years ago! My writing has improved since then, and I do hope you read on...! The reason Hermione is drowning is because she doesn't have her wand with her. Initially there is not much magic, because both Hermione and Draco are on a muggle cruise and I didn't have a reason for them to use their wands...! This was my first ever dramione fic and at the beginning, I was getting used to writing out their characters. Towards the middle however, i do think they become more like themselves.

Name: honeydukes0209 (Signed) · Date: 06/22/08 0:25 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
Ahh...It's been a while since I've read this story...I'm gonna read it over again! Then I can look foward to Ch. 23! Thanks for updating!

Author's Response: Hahaha...Well I do hope that you enjoy the read as much as you did the first time you did! =D

Name: halfbloodprincess96 (Signed) · Date: 06/16/08 19:47 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! its in my favorites now! after i got about halfway through i had to get off the computer so i started reading ootp. i will never think of malfoy as the arrogant jerk that he is again. its just too hard after this! great story, cant wait for chapter 24!! repost soon? :.)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks a ton! It's great to know you consider JOW one of your favourite fics *beams* Ah, I know how you feel about the whole Draco thing lol...! My little sister (who, unfortunately, just doesn't want to read the books) refuses to believe that he's a bad, arrogant jerk in the books...! =D I'll post up chapter 24 as soon as i'm done with it...! I've got my holidays at the moment, so i've got plenty of free time on my hands! So, hopefully, it won't take too long to update...! Thank you for reviewing!

Name: fuzzy_peaches (Signed) · Date: 06/15/08 3:46 · For: The Serpent and the Lion

Author's Response: I know!! Terribly sorry for the cliffie! Chapter 24 will explain Hermione's crazy behaviour though lol..! I'm working on it, so no worry =D

Name: ch_bindu (Signed) · Date: 06/15/08 0:15 · For: The Serpent and the Lion

Author's Response: Why, thank you! =)

Name: white_egret (Signed) · Date: 06/14/08 13:47 · For: The Cruise
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh!!! update! update! please? I want Draco to get some action!

Author's Response: AhHAhahaha...! Well, unfortunately, you'll have to wait till chapter 24 comes out...I'm working on it right now, so it won't take long =D

Name: Sparkling_Moonlight (Signed) · Date: 06/13/08 13:31 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I have been following along with this story since the very first chapter was published and I am DYING for more! Please, please, please, update again on this fantastic story!

Much Love,

Author's Response: Hey, Quinn! Wow...! I'm really flattered to hear that you've been following this fic from the very start! I really do appreciate the fact that you've been keeping up with it ever since =D You'll be happy to know i'm currenly working on chapter 24. I have a whole load of holidays so i'm concentrating on finishing it as soon as possible!! Thank you so much for leaving a review! It's good to know i've got such loyal readers - it keeps me going *smiles*

Name: Kelsey S (Signed) · Date: 06/10/08 20:59 · For: The Cruise
Great story!!! Evil cliffhanger!

Author's Response: Hey, there...!! Aw, thank you - glad you're enjoying this 'lil fic =D Terribly sorry for, as you say, the 'evil cliffhanger', but it had to be done...! I'm currently working on chapter 24, so it won't be long before I update! Thanks for leaving a review!

Name: p_h_a_t (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 20:11 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
aww..i need the next chapter!!! *pouts*

Author's Response: Read my response below =)

Name: p_h_a_t (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 19:56 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
aww..i need the next chapter!!! *pouts*

Author's Response: Sorry for keep you hanging, especially with a chapter with SUCH an ending, but I currently have limited access to a computer...! I'm writing chapter 24 on one of my old copybooks, so once i'm pretty much satisfied with what i've written down, I shall post it up for you guys to read =D

Name: ember (Signed) · Date: 06/08/08 10:31 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
I cant really critiazice or anything. I really liked it. Anytime soon is the next chapter going to be up? I'm anioxus and i read this chapter a long time ago, and reviewed but i just had to do it all over agoin. So if you have any idea when the next chaper could be up let me know.

Author's Response: Helloo! I'm actually 'holidaying' at the moment, but I am still working on chappie 24 =D Erm...I can't quite say when I'll finish it, but i'll let you know once i'm nearly done with it. Ooo glad you liked it! Oh, and thank you for leaving a review once more - and nope...I never tire of them, so merci..!

Name: night_patronus (Signed) · Date: 05/30/08 16:35 · For: The Serpent and the Lion
Well, I meant to leave a critical comment, but found I couldn't. I was still reeling from the kiss scene. And oh, how I would love to slap some sense into Hermione. Please, please, please, if there is any good in the world, write another chapter. That's the SECOND TIME you've left us hanging! Beware- I am keeping track.

Author's Response: Wow...! You really are keeping track!! Fantastic...lol...! Well of course i'll be writing another chapter! You guys have to know what i'm planning out for them...I can't keep you all hanging like this, no way! Aw, glad you enjoyed it =D Thank you for reviewing!

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