Reviews For Journey On Water
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 09/02/08 21:08
Chapter: Bold Moves

Yay!!! Fantastic chapter!! It made me very happy to see Jessie get what she deserved ;-)

Author's Response: And I had fun writing Hermione kick Jessie's butt! hahaha...thanks for the review! Really happy to know you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Moonlight Goddess
Date: 09/02/08 20:37
Chapter: Bold Moves

omg it's about time u updated!!!!!!!! but that chapter was extremely good, long and worth the wait. plz don't let us wait that long next time!!!

Author's Response: Hey, there! Sorry for the wait, but at least it didn't take superbly long like last time =D Ooo you liked it - awesome! I love long chapters too lol...glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: GreenFairy
Date: 09/02/08 20:23
Chapter: Bold Moves

Wow it's been so long.
Your writing has improved (altho it was awesum to begin with =) )
Great job I LOVE IT!!!
cliffhanger or not I still can't wait
for the next chapter~

Author's Response: Hey there, GreenFairy! It really has been a long time! I really appreciate that you've been noticing my writing style =D it's good to know it's improving, cause my first few chapters were so chidish *laughs* can't really get over them lol, but I feel better knowing that i'm growing out of that style on moving on to a new kind of one =D Thank you so much for the review!

Reviewer: HermyStar
Date: 09/02/08 20:02
Chapter: Bold Moves

That was the best chapter so far!!!!!!!! I really do hope you update soon!!!!! I also have a suggestion. Maybe, at the end, you could do a scene where Draco and Hermione are getting off the Cruise Ship with Harry and Ron waiting for Hermione. You could do a little scene where Harry and Ron find out everything that happened on the ship with their reactions. What do you think? I really would like to see how your view is on how Harry and Ron would react!!!

Huggles From HermyStar

Author's Response: Oh, awesome! Really? The best one yet? Fantastic! =D Well at the moment, I already have what is going to happen at the end planned out in my head, but if anything does change along the way, I'll definately take your suggestion into account - thanks so much for sharing your ideas with me! They're my inspiration, so if anything at all pops into your again, feel free to suggest them! xoxo

Reviewer: ember
Date: 09/02/08 17:35
Chapter: The Cruise

omg awesome chapter. Anyway you can update faster? I can't wait to see what happens

Author's Response: Thanks!! I know I've been utterly lazy, and I'm truly sorry! I'll try updating faster!

Reviewer: ahattab33
Date: 09/02/08 14:53
Chapter: Bold Moves

FInally! An update! I was so excited! And kudos to Hermione for dealing with Jessie...this isn't the end, is it?!

Author's Response: Oh, of course it's not the end! I wouldn't dare just finish it off with this chapter lol so don't worry. It really was about time for Hermione to step it up a little, wasn't it? Draco would've completely given up on her if she didn't! I'm really glad I was able to get you all excited about this chapter - that's just brilliant! =D Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: muggle_magic7
Date: 09/02/08 10:41
Chapter: Bold Moves

Thank you, thank you, thank you soooooo much for updating! I loved it! It was great. Please update soon. Pretty pretty please. Oh and please no more problems between the two of them. They've been through enough, hehe.

Author's Response: Aw, it was my pleasure! I'm really pleased to know how much you enoyed it! Wow thanks! Well...I can't promise things will go smoothly from here on (it is Hermione and Draco we're talking about here lol), so you'll have to wait and see *winks* I shouldn't say anything lol..don't want to give anything away =P Thanks a ton for reviewing!

Reviewer: dan_me_4ever
Date: 09/02/08 8:34
Chapter: Bold Moves

Finally!! The chapter is up.. Had been waiting for it since a very long time.. I LOVED IT!!!

How dare Jesse slap Draco.. After everything she did.. It should have been the other way round.. and I didn't think Hermione would be this bold.. and thank god Draco & Hermione sorted out everything between them..

Hoping to see the next chapter posted soon..


Author's Response: Hello! Lol well I'm glad you guys finally got to read the chapter - I get all excited to see your reaction, so it's cool....! Ah, yes...poor Draco! Atleast Hermione was able to inflict humiliation upon Jessie hahaha...she is a Gryffindor after all and I think that explains the reasons behind how bold she acted (not to mention she really had to step it up a little!) I'm not sure when the next chapter will be posted, but it won't take forever lol..! Keep a look out =D

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 09/02/08 8:29
Chapter: Bold Moves

Great Chapter as always!!
Its been a long time since i left a review, good to read on!!
Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Hey, nikster! Nice to read from you again! Thanks for coming back for the chapter *beams* oh and for leaving a review lol...! Really glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Spirited Celebration
Date: 09/02/08 7:47
Chapter: Bold Moves

Woo! This was a great chapter. Can't wait for the next.

Author's Response: Oh, awesome! Yay! I'm happy you enjoyed it! I'm not sure when the next chapter will be up, but it won't be too long...!

Reviewer: pyramid
Date: 09/02/08 7:16
Chapter: Bold Moves

that was really awesome.i appreciate the way u continued the story,with the right emotions.hope to see ur soon.

Author's Response: Oh, yes...If i'm going to finish this story, I'm going to finish it really well! My writing style will not go downhill from here =D I'll keep the emotions on point, so no fear! I'm alway happy to know you guys enjoyed it! Thanks a ton for leaving a review!

Reviewer: groteskq_fatality
Date: 09/02/08 1:26
Chapter: Bold Moves

awwww im sooo glad that they ended up together!
awww. sooo good.
teh ice skating should be fun! :D

Author's Response: Yay! I'm excited about the whole ice-skating thing! I'm really glad that you guys are liking the idea...neat! Well, they haven't really ended up together, have they? Still more chapters to come, so let's not decide anything too soon *winks* =P

Reviewer: Sucker4nethingHP
Date: 09/02/08 1:20
Chapter: Bold Moves

hooray for them "making progress" haha. now pleeaase update sooner this time!

Author's Response: Hahahaha...progress indeed! I'll try my best to update soon! Not promising anything lol, but I truly will try to post a chapter up real quick!

Reviewer: paw_DDT
Date: 09/02/08 0:47
Chapter: Bold Moves

gud to see that yo have updated... i haven`t read it yet...bye!

Author's Response: Yes, I have...! Well then I hope you enjoy the read =)

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 09/01/08 22:00
Chapter: Bold Moves

Wow that was a great chapter. I'm glad they worked things out they very much deserved that. It toook forever for this chapter to get validated but it was well worth teh a┐wait. Jessie so got waht she deserved. Very nicley written.

Author's Response: Aw, fantastic! Glad you liked it! Yeah...I think people will pretty much come and hunt me down if they didn't eventually work things out. But you never know...there are still a few more chapters yet *winks* lol...Jessie was out of her mind thinking that she could duel Hermione, but I love her in an odd way - she's sort of a catalyst in Hermione and Draco's relationship isn't she? =D Thanks so much for reviewing! It really means a lot! (I know I keep saying that, but oh well...!)

Reviewer: SweetStar
Date: 09/01/08 21:52
Chapter: Bold Moves

I loved itt!

FInally they are together, in a sensee! Wooshh!! :]

Author's Response: Hahaha a sense, I guess...they're relationship is still a tad bit complicated lol...! It's great to know you had a good read! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: black_ink
Date: 09/01/08 21:31
Chapter: Bold Moves

Aw, that was cute and really well done! I felt my own heart fluttering while I read it!! And Jessie finally got what she deserved! Yes! I was kind of hoping they would go swimming, but ice skating is a good idea too! Can't wait to read the next chapter! ~Sara

Author's Response: Hey, Sara! It's good to hear/read from you again! *beams* And yes! Jessie got what she deserved! She was absolutely no match for our Hermione, but oh don't you just love her?! =D You know I was actually thinking of them going swimming, but I was pretty sure there were other stories out there with that idea, so I tried coming up with something unique and BAM! ice-skating! lol...Merci for the review! xoxo

Reviewer: dancingwithneville
Date: 09/01/08 20:51
Chapter: Bold Moves

I loved this chapter! And ice-skating is going to be awesome...I can't wait to find out if Draco can skate or not. Keep up the great work. I love this story and can't wait to see how it ends!

Author's Response: Ooo I'm glad you like the ice-skating idea! To be honest, I haven't started writing out the next chapter, but I'm so excited to write out that scene! Happy to know you're enjoying the story! Thanks a ton for leaving a review =D

Reviewer: krazymonkey
Date: 09/01/08 20:46
Chapter: The Cruise

ahhh! annoying emails telling me false things....omg, u put it up! thanks! it was a good chapter. simple, yet funny, and the chemistry between hermione and draco is really well-written! keep it up!

Author's Response: Yeah I know what you mean about the e-mails - they were having problems with putting up the chapter...but it's alright now! And yes, I did put it up! *smiles* Lol i'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Sucker4nethingHP
Date: 09/01/08 20:14
Chapter: The Serpent and the Lion

i've gotten 2 email notices this week that you've updated but when i check there's no new chapter >:[
these false alarms are crushing meee D:

Author's Response: Ah, yes...they were initially having problem putting the chapter up! But, it's validated now, so I hope you have the chance to read it =D

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