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Name: cassie196 (Signed) · Date: 01/20/09 21:18 · For: Bold Moves
goood story :)
but the last part reminded me of twilight abit.

but still, u make draco sound sooo yummm ! :D:D:D
before i was like yee draco is alright looking but now, im like draco is just the perfect beautiful man i wish i could have!
thank u for capturing that :)

Author's Response: Well you're absolutely right about the Twilight but, because several people mentioned that too me *smiles dreamily* It's becasue I was reading Twilight at the time of writing and I guess Meyer's style influenced me! But I must admit...the scene went rather nicely! hahaha...! Oh how could anyone pass off Draco?! He's the arrogant, no-good jerk that we absolutely adore! Not to mention darkly handsome *winks* It's always fun describing him, so I'm pretty glad you liked it! Thank you so much!

Name: Mauser (Signed) · Date: 01/18/09 17:07 · For: The Cruise
Nice start to a long chapter list; this bodes well. Good suspense at end. I wonder, though, about the details of the ship cabin. Not called a room, I don't think, and do they actually have TVs?

Author's Response: Why, hello therer! =D I haven't responded in a very, very long time and i'm terribly sorry! About the cabin detail - you might be right about that lol...I've never been on a cruise before, so these little details seem to miss me. Once again, I have no idea about TVs...If a cruise can have an ice rink and a rock climbing wall, why can't it have television sets? Gah! Sorry if I sound ignorant. This teaches me a less though: do my research properly!!

Name: southern_pride (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 21:21 · For: The Cruise
I just wanted to say thank you for your fic! I have these horrid little monsters that my mom calls children staying at my house with us right now and your fic provided a perfect escape from them! ( I hid in the backyard with my dog and read for about an hour ) Anyhoo, thanks for saving my sanity! Keep on keepin' on!


Author's Response: Oh, you're absolutely welcome! Gah..! I know how you feel about little kids running around the place! My cousins just moved to Dubai, and they're over a lot, so they're all over lol...! It's one of the many reasons I can't concentrate and jot down the rest of chapter 25 *sighs* But it's great that you find escape by reading this! =D yay! Thanks for the lovely review!

Name: Ravenclaws Noble Heir (Signed) · Date: 01/07/09 19:57 · For: The Cruise
ahhhhh new beginings


Author's Response: Ahh, yes...! The very beginning...! =D Hope you continue reading and enjoy this lil' ficlet!

Name: amy114 (Signed) · Date: 01/06/09 17:47 · For: Bold Moves
hay there great, great writer! [I'm sorry for possible mistakes since i'm not american or english and sorry for being obscure.. it's just really late where i live. *giggle*] this was an ordinary day for me... until i decided to log in here and check on some of my favourite stories.. [guess what - yours one of them!!!] u see, it was ages since i checked last time.can u imagine my absolute thrill when i found not one but whole three new chapters of your story!!! i was like "AAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!" and almost broke my computer trying to hug it!!! very silly of me i guess... *giggle*
anyway.. i just wanted to say - I loved it.. absolutely loved those last few hours of reading. it actually made me forget everything else. so.. thank you very, very much for great job of yours! i'm very curious here and excited of course! cant wait for next chapter.
me going to sleep now.. bye-bye! and thanx again!


p.s. skating? absolutely charming...!


Author's Response: hahaha hey there! I've no idea why, but your review put a smile to my face! =D Wow, so you haven't checked up on this story in quite some time - 3 new chapters! lol...I'm really glad you enjoyed them! You're lucky you got to read new chapters...I haven't updates in AGES, so i'm sure the others, who have been keeping up with it, are absolutely furious...! I haven't forgotten about it, it's just that I don't seem to find the time! Gah! I hate studies! Anyhoo...it's a pleasure to know that i'm able to entertain you guys! Thank you so much for reading, even though it's late there! *smiles*

Name: hachiko06 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/08 9:27 · For: Bold Moves
that's great !!!!! I love your story !!!! I would love to translate it if you're ok with that ? Please answer me. That's a really great fanfiction

Author's Response: Hello...! The story is currently being translated to chinese and vietnamese by some of my other readers...if it's another language, do let me know first and i'll give you the thumbs up =D

Name: ninnies2 (Signed) · Date: 11/28/08 21:59 · For: Bold Moves
that was simply amazing
I loved it
and the reactions were perfect
I can't wait to read the next chapter! =]

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you so mucH! Chappie 25 will be up soon, so hold on =D

Name: DramioneLuver23 (Signed) · Date: 11/28/08 17:45 · For: Bold Moves
AWWW! luv this story!!!!! it's 1 of my absolute faves. its not 2 graphic, not 2 cheezy, and it makes sense. also, the characters ren't OOC if u read fro mthe beggining and c how they develop. thx 4 writing such a great story!! PLZPLZPLZ update as as fast as u can and i anticipate ur nxt chapter!!!! DRAMIONE 4EVER!!!!!!

Author's Response: Ooo double post..! Lol...read my response to the one below xD

Name: DramioneLuver23 (Signed) · Date: 11/28/08 17:45 · For: Bold Moves
AWWW! luv this story!!!!! it's 1 of my absolute faves. its not 2 graphic, not 2 cheezy, and it makes sense. also, the characters ren't OOC if u read fro mthe beggining and c how they develop. thx 4 writing such a great story!! PLZPLZPLZ update as as fast as u can and i anticipate ur nxt chapter!!!! DRAMIONE 4EVER!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you SO much! The character do develop, don't they? =D The first chapters...oh deear! They really sounded immature lol...! My writing gets better though, so i'm glad you read on! I'll update as soon as I'm done. I'm working on it at the moment...I know it's taking time, but it'll turn out better this way *winks* Thank you so much for taking the time to review!

Name: LoonyLoopyLuna (Signed) · Date: 11/26/08 20:39 · For: Bold Moves
I have been awaiting the next chapter of this story FOREVER, I really hope it comes in soon. I re-read the whole thing for the 3rd time today, and it really is an amazing story. DM/HG is often a unrealistic love story, but you make it sound as though it could actually happen.
One thing you're utterly torturing me with...cliff-hangers!!! Do you always have to leave us with one?! I'm kidding, I actually enjoy them. They really leave me thinking...not many fanfics can do that. To me, anyways.
You sis a really great job on this story. Again, I'm looking forward to the next installment...hurry up with it already! : )

Author's Response: Wow! 3 times!? That's uber awesome =D Terribly worry for the wait! It is coming along well...it's only a matter of time before I finish it, so just hold on a wee longer *grins* Ooo, I'm glad you're liking the overall plot. You're right...DM/HG fics are pretty hard to write (keeping them in character and all that - I myself strayed away from that a few times), but it's really great to know that it seems somewhat realistic! I tried my best to do that, so yay! lol...

You're one of the few who enjoy my cliffhangers *laughs* I like them because then I get to see your predictions and comments - It's fun, really...reading them! HahAHha Thank you so much for your review! I'll be waiting to read from you again =D

Name: Nataliabella (Signed) · Date: 11/26/08 16:03 · For: The Cruise
woah sk nice work ;)
shud i b nice or nasty in the next few reviews? lol
love, poopie pants

Author's Response: HahAhHha thanls, sam! But you really do need to read on to get a real feel of my writing *winks* The first few chapter, I must admit, is sort of immature! lol

Name: inluvwid_pdft (Signed) · Date: 11/24/08 23:17 · For: The Cruise
okay seriously woman I have been reading this story since 2006
And in dat time there have a total of three new chapters
Gt a move on email already!!!

Author's Response: I started writing this story in 2006 and since then I've complete 24 chapters...I'm sorry it's taking time to update, but I don't think it's taking forever...I refuse to rush my chapters, so I hope you can wait a little while longer until the next one is out.

Name: Allieireann (Signed) · Date: 11/19/08 12:49 · For: The Cruise
Love this story! I'm a new reader and fell in love. Please update soon! You are a great writer!

Author's Response: Hello there! It's just great how this fic brings more readers all the time *smiles happily* it makes me feel really good! Thanks for taking the time to read it! I'll update as soon as i'm done with the next chapter, I promise!

Name: harryg (Signed) · Date: 11/17/08 19:13 · For: Bold Moves
o please please please hurry!!!!

Author's Response: Ooo sorry for the long wait...! *goes off to write*

Name: southern_pride (Signed) · Date: 11/11/08 17:51 · For: The Cruise
i completely love your fic! it's sick nasty awesome!!! update soon!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: HahHAhaha...love your word choice =D Thank you!

Name: Ava Marie (Signed) · Date: 11/08/08 10:12 · For: The Cruise
I swear, you are PERFECT. I love your stories SOOOO much, and I wish you to keep on writing forever and ever and I'll make sure to read them forever and ever. And ever.

Please never change, and know that no matter what ANYONE else says, you have a beautiful soul. Ha ha, can I have it?

Sorry for the dramatics, but I'm so.... amazed at you. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

Author's Response: Hey, there! Wow i've got to say i'm thouroughly flattered! =D It's a real pleasure knowing how much you're liking the story and my overall writing style - thank you! I will keep on writing, because I really do enjoy doing it and I hope you continue reading my work! Thank you ever so much!

Name: kt siren (Signed) · Date: 10/29/08 22:52 · For: Bold Moves
i absolutely love this story!!! hurry and update it! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!! And i'll try my best to get a move on! =D

Name: Blackfairy (Signed) · Date: 10/14/08 14:49 · For: Bold Moves
I just want to say that you are fantastic! I love your writing style and your plot is so interesting. I like how they both know they love eachother and yet they retain their personalities. Very well done. Also, I saw your author's page and I like a lot of the same books you like. I wonder if you read Brisingr and if you didn't, it's wonderful! Another book you might like would be the Inkheart series and maybe Twilight. Wonderful detail, keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you continued to stick with this story. I was re-reading the first few chapters a few days ago and I was like, 'Oooh dear...did I really write that?!' lol...my writing really was immature back then and I was scared people wouldn't read on, so i'm happy you kept going on with this fic!

Yay! we have the same taste in books! =D I haven't read Brisingr yet...I need to buy the book and my friends are taking forever to read theirs, so I can't even borrow it! It's super expensive here, so I'm waiting to get it from outside this counrty lol...! I've read the Inkheart series - they're absolutely lovely! Twilight is absolutely awesome too! I don't if you've read them, but His Dark Materials are absolutely fantastic! =D Thank you so much for your review!!

Name: Dark_Angel123 (Signed) · Date: 10/03/08 3:48 · For: The Cruise
I loved it, loved it, loved it!! Did I say just how much I loved it?! Please update soon!! I can't wait to imagine Draco ice-skating!! It'll be fun!! I really liked the way you progressed on Hermione and Draco's relationship!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Aww....thank you! I'm happy that you're enjoying their slow-paced relationship...I really do try not to rush things between them *grins* I know it's taking me forever to update, but i'm working on it at the moment. Hopefully it'll be ready soon! =D Thanks for reviewing!

Name: night_patronus (Signed) · Date: 09/24/08 18:14 · For: The Cruise
Darn. Would an e-cookie be enough? I got kind of hungry,,,, *ahem* ON the bright side, now the cookies are whatever kind you want them to be.

Author's Response: HAhahAha an e-cookie is just great, thank you =D

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