Author's Response: Ooh, short and sweet. Thank you.~rog :D
hey i remembered something i wanted to compliment you on, which is when sirius was talking about wanting to impress his parents. i really really liked this because it made him seem a lot more real, instead of just totally hating them. it makes it easier for us to relate to him, since most of us aren't in his position, but we do want to impress our parents.
Author's Response: Hmm, I agree. Especially since he's still rather young. When he gets older, though, he's not going to stand for their abuse. Though it will hurt him to hate his parents, he's not going to regret it.~rog :o
i really really love this story! i love how you put in sirius, and how you made lily like james, but said how she couldn't stand bullying innocent people. i also think you have really good character development. i think the one thing that bothers me is that remus actually has brown hair, i think. but anyway greaat job and update soon! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! You are right about Remus' hair, but I did that on purpose. His hair will turn darker as he gets older. I'll update as soon as possible!~rog :D
I'm a couple hours away.
Maybe Mom and Dad will want to go to Disneyland this summer....
Author's Response: Ooh, lucky you if you do go! And make sure to check out that ride I mentioned....~rog ;D
I live closer to the Pacific, than the Atlantic.
Could you suggest somewhere in Los Angeles, prehaps?
Author's Response: Ah. I'm not sure about Los Angeles. How far are you from Disney World? Because there's this one ride there that's ALWAYS being renovated...it's never open...but I saw this entire family going in...~rog ;)
nice ryhme! LOVED the chapter! heck, loved all the chapters!
Author's Response: Yay! You just made me SO happy. Thank you!~rog :D
it made me smile.
Author's Response: Woohoo! A new reviewer! Welcome! I'm actually grinning ;D~rog
Sadly, I live in America, and have no plans to visit LOndon anytime soon.
I wish JKR would tell us poor Yankees where we can find Wizarding stuff on OUR continent.
Author's Response: Ah. Well, there IS this exclusive little club in New York City with more people going in than coming out... ;)~rog
Oh, I don't want an owl in a CAGE, I want one that lives out in a tree in my back yard.
And carries my mail.
Or, I want a Burrowing Owl that lives in a hole in my backyard.
Either works. ;)
Author's Response: Like I said, I'm not an owl person. But you can try Eeylop's Owl Emporium-I heard they sell all sorts of owls.~rog ;)
I also want an owl.
A big beautiful BARN OWL!
Author's Response: Hmm...I'm not the owl type. I do have a lovebird, though. :D~rog
Here is the review you asked for;
PLEEEEEEEEEASE UPDATE SOON!!
I reallyreallyreally like this, and I think mrs. black (she doesn't deserve a capitilized name) deserves her name.
I would like a little more Remus (he's my fav Maurader) and more Tiger.
I want a Kneazle.
I also love the idea of the flying horses.
Author's Response: You came! :D How very nice of you. Hmm, I'll do my best to include more Remus and Tiger...*sigh* I want a Kneazle, too. And I also wouldn't mind a stableful of Aethonans. I don't ALWAYS get what I want...but you reviewed! So I guess I do get what I want sometimes.~rog ;D
So, so wonderful my wonderful Streamers! I love you too. *huggles* I love how you're putting in Sirius's past. It really makes the story interesting and pulls the reader into it. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Prinny!! I haven't seen you in AGES! *huggles* How wonderful of you to review...till next time~rog a.k.a. streamers :D
i am loving ur story! it is marvy and double cool with knobs! Plus, as an aspiring (right word?) lily/james fic writier, I like to read bunches of stories ot spark my imagination. Not that I steal ideas. hahaha, that would just not be very nice now would it? BUt yes, I am absolutely LOVING ur work! can't wait to read more! you have me hooked!
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I read tons of L/J fics before I started writing my own, so you're definitely on the right track.~rog :D
I love the story so far you really have a great imagination. Just feeling a bit sad for sirius but, great story plot plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz hurry with the next chapter cant wait for it o yh and keep it up
Author's Response: I love your enthusiastic review, and I'll update as soon as I can!~rog :D
Love it! Can't wait for next chaptero0
Author's Response: Thank you! I better hurry and finish typing up the next chapter...~rog :D
luv it, oh and i like whipped cream and ice cream and everything else you can put on it too. ummmm, the part about Sirius and his mum really reminded me about Dave Pelzer's book called The Child Called It. i dont know if youve read it before or not, but it was a really touching books and made me feel so lucky to have parents who dont abuse me. but anyways, i just wanted to say that part was absolutely perfect, and update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I did read Dave Pelzer's book, and I agree with you completely. I felt so bad for him...and so angry at his sick mother...
Haha, these brownies are disappearing fast. I'll update as soon as I can!~rog :D
Nice chapter! I liked it a lot. Poor Sirius, and Remus for that matter. Can't wait to read more-
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter Eight will be along soon, hopefully.~rog :)
hahahahahahaHHAA! So funny!
Author's Response: Thank you! When you're happy, you review, which makes ME run off to write more chapters, which hopefully makes you happy again...~rog :D
hehe very funny! I love your fic:)
Author's Response: And I love positive reviews like yours!~rog :D
Author's Response: Haha, and I'm smiling now, too...what a coincidence...~rog :)