Reviews For Light of Sunrise
Reviewer: SnoopyMarauderess
Date: 03/12/09 17:45
Chapter: An Icy Glitter

I really liked this chapter, especially the part about Sirius. You show us how horrible it really is for him without making it inappropriate.

Reviewer: eaglette with wheels
Date: 02/24/08 18:24
Chapter: Light at the End

I still can't believe that Lily reacted like that. Tsk, tsk Lily.

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 11/26/07 18:21
Chapter: Light at the End

what happened to dani???

Reviewer: Trivia Camlee
Date: 10/20/07 13:21
Chapter: Alight With Mischief

This is awesome! I love the way you have characterized Remus and Tami! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it... :)

Reviewer: JamesNLilyLover
Date: 09/08/07 16:42
Chapter: Clouded

Update quickly please! This is a really good story.

Author's Response: Thank you! And I did update...yay me! :D

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 08/07/07 15:28
Chapter: Clouded

I second JustLikeHermione77's review. Update! please?

Author's Response: *bows* At your command. :)

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 07/12/07 18:37
Chapter: Clouded


Author's Response: And so I have. :) Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 07/03/07 14:21
Chapter: Clouded

oh, and i have a cousin named Justin! he's a Dragon Solider! that's the chemical corp. thing for the army! :D BAM! BAM! CLUNK! BAM! BAM! BANG! KABOOM! :D :P

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 07/03/07 14:17
Chapter: Clouded

okay, so, umm, now that i am now done yelling at you in caps locks, umm, i don't like how Lily reacted, but it's okay, she is eleven, possibly twelve, and she just found out that a person she knows is a werewolf. but me being me, i wouldn't act like that, i like canines! i once read on a website about werewolves, (i was researching for a story of mine, or not.) that children born on the day of Christmas is a werewolf, so i naturally got excited because guess what day i was born on! Christmas!

so i got all excited but then grew discouraged because i never turned into a wolf, but my animagus is one though! lol, what a coincidence! but dogs to tend to like me a lot and stuff! that has to mean something, right?

so, umm, Dani is, uhh, okay, i looked at some websites with he symptoms you gave and i came up with diabetes's and major headache thing, and i think brain tumors and cancer even, but none of them completely matched up with what you had, so i guess it's waaaaaaaaaaaay in there or it's a wizarding illness. i give up on the search for now, it's all to gross! (I'm really squeamish about that stuff) so, umm, is it a Muggle or Wizarding illness? i just want to know if i waste most of my time searching for something, if I'll come up with anything, okay? okay. so, umm, while you kill Dani, I'll read it all! :P or I'll write my own story! ha! i like both of them! I'll do it both! :P

wow, this was long and sort of pointless... oh well, it hopefully kept you entertained! :D i know i kept myself entertained! :D yeaaaaaaa! :P and no, i don't have a life, and yes, i am in the market for one! :P

Author's Response: Lol...I don't think you'll guess what's wrong with Dani. If she is indeed ill, it's not something you can research in Muggle databases... :D Thanks for the many splendid reviews!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/26/07 22:02
Chapter: Clouded

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE???? PLEASE UPDATE OR I MAY JUST GO CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SUPER CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND I'M STUCK IN CAPS LOCK TOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/04/07 12:59
Chapter: Clouded

Okay, this is what is going to happen, OR ELSE! lily will accept Remus for who he is. Dani will have a life altering illness and will be sent to st. Mungo's. Lily and the gang will go to St. Mungo's on a weekend and Dani will die in front of them. wow, that was really morbid. Ahh, I'm a demon! kill me, kill me... wait, no!!!!!!!!!! DON'T KILL ME! DON"T DO IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
okay, i don't think I'm a demon, yet. Get the next chapter up, or, or I'll, I'll, do something, EVIL to you! Every Villain Is Lemons! Hee-hee-hee, i love Sponge-bob. (turns on Television and cracks up at Patrick. "My. Name's. Not. RICK!!!!!!!!!!!!")

Author's Response: O.o You must be psychic, because I swear I--oh darn. Shutting up NOW. Thanks for all your lovely reviews! :)

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/04/07 12:05
Chapter: Beware The Glare

bout time theres a duel! we need one! and nice story too!

Author's Response: Yeah, duels are always fun...thank you!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/03/07 22:49
Chapter: Flashes of Time

Professor McGonagall came along and asked Tiger-that’s Potter’s kneazle-what had happened.

I reckon, being a cat animagus, the Professor can talk to cats. So anyway, she let Tiger and Mrs. Norris each tell their own version of the story, and decided that Mrs. Norris provoked Tiger. She scolded them both, though, and told them off for not behaving like ladies. Can you imagine that?!

All LOL for that! love your story and i'm going to hit the submit button below this super sexy review box. is he single? lol tee-hee-hee!

Author's Response: Lol...thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/03/07 22:39
Chapter: Flickering Destinies

“She probly follered the shmell of food,” Sirius said, his mouth bulging.

i can just imagine Sean Connery saying this in a thick accent. i just love that accent, it's just so cool!

Author's Response: Thank you! I love the accent too...

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/03/07 22:31
Chapter: Sparkle of Friendships

nice poem. i actually thought that James and Siri would get into a fight or something, with their family backgrounds and stuff. i hope this doesn't get sent four or seventeen times, so, cross your fingers. ohh, i'm off to read the next chapter, the wonderful chapter of LOS. and blah blah blah blah and something about Oz, i mean, LOS!

Author's Response: Haha. I forgot about that lovely poem. Well, James and Sirius are quite young still, and will get into plenty of fights. But James' parents aren't prejudiced so he wouldn't automatically hate Sirius because of his family background...though he probably would've heard something about them by eavesdropping every now and then. :D Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/03/07 22:19
Chapter: Bright Horizons

okay, i don't know why my computer just added my review FOUR time, it's sort of weird like that. sorry for wasting space!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Lol...that's OK. Maybe I'll get a mod on it. It usually happens to me if I have a slow connection hit the submit button over and over trying to make it work...or if I hit the backspace button on my browser, that sometimes made me end up with multiple reviews. I've since learned not to do those things. :)

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/03/07 22:17
Chapter: Bright Horizons

i think this chapter was sweet, except with the whole Petunia thing, that was just nasty, but great though! Next chapter, here i come!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/03/07 22:17
Chapter: Bright Horizons

i think this chapter was sweet, except with the whole Petunia thing, that was just nasty, but great though! Next chapter, here i come!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/03/07 22:16
Chapter: Bright Horizons

i think this chapter was sweet, except with the whole Petunia thing, that was just nasty, but great though! Next chapter, here i come!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 06/03/07 22:15
Chapter: Bright Horizons

i think this chapter was sweet, except with the whole Petunia thing, that was just nasty, but great though! Next chapter, here i come!

Author's Response: Lol well I'm not planning on Petunia being nasty all the time...that's just unrealistic in this case. But yeah, her initial reaction was not very nice. Thanks for reviewing!

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