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Name: midomidi2013 (Signed) · Date: 11/28/15 6:48 · For: The Tale of Amelia Weasley, Quidditch Extraodinaire
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كشف تسرب ال…ياه الكترونيا
شركة عزل خزانات بالدرعية
شركة عزل خزانات بالغاط
شركة عزل خزانات بثادق
شركة عزل خزانات بالدواد…ى
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شركة عزل خزانات بالقويعية
شركة عزل خزانات بوادي الدواسر
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شركة عزل خزانات بر…اح
شركة عزل خزانات بحري…لاء
شركة عزل خزانات بالزلفي
شركة عزل خزانات بضر…ا
شركة عزل خزانات بشقراء
 شركة عزل خزانات بحوطة بني ت…ي…
شركة عزل خزانات بالحريق
 شركة عزل خزانات بال…ج…عة
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شركة كشف تسربات ال…ياه بالغاط
شركة كشف تسربات ال…ياه بثادق
شركة كشف تسربات ال…ياه بالدواد…ى
شركة كشف تسربات ال…ياه بال…زاح…ية
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شركة كشف تسربات ال…ياه بشقراء
شركة كشف تسربات ال…ياه بحوطة بني ت…ي…
شركة كشف تسربات ال…ياه بالحريق
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Name: Gonz (Signed) · Date: 05/15/06 13:02 · For: The Tale of Amelia Weasley, Quidditch Extraodinaire
I really liked the imagery in the first paragragh, it really helps set the mood for your story.

One question I was left with from your story was, how did she get so good? You said her father let her play, but her brothers didn't. So did she do a Ginny Weasley and sneak into the broom shed, or what?

"Over the years, I tried and failed to play the sacred game." This sentence confused me, because when I read it I got the impression she has tried many times to play, but you list only one time she tried.

"He was Goliath, I was David, and the Snitch was going to be the stone that changed the course of history." Nice use of metaphor. I liked how you described the race for the snitch that way, you truly have a gift for description.

Overall, I'd say this is a really good story. It was a very creative idea that was well written.


Name: HermyRox12 (Signed) · Date: 05/06/06 16:26 · For: The Tale of Amelia Weasley, Quidditch Extraodinaire
I really liked this. I'm not to big into sports, but who can say no to Quidditch? This is a very nice piece. I like the names you chose. Didn't Madame Pomfrey say that she could mend bones in no time? Why would Amelia then be in a wheelchair? The school hospital wing is probably less-up to date than the Wizarding Hospitols, so couldn't they mend bones? Unless it was really bad. I just think that Wizards would be able to mend bones, even that far back in time.
HermyRox12


Name: Atarwyn (Anonymous) · Date: 02/07/06 16:18 · For: The Tale of Amelia Weasley, Quidditch Extraodinaire
You're most very welcome! Thank you for that note, I love to read your work ^.^ I hope you win and I'll be looking in to see if you do! Great job!!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing. I am sooo glad you liked it.


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