OMG!!!! I've been reading this chapter a ZILLION times already!!! :D when are you going to update the 14th chapter, by the way?? anyway, keep up the great work! i'll be waiting patiently in front of my computer, even if it takes a dozen years. because this story is worth the wait.... love you and your story!!! :)
loving this story update soon though the end had me in tears and im feeling a lttle sad for snape well i cant wait for the rest of the story
i love your story so much it is so AWESOME your a great writer
I cannot wait for an update! This fic is amazing, I always hated Hr/Marauder fics, but this one has totally changed my mind!
is there a sequel? i don't get how it ends. i want hermione and sirius to end up together! :D
I love it! But PLEASE take your time, something this good should NOT be rushed. However, don't take TOO long
I... can't stop... laughing! LMAO! Seriously, I'm showing these to my cousin, she'll crack up too!
i loved it...but the end doesn't really bring everything together...do harry and ron see hermione again? what happens?
i really like this story. can't wait for hermione to come home and see everybody *cough cough remus cough* hopefully you'll be updating this sometime in the not to distant future.
" " more catchy," he ended the conversation at that and as he walked away, Snape could here him singing lowly, "Snape got run over by a hippogriff, flying home from our school Christmas Eve..." "
dude this cracked me up. my favorite line in the whole story.
damn!!! i love this chapter!!!! =) congrats
What a dick! I'm glad that Gracie has finally stood up to her husband, and for Hermione. This story is great - you have enough angst and darkness in the plot to make it more real, but not too much to make it depressing. Great character development for Hermione, she seems so real! I can't wait for more!
I love it! It's really good. I don't usually go for Remus/Hermione but I like it the way you put it :D Update soon...please? with chocolate on top?
This is such a good story! You're really great at writing! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
Not as much Remus/Hermione action as I would've liked, and unfortunately, I need to nitpick.
The group disbanded and the Christmas holiday began
You missed the period on the end.
The dark lord had not been pleased with is work as of late and threatened his life.
The Dark Lord had not been please with his work as of late and threatened his life.
"Yeah. Um...Herm, I know that you would probably be with your family right now, but trust me, you're like family here."
I think this is a bit out of character for someone to call Hermione 'Herm', even if he/she is in a crazy mood.
She no longer had to life a life of heart ache, pain, and terror.
She no longer had to live a life of heartache, pain, and terror.
*cracks knuckles* Okay, now that that's over, I can tell you how wonderful it was! It really was a pleasure to read.
she could help but smile at his puppy dog eyes.
"Hey, that's my look. I taught you that look, but you weren't supposed to use it!" yelled Sirius.
That's too cute! And unfortunately I just found another nitpick, but I'll let you find it yourself. *guilty look*
Great great great great job, despite what you may be thinking with all the grammatical errors. Don't get yourself down, and just work hard. I've had my share of errors, and I bounce right back. Keep up the great work. Best wishes!
I am really engroced in this story, it seems to have as many twists and turns as JKR's work. For a moment, before Hermione's mother and step father were identified I thought it was an adult Hermione and Snape, I thought maybe she'd grown up in the past and he'd somehow captured her. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Hysterical! Loved the carols
I love this story.
Oh so much =]
Hey, don't sell this chapter short. I really liked it. My favorite is still the one where Remus and Hermione kissed passionately on the forest floor. :D I still have warm feelings inside. You are an amazing author.
I loved what happened between James and Lily. That was beautifully written. This chapter was amazing! :D