That was...abrupt, but sweet. Haha.
Oh, wow, this is soo sweet!! i reaaally like it! Good job!
Overall...I loved it!!!!!
so cute. it made me feel so warm and fuzzy. hehe.
It's good, but I can't really see them getting married at seventeen.
Write a new story!
This is such a great story! The way you used both points of view was brilliant.
AW! So cute! Very nice one-shot. Short and sweet- good job
i thought that was very sweet!! u should think about writing more storys like that!! 10/10!
aww! that was so sweet! you should write more...it was a very fluffy and happy story! great job!
I just read this and I thought it was really cute, especially at the end when they are crying of happiness. I liked it!