Reviews For The Fifth Horcrux
Reviewer: loligo8me
Date: 02/20/06 20:23
Chapter: Chapter 1 - A Depressing Chore for Dumbledore

Sounds good so far. You write it very well and I enjoyed reading it. Do update soon :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'll try to keep it on track.

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 02/20/06 19:25
Chapter: Hopelessly in Love

And . . . the second chapter!! I'm interested to see how the whole relationship thing is going to work out. The last sentence (I'm going to try and quote it but it may be a paraphrase): "She's going to get hurt, and I had to go and do the worst possible thing" or the like, doesn't quite make sense. Is she going to get hurt because he kissed her (I'm assuming that's the bad thing) or is she going to get hurt anyway and he just made it worse? Mmm. I still have no idea which you meant.

The poor gnomes. Harry would beat himself up over that. He really ought to tell Hermione, I think. Even if she was horrified, she'd have the right words to say.

So now I'm wondering . . . are you going to have a different story for every Horcrux up until the Final Battle, with Harry and Hermione's relationship progressing with every story? That would be interesting, if a little hard to work out. maybe even impossible . . .

Well, I'm off! Thanks again for writing believable stories like this, it's what converted me to H/Hr! Have a nice day!



Author's Response: Hi Cinderella! What Harry is thinking here: "She's going to get hurt, and I had to go and do the worst thing possible." Is that he isn't good for her. He's afraid to let a romance start with Hermione because he doesn't want to break her heart. He may get killed in his fight against Voldemort and he doesn't want Hermione grieving over him. She might be killed or maimed in a fight with the Death Eaters if she is too close to him. He doesn't want her (or Ron) to be involved in his fight, it's too dangerous. If he suceeds he'll become a killer and he doesn't want the girl he loves to be bound to a killer. In short, he can't have a romance with Hermione because he loves her. The Diary was destroyed in CoS. The Ring was destroyed by Dumbledore. The Locket was destroyed in my earlier fanfic HP and the needed one. He has the cup and the means to destroy it. That leaves only the 5th Horcrux and then the Snake and then Voldemort. Since the Snake is Voldemort's pet, the 5th Horcrux is really the last thing to take care of before hunting down Voldemort. The problem is Harry doesn't know what it is. This story is going to be very complicated.

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 02/20/06 13:48
Chapter: Chapter 1 - A Depressing Chore for Dumbledore

Sorry, just had to leave another review so you didn't get me wrong. I'm much more excited for the mystery than the romance in this story, just so you know. I knew I should've chosen a word like "cliff-hangerish." I was afraid you'd take that word wrong. Okay, that's all! Have a nice day!

Author's Response: Hi Cinderella! It's Okay! Your reviews have been one of the nicest parts of my day. I have this melodramatic tendency to end chapters on cliff-hangers.

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 02/20/06 10:33
Chapter: Chapter 1 - A Depressing Chore for Dumbledore

I've been wondering if you would write a sequel to this. I'm glad Chapter 2's in queue, because this chapter did not end properly. I mean, the ending was fine, just rather . . . unrevealing.

By the way, you might want to be careful. Mormons in Utah don't practice polygamy and, while I've never met someone who went to a magical school, we might be open to witchcraft. Goodness knows we have nothing against the HP books.



Author's Response: Hi Thanks for the review! I'm just joking about Utah, I've got friends that are Latter Day Saints and I don't want to offend anyone. I wouldn't seriously advocate an H/Hr/G polygamous relationship either. You mentioned that the ending of chapter 1 was "unrevealing". There's going to be more mystery than kissing in this "romance" fic. Expect some puzzles.

Reviewer: hp_number1fan_fl
Date: 02/19/06 20:58
Chapter: Chapter 1 - A Depressing Chore for Dumbledore

I can't bring my self to read your Fic, because I'm a Harry/Ginny shipper, but I will say THANK YOU FINALLY for giving SNAPE and MALFOY what they deserve!!! I completely agree that they are SCUM. I can't stand all the Hermione/Draco shipper nonsense. Thx!!!

Author's Response: Hi! I can respect H/G. They break up at the end of HBP but it is very uncertain if they will really split up for good or if they will get back together again. Since I like H/Hr, I have to break up H/G in my fic. If they were Mormons in Utah we could write H/Hr/G fics, except the Mormons probably don't like witchcraft.

Reviewer: Soap
Date: 02/19/06 20:32
Chapter: Chapter 1 - A Depressing Chore for Dumbledore

Interesting beginning... I'm excited to see more! And I'm so with you on the Hermione & Harry thing. I laughed out loud when I read the "Ron 'Accio Brains' Weasley"! That's exactly how I feel. :P

Author's Response: Hi Soap! Thanks for the nice review. Second chapter has been submitted. This is a sequel to an earlier story of mine: HP and the Needed One. I did several things in that story that become part of this story: 1) Kingsley Shacklebolt, Hespia Jones, The Creevy boys, and Luna Lovegood's father were all murdered. (Sometimes I miss those characters.) 2) Ginny Weasley has been selected to play professional Quidditch with the Holyhead Harpies and they wear sexy uniforms. 3) Hogwarts will be open and Harry and Hermione have jobs as student teachers, they'll be teaching 1st and 2nd year students while carrying 7th year loads. 4) The address of Harry's house has been changed to Number 12 and 7/16 Greenfield Way so Snape can't find it. 5) I invented a spell called "Bang" where the wizard points his wand at a foe, shouts "Bang" and shoots him. I hope those particular inventions of mine don't grate on too many nerves.

Author's Response: Hi Soap! Thanks for the nice review. Second chapter has been submitted. This is a sequel to an earlier story of mine: HP and the Needed One. I did several things in that story that become part of this story: 1) Kingsley Shacklebolt, Hespia Jones, The Creevy boys, and Luna Lovegood's father were all murdered. (Sometimes I miss those characters.) 2) Ginny Weasley has been selected to play professional Quidditch with the Holyhead Harpies and they wear sexy uniforms. 3) Hogwarts will be open and Harry and Hermione have jobs as student teachers, they'll be teaching 1st and 2nd year students while carrying 7th year loads. 4) The address of Harry's house has been changed to Number 12 and 7/16 Greenfield Way so Snape can't find it. 5) I invented a spell called "Bang" where the wizard points his wand at a foe, shouts "Bang" and shoots him. I hope those particular inventions of mine don't grate on too many nerves.

Author's Response: Hi Soap! Thanks for the nice review. Second chapter has been submitted. This is a sequel to an earlier story of mine: HP and the Needed One. I did several things in that story that become part of this story: 1) Kingsley Shacklebolt, Hespia Jones, The Creevy boys, and Luna Lovegood's father were all murdered. (Sometimes I miss those characters.) 2) Ginny Weasley has been selected to play professional Quidditch with the Holyhead Harpies and they wear sexy uniforms. 3) Hogwarts will be open and Harry and Hermione have jobs as student teachers, they'll be teaching 1st and 2nd year students while carrying 7th year loads. 4) The address of Harry's house has been changed to Number 12 and 7/16 Greenfield Way so Snape can't find it. 5) I invented a spell called "Bang" where the wizard points his wand at a foe, shouts "Bang" and shoots him. I hope those particular inventions of mine don't grate on too many nerves.

Author's Response: I don't know why my response appears three times. Sorry, I'm not emphatic, I just hit some wrong buttons somehow.

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