Reviews For The Fifth Horcrux
Reviewer: Geekchic
Date: 03/27/06 18:30
Chapter: Chapter 5 Hermione’s Charms

I LOVE this story! Its amazing! The questions at the end of this chapter are brilliant! I think I know the answers and I really hope i'm wrong! I think I get the first chapter now! Can't wait for the next chapter! 10/10!

Reviewer: Geekchic
Date: 03/27/06 18:30
Chapter: Chapter 5 Hermione’s Charms

I LOVE this story! Its amazing! The questions at the end of this chapter are brilliant! I think I know the answers and I really hope i'm wrong! I think I get the first chapter now! Can't wait for the next chapter! 10/10!

Author's Response: Hi Geekchic! Thanks for the nice review, I really appreciate it. Chapter 6 is in the queue (and it's been there for 13 days). If you really hope your guess about the fifth horcrux is wrong, your probably right.

Reviewer: slumbery_sunshine1
Date: 03/20/06 1:09
Chapter: Chapter 5 Hermione’s Charms

Oooh I read your other reviews after I posted and I feel the need to guess these ones you left for someone. Why did Harry have a flashback? Was it because Hermione performed that spell to see if he was a horcrux? Why was Hermione crying? If I'm right about why Harry had the flashback then I'm guessing its because Dumbledore is right and Harry IS the last Horcrux.

Author's Response: Thanks again!

Reviewer: slumbery_sunshine1
Date: 03/20/06 1:06
Chapter: Chapter 5 Hermione’s Charms

1) What is the fifth horcrux? I'm guessing it's Harry. 2) What does Hermione’s blouse conceal, besides her breasts? The medallion that Dumbledore said wasn't a horcrux at the beggining of the story. Why that's important, I haven't a clue... yet. Good story so far! I read the first story a while ago, I never knew there was a second part until I came across this one today. I love both your stories, and I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Hi sunshine! Thanks for the nice review! Chapter 6 is in the queue. Thanks for mentioning the first story. This one doesn't make much sense unless you read HP and the Needed One first.

Reviewer: Dox
Date: 03/19/06 21:29
Chapter: Chapter 1 - A Depressing Chore for Dumbledore

King: Great beginning to your story. I’m also one of those “delusional people who would, in the end, rather see Hermione paired up with Harry”. I find that you portray emotions and moods very well and this is what has hooked me on your story. I have read all 5 chapters that have been posted so far. The great mixture of tension and a little humor plays out well especially considering your story plot in regard to what or as it seems WHO is the 5th Horcrux. I look forward to the completion of your story. Have you ever considered that the basilisk killed by Harry in the Chamber of Secrets being a Horcrux? It was more power and long lived in comparison to Nagini, yet it’s just a thought. Once again great work.

Author's Response: Hi Dox, Thanks for the nice review! I have never thought about the basilisk as a horcrux. It is an interesting idea. That monster was put into the Chamber of Secrets by Salazar Slytherin 1000 years ago. It was a rather long lived beast wasn't it? You don't suppose Slytherin could have made a horcrux? If the horcrux keeps a person alive,can the person keep the horcrux alive? What if Slytherin's not dead? Well that's too complicated, I'm letting my imagination run away. The goal of this little story is to get Harry and Hermione to the wedding alter alive.

Reviewer: Fanfixreader541
Date: 03/17/06 0:42
Chapter: Chapter 5 Hermione’s Charms

Oops, sorry about the double post.

Reviewer: Fanfixreader541
Date: 03/17/06 0:41
Chapter: Chapter 5 Hermione’s Charms

Very good chapter, great questions to, Though if you where paying attention the questions would be easy, though i do not know what the necklace has to do with anything, i do understand how the fifth horcrux can be a VERY bad thing...If im correct in thinking it is what it is

Author's Response: Hi Fanfixreader! Thanks for the review! I tried to make it fairly easy to figure out what the fifth horcrux is so you can understand Hermione's feelings. The necklace mystery is harder because I haven't given very many clues, and they are mostly in chapter one.

Reviewer: Fanfixreader541
Date: 03/17/06 0:40
Chapter: Chapter 5 Hermione’s Charms

Very good chapter, great questions to, Though if you where paying attention the questions would be easy, though i do not know what the necklace has to do with anything, i do understand how the fifth horcrux can be a VERY bad thing...If im correct in thinking it is what it is

Reviewer: HermioneJPotter
Date: 03/16/06 17:51
Chapter: Chapter 5 Hermione’s Charms

1) What is the fifth horcrux? I dont know... I dont think i was paying much attention while reading that part.....2) What does Hermione’s blouse conceal, besides her breasts? Isn't it the necklice ??? I wonder if it's importand... well anyway... Awesome chapter... Please update soon... I just can't wait to read more... Great job..10+++

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! 1) Clues about the fifth horcrux are in chapter one and Hermione's pocket. Why did Harry have a flashback. Why was Hermione crying? 2) Yes the necklace is important. Very important.

Reviewer: stark40763
Date: 03/11/06 13:20
Chapter: Chapter 4 Acting Cheerful

Harry's Scar is the 5th Horcrux isnt it? thats why Hermione's so upset....and you should involve Ron in the search more ya know, I know Ron's a bit of a risk, but he's pretty brave in a crisis after all...

Author's Response: Hi stark! Thanks for the review. Harry doesn't want either Ron or Hermione involved. It's dangerous, and he loves them both. But Harry can't do it all by himself and they will be involved. Do you really think Ron's brave in a crisis? He's definitely shown bravery at times, but he's also shown moments of panic and paralyzing fear.

Reviewer: danz_girl05
Date: 03/10/06 0:55
Chapter: Chapter 4 Acting Cheerful

This is a very exciting, mysetrious and clever story. I am not the biggest Harry and Hermione shipper but this is done very clearly and well. I like the bit with Paul and Peter, very clever. It's not too fast too. Please update!!!

Author's Response: I invented Paul and Peter Prewitt because I need a couple of very daring brats in chapter 5. Fred and George are such great characters I had to copy them. Since I've made Hermione and Harry student teachers, I can present the trouble makers from the faculty viewpoint.

Reviewer: HermioneJPotter
Date: 03/09/06 21:02
Chapter: Chapter 4 Acting Cheerful

Wow ...That was an awesome update... I just loved it !! I fell sad for Hermione and Harry.... They are soo ment to be together and they can't..It's like a forbbiten love or something... Anyway... Please update soon..I just can't wait to read more.... Great job on this update.... 10++++

Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review! Harry's got so many problems, like Voldemort etc., I can't imagine any relationship that involves him being easy. Chapter 5 is in the queue. It's been taking about a week and a half to get the updates posted. That's actually fine with me. I'm totally bogged down with chapter 8 and might have to redo chapter 7.

Reviewer: Xaviel
Date: 03/09/06 5:58
Chapter: Chapter 3 Secrets

Nice variation, I've enjoyed it so far. It would be nice if Rowling put the 'main' character in the 'main' love plot in the next book, after reading this im glad to see im not the only one bewildered by which way its leaning...

Author's Response: Hi Xaviel! Thanks for the nice review! In HBP, Percy Weasley is still on bad terms with his family. Dumbledore explained to Hermione that it is often easier to forgive someone for being wrong than for being right. Maybe he was talking about someone else in addition to Percy. The H/Hr relationship was developing really nicely in OotP and then it was seemingly sidetracked in HBP. My idea is that Harry was mad at Hermione because she was right about not going to the Ministry of Magic. Yet Harry spent every evening studying with Hermione while Ron was with Lavender. Harry knew Ginny would accept his decision to break up because she wouldn't say "Be careful" or "Don't do it". He was thinking about the girl who would say such things.

Reviewer: HermioneJPotter
Date: 03/02/06 21:36
Chapter: Chapter 3 Secrets

Wow awesome chapter... Loved it...I wonder what Dumbledore said to her... Please update soon..I just can't wait to read more... Great job on the update.. 10+++

Author's Response: Thanks! There are hints in chapters 4 and 5 about what Dumbledore said, but it won't all come out until the end.

Reviewer: hpotter2391
Date: 02/28/06 20:42
Chapter: Chapter 3 Secrets

dude this is a great story i love it ! ! ! i love the hp/hg i cant wait 4 the next chapter 10+++ 1 of my favorite good job!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review! Chapter 4 is in the queue. Hermione has had a major shock to her system and will act a bit strange for a few days. Major hints about what's going on will appear in chapter 5. Chapter 6 is about action, Harry's going to fly on his broom!

Reviewer: HermioneJPotter
Date: 02/23/06 22:15
Chapter: Hopelessly in Love

Here's a pop quiz! What does Hermione do when she takes Felix Felicis? A. conjure birds from thin air, B. finish her homework C. kiss Ron D. hug Harry. (Good ol' Felix. Things will work out Okay.) Hm...... I don't know.... but I'm going to say D. hug Harry...

Author's Response: Very Good! You earn a 100, A+ on the quiz. Little hints like that keep me a H/Hr shipper.

Reviewer: HermioneJPotter
Date: 02/22/06 19:42
Chapter: Hopelessly in Love

Wow that was soo sad.. Too bad that Harry can't realy commit now... But I bet that they're going to go out soon... They're going to need each others love to survive... right ??... well... awesome job... I can't wait to read more... 10+++

Author's Response: There's always a sad side to love. Harry Potter is in a very bad situation and that will hurt anyone who loves him as much as it hurts him. On an upbeat note: Here's a pop quiz! What does Hermione do when she takes Felix Felicis? A. conjure birds from thin air, B. finish her homework C. kiss Ron D. hug Harry. (Good ol' Felix. Things will work out Okay.)

Reviewer: HermioneJPotter
Date: 02/22/06 19:15
Chapter: Chapter 1 - A Depressing Chore for Dumbledore

Yey you're writing a sequel !!!! I'm sooo happy... I just loved you're first story.. It's still on my favorites.... Awesome job on the first chapter.... 10++++

Author's Response: Thanks! I've been real busy at work, but I'll try to keep it on track.

Reviewer: wolfgirl
Date: 02/22/06 18:47
Chapter: Hopelessly in Love

king hey Iv now read A moment that was not, Harry Potter and the needed one, and part of E Deus Unum. Im happy to know that youv created a sequal to needed one. Your and incredible writter and your ideas are good and origanal. Im dissipointed that you feel the need to make part of this story an R i stopped reading E Deus Unum becouse of its later rateings. Im not really sure why you feel the need to add this kind of content to your stories when their incredible without them.

Author's Response: Hi Wolfgirl, I hear what you're saying about the R-rated stuff. I try to avoid too much sexuality although this is a romance. JKR is addressing a very mature situation. A boy is turning into a young man under very stressful circumstances. Some of the characters I've borrowed from JKR with are not nice people. I would favor an R-rating for some of the torture that is in HP novels (Detention with Dolores for instance seemed to have some dominatrix implications to me.) JKR does a marvelous job of toning things down. She didn't describe where that baby Voldemort came from or Burtha Jorgenson's role in its creation, but I'd bet the backstory on that murder would earn an R-rating if she wrote it. In this fic there's going to be some killing and I think the violence is as deserving of an R-rated warning as overt sexuality. What I find amazing is what happens to my read ratings when I venture into R-territory. In E Deus Unum I had one chapter called Portkeys and Pain that deserved the R-rating because of the torture Hermione suffered. That chapter has almost twice as many reads as any other chapter around it. I find that a bit disturbing.

Reviewer: rocksteady
Date: 02/20/06 22:47
Chapter: Chapter 1 - A Depressing Chore for Dumbledore

I love this chapter. It seems to end in a cliff hanger, but that just makes me want to read more. I love how it is almost a dark/angsty fic (don't take that in a wrong way!) but at the same time a romance. Great job!

Author's Response: Hi rocksteady! Dark/Angsty? You have it exactly right. Harry's parents loved him. They're dead. Sirius and Dumbledore loved him. They're dead. Harry formed an equal partnership once. He tried to share the glory with Cedric Diggory. He's dead. In my fic Hermione is in love with Harry. Poor girl.

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