Reviews For The Fifth Horcrux
Reviewer: HermioneJPotter
Date: 08/21/06 18:51
Chapter: Chapter 17 The Battle of Hogsmeade

Wow...another great chapter.... Awesome job... I can't wait to read more...

Reviewer: HermioneJPotter
Date: 08/21/06 18:27
Chapter: Chapter 16 Things Are Brewing in the Dungeon

Aweasome chapter... i LOVED IT... I hope that Umbridge won't cause any problems/// great job.. i can't wait to read more....

Reviewer: HermioneJPotter
Date: 08/21/06 18:05
Chapter: Chapter 15 Ronís Secret Plans

Wow... That was a scary chapter... I'm soo glad that they're all alive... UI wonder whats up with the Australia letter.... Awesome chapter.... Great job... I can't wait to read more...

Reviewer: HermioneJPotter
Date: 08/21/06 17:40
Chapter: Chapter 14 A Letter From Luna

wow....Awesome chapter....I love it... i wonder what's wrong with Hermione... Great job... i can't wait to read more...

Reviewer: HarryHermionegurl
Date: 08/19/06 1:20
Chapter: Chapter 19 Over the Cliff

this is awesome! I think I know whose horcrux the enumerator is....

Author's Response: Hi Harryhermionegurl! Thanks for the nice review! Harry suspects that Hermione wants to delay the inevitable confrontation between him and Voldemort, so he's not sure if he believes everything she says.

Reviewer: debs
Date: 08/17/06 0:13
Chapter: Chapter 19 Over the Cliff

OMG!!! i hope they validate soon i cant wait anymore!!!!!just a question why didnt dumbledore destroy the necklace?

Author's Response: Hi debs! The answer to your question about Dumbledore is in chapter 1. Chapter 19 ended at a real tense moment. Unfortunately there's no real closure of this situation in chapter 20.

Reviewer: Eve
Date: 08/16/06 18:35
Chapter: Chapter 19 Over the Cliff

Just out of curiousity, how does Ron know what Hermy saw in the pensieve? Did she just tell him, or did he find out by accident? Ron's a sweetheart, but not the type to trust deep dark secrets w/. Maybe it's just me, but that's my opinion.

Author's Response: Hi Eve! Hermione told Ron in chapter five. I agree with you about Ron. That's the reason Harry never told Ron about destroying the Locket and Cup. Ron has no need to know. But Hermione had no one else to turn to.

Reviewer: Eve
Date: 08/13/06 18:16
Chapter: Chapter 19 Over the Cliff

AHHHHHH! NOOOOOO! God That was MEAN!

Please hurry with the next chapter. I love this story.


Author's Response: Hi Eve! Thanks for the Great review! MEAN! That was exactly what I was shooting for!

Reviewer: songchic_siruslover
Date: 08/13/06 11:28
Chapter: Chapter 19 Over the Cliff

OMG!!! Did the death eaters take her? great chapter!!!

Author's Response: Hi songchic! Thanks for the nice review! As for your question. Yes.

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 08/11/06 21:17
Chapter: Chapter 19 Over the Cliff

*stares wide-eyed at the screen* Wait a second, wasn't Diggory just there with Umbridge? They had Hermione, and.... *Gasps* Holey-Wort (My new name for Voldemort) has her! aw, FUDGE!!! now Harry has to go and fight him when he doesn't know if the necklace is the last Horcrux! *takes dolls of Umbridge and Voldemort and rips them in half* You can join me if you want! It's all I can do. 10/10 update pretty please with ice cream and hot fudge and a cherry on top?

Author's Response: Hi pottergirl! That ice cream sounds good! Chapter 20 is in the queue. Did you notice that when McGonagall asked when Hermione would be done at the Ministry, the fellow with Umbridge didn't answer her question. He didn't know what Diggory's letter said.

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 08/11/06 20:55
Chapter: Chapter 18 Dirty Laundry

SNAPE AND THAT SKEETER WOMAN!!!! I KNEW IT!!!! they were SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO meant for each other!!! 10/10

Author's Response: Hi Pottergirl! A spy makes it with a reporter that he went to school with. It seemed an obvious possibility to me, but I'm delusional.

Reviewer: sskywalker00
Date: 08/11/06 5:33
Chapter: Chapter 19 Over the Cliff

oh nooooooooooooo what has happened who use polyjuice poation to diggory? where is Hermione? greah chapter

Author's Response: Hi sskywalker! Thanks for the nice review! What has happened? Where is Hermione? These are the questions that are now foremost in Harry's mind. Polyjuice potion? Who do you think?

Reviewer: orlandolover
Date: 08/11/06 0:53
Chapter: Chapter 19 Over the Cliff

Oh wow. That was soooo good. I can't wait for more! I loved the part where Harry yelled out, "I love you." Aww. What a cliffhanger. I really hope there will be more soon, I don't think I can wait. AMAZING JOB!!!!! And the plot thickens..

Author's Response: Hi orlandolover! Thanks for the nice review. Chapter 20 is in the queue and things will get a bit darker. I'm sorry about the cliffhanger but it seemed like a good place to end the chapter. Harry told Hermione "I love you." You know he'll always do the right thing, he'll just wait until the last possible moment to do it.

Reviewer: cleverlydisguised
Date: 08/10/06 21:07
Chapter: Chapter 19 Over the Cliff

wow did that ever twist and turn. despite everything ron did, i think expelling him would be fine. he deserves it. if the horocrux is whose i think it is, then you have truely done your job as an author even if it is one the internet on a fanfiction site. i vote you most likely to become an author and me most likely to trip over air or nothing. again. for the 69,845th time.
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thank you for writing so well.

Author's Response: Hi cleverlydisguised! Hermione was appalled by what Ron did to her and it took a few days for her to calm down and think things through. Ron gave her the Love Potion and plotted to take her to Australia because he really does care about her and is concerned for her safety. But Hermione doesn't want Ron to be expelled because she sees the need to keep an eye on him. Harry doesn't know what Dumbledore told her in the Pensieve, but Ron does.

Reviewer: Sweetpal
Date: 08/09/06 6:34
Chapter: Chapter 18 Dirty Laundry

I love your story and I think youre a very good writer...You story is my fav story!

Author's Response: Hi Sweetpal! Thanks for the nice review! Chapter 20 gets a bit dark.

Reviewer: hermoninny
Date: 08/08/06 14:28
Chapter: Chapter 19 Over the Cliff

Even though this chapter hasn't been validated yet, im sure it's going to be awsome lol.

Author's Response: Hi hermoninny! Thanks for the vote of confidence!

Reviewer: orlandolover
Date: 08/05/06 15:54
Chapter: Chapter 1 - A Depressing Chore for Dumbledore

I read your reviews and the way you answer them reminds me of the way JK Rowling answers questions.. Sometimes, you just make clever statements or say things that get us thinking. I just noticed.. but yeah, thought I would point it out to you. haha

Author's Response: Hi orlandolover, If one of my fan fics turns out to be super popular, about 5000 people might read it. The 7th HP book will be read by more than 100 million people. When the seventh book comes out about, about two billion dollars will change hands in bookstores. I wonder how much money will change hands as a result of gambling on the end of HP? You can buy a book for under $20. How many people will bet $100 or more on who's going to die? Everything JKR says affects the gambling odds. Before HBP was released, a guy stole a copy from the printing plant, he was negotiating a price with a reported and a gun was pulled. The issue wasn't whether Dumbledore would live or die, he's fiction, the issue was gambling, and a real person could have been killed. JKR is operating under a lot of pressure.

Reviewer: Sweetpal
Date: 08/04/06 18:54
Chapter: Chapter 18 Dirty Laundry

Love your story! You are a great writer! your like a 2nd jk rowling!

Author's Response: Hi Sweetpal, Thanks for the nice review! I enjoy this hobby. Since I can't wait for the seventh book, I'm just writing one myself. This way I know it will turn out the way I want (ha ha).

Reviewer: orlandolover
Date: 08/04/06 13:35
Chapter: Chapter 18 Dirty Laundry

yay! they're updating! it was reallyyyyyyyy good! can't wait for more. i hope they update chapter 19 soon. i love this story soo much!

Author's Response: Hi orlandolover! Thanks for the nice review. I was a bit worried that people would be disappointed by the Snape-Skeeter sex scene (it's not a love-scene). I know that you want to see Harry making it with Hermione. In chapter 19 Harry will tell Hermione that he loves her.

Reviewer: cleverlydisguised
Date: 08/04/06 12:19
Chapter: Chapter 18 Dirty Laundry

you are AWESOM!!!!! i don't know why but i didn't even think that ron would use a love potion. guess i'm not as smart as i thought i am. oh well. wonderful chapter, your stories are like fine wine, they get better as time goes by. have you ever considered a career as an author?

Author's Response: Hi cleverlydisguised! You are really very nice! Thank you! The idea that Ron might be inclined to use a love potion on Hermione comes from the way I read his personal and family history. Mr. and Mrs. Weasley have a wonderful marriage, not perfect! but there is no perfect couple. Mrs. Weasley told Hermione and Ginny some story about a Love potion incident that made the girls both laugh. If it involved Arthur and Molly and there was a no-harm-done and it was a very humorous event, then there might just be a family acceptance of Love Potions. Fred and George have no ingrained opposition to Love potions, they're making money off them! Ron has had a personal experience with a Love potion that has to affect the way he thinks about Romilda Vane. He can't ignore Romilda Vane, he might despise her but he can't forget that for a short while he was madly in love with her and he could see her attractive features. The love potion didn't really hurt Ron, that poison in the mead was bad but that was another matter. He might even be able to see the good side of the incident. If he had started kissing Romilda, he might have been able to break up with Lavender without having to use Hermione as a shield. Plus, Ron has had positive experiences with Felix Felicis. None of this proves that Ron would start abusing potions, but I could see it as a possibility.

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