Reviews For The Undivided Four
Reviewer: demrok
Date: 03/07/07 0:57
Chapter: Not Another One

Great story cant wait for chapter 10

Author's Response: Yeah.. about chappie 10... It might be a while before you get that. I kno it's been a while already, but school has to take precedence over fics. I dont like it either, and I will try to get that to you asap. Thank you so much for the review!!!

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 03/04/07 15:20
Chapter: Not Another One

Whoa, that is so cool! I can't believe that they are suddenly all in another prophecy! And the thing about them being teachers now is really cool, too!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You're review has made my day a litlel brighter!

Reviewer: iloveyouhunnay
Date: 02/25/07 11:18
Chapter: Starting Over at St.Mungo's

wow that was pretty good. i really liked it, especially the fact that some of the magic you made up yourself! 3 cheers! yay!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm having some school issues right now, but i'll try to get the next chapter up as soon as i can!

Reviewer: spike312
Date: 02/17/07 20:45
Chapter: Not Another One

Sweet! Keep writing and I like that hint you gave. A couple mistakes where Harry got his Apparition test with Moody. Well written, not rushed at all. Love the thing with the Marauders. 10/10!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Also, thanks for the email, i'm pretty sure that was you, and pointing out that i had errors around the apparation test. I'll fix those as soon as i have a spare second. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Felton_Fan_For_Life
Date: 02/07/07 21:35
Chapter: Not Another One

Oooh, very good! I just finished the entire story! It was great! Well please update very soon becausei think the suspense might kill me!!! (well maybe not, but you catch my drift)
A Loyal Reader,

Author's Response: thank you so much! I'll try to have the update for you soon!

Reviewer: harryginnyforever
Date: 02/05/07 16:58
Chapter: Not Another One

Oh, great. Another one. At least now Ginny has a chance...Seeing as she's one of the "ONES"...*huggles you much*

Author's Response: Yup. She's definately not going to be left out anymore!

Reviewer: crazyhpgirl
Date: 02/04/07 22:41
Chapter: Not Another One

Wow! I can't believe they're all teachers! Hermione's in her element.

Author's Response: Yes, she absolutely is!

Reviewer: wonwon_hermy
Date: 02/04/07 18:03
Chapter: Not Another One

i really like this story update soon i cant wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot! You've made chemistry homework more bearable!

Reviewer: HJPCATI
Date: 02/04/07 16:03
Chapter: Starting Over at St.Mungo's

I like the plot and the ideas of this story but its way too rushed for me. Everything that I've just read should have been set out over far more chapters in my opinion.

Author's Response: Yeah, you're the second person to say that the story feels rushed, but I don't know what to do about it! I'm not really great at streching things out. What I intended to have as chappie 10 is in three parts, so maybe that'll solve some of the russing issues. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Lady of the Lake
Date: 02/04/07 14:45
Chapter: Not Another One

I need to know about how they're lessons go!

Author's Response: Well, what I had intended to be chapter 10 is split into 3 parts because it's so long, but we'll get to the lessons in chappie 11/12!

Reviewer: Magical Pixie Horse
Date: 02/04/07 14:07
Chapter: Not Another One

I love this story! It is fantastic! The prophecy is amazing! I absolutely love this story! Please update soon!


Author's Response: Thanks ao much!!

Reviewer: Ginzig
Date: 02/04/07 11:11
Chapter: Not Another One

Very cool! My interpretation was the same as Hermione's. Very creative, nicely written. I like that Harry, Ginny, Ron, and Hermione are going to be helping teach. Really great chapter. Worth the wait. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Reviews like yours make me keep on writing!

Reviewer: TheHighMooster
Date: 02/04/07 11:09
Chapter: Not Another One

Wonderful Story! Keep it Coming!!!

Author's Response: Ditto.

Reviewer: TheHighMooster
Date: 02/04/07 11:09
Chapter: Not Another One

Wonderful Story! Keep it Coming!!!

Author's Response: Thank you!!!

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 01/05/07 21:49
Chapter: Parties and Professors

grrr... Could I please have an update? Please update soon, I'm desprate!!!!!!!!! *rips out hair* 10/10

Author's Response: chappie 9 is in edits, and should be out by next weekend at the very latest. Thank you for being so patient.

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 01/03/07 21:05
Chapter: The Attack

I LOVE Harry/Ginny fics!!! I'm writing one right now, actually!! It's on another site, but the address is in my stats. It's in the Website bar thingy.... HA!! I said 'Thingy!' Anyway, look for the name, Radcliffelover90210. That is me/moi, however you want to say it. Anyway, please read it.

Author's Response: I love Harry/Ginny fics too, but I don't think in a review for someone else's fic is the right place to advertize for it. If you or anyone else wishes for me to read one of their stories, please contace me through my author page, and not through reviews with out even mentioning what you thought of my story/chapter specifically. Thank you.

Reviewer: hp and gw freak
Date: 12/26/06 18:05
Chapter: Parties and Professors

good story really amazing the whole reviewing altogether because i just finished reading the story......the way harry and ginny get back together is is sort of the way i want them to get back together in the seventh book.......oh! by the way have u heard the 7th book's name 'harry potter and the deathly hallows' gives me keep writing...i really like to read more of your work...keep it going!!!!!

Author's Response: I heard about the title for book 7 too! I'm a little dissappointed with it to tell you the truth. Chappies 9 and 10 are written and are being typed, and 11 is almost done. Thanks for the review. You really brightened my day!

Reviewer: Wileycat
Date: 12/20/06 14:26
Chapter: Parties and Professors

Its a good story so far but not enough about Ron and Hermione in it for my taste. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'll try to have more Ron/Hermione moments in the future.

Reviewer: Au_n_Snitch
Date: 12/13/06 22:55
Chapter: The Attack

So.Cal. does rock!! I ought to know--I LIVE HERE!! Long Live LA!!
When's the next chapter coming up?? Get crackin!

Author's Response: Me too! The next chapter is coming soon, and i just need to type it and get it edited and it will be out. Not long now. Two weeks, tops. ~snhpf

Reviewer: GinnyPottergirl
Date: 12/10/06 2:42
Chapter: Parties and Professors

I love the game they play.
"I've never gotten so obsessed with a fanfic, just waiting for it to update, that I had to be restrained"
*shot of Firewhiskey*
: )

Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much!!! Chappie nine is being typed, but this week is going to be hectic, so look for it next weekend or the one after that. I think I'll make it a holiday gift to you all. Thanks for the review!

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