Reviews For The Undivided Four
Reviewer: bstybyz
Date: 08/24/07 21:57
Chapter: Cindy, Mark Matthews and Sylvia Snape

hmmmm.....i lik were u r going w/ the story so keep on writing and ill keep reading

Author's Response: ya, i dont intend to change it for DH, and i have plans for exactly what i want to do. ~Snhpf

Reviewer: bstybyz
Date: 08/24/07 21:34
Chapter: Will Rescue

i think im hooked

Author's Response: lol thank you!

Reviewer: bstybyz
Date: 08/24/07 21:05
Chapter: Lost, Found and Lost Again

i think i was well written and that that ending makes a good twist but i think you should stretch your stories just a little more for length just a suggestion :):):)

Author's Response: ya, i try to keep them at a constant 14 written page length, but that comes out to 6 to 10 pages typed. i get done what i need to get done i think, but i'm not that great with description to set the scene. ~Snhpf

Reviewer: bstybyz
Date: 08/24/07 20:41
Chapter: Starting Over at St.Mungo's

i think you should have waited a chapter or to be froe they found a way for harry to get his powers back.just for fun ya know?may be give harry a day or to without magic at all,ya know?any way thats the most ill ever say in a review :):):)

Author's Response: i never considered having fun with harry wothout his powers, but for him i think it would be more traumatizing then funny. Harry would feel completely "naked" without any way to defend himself, depending entirely on his friends. ~Snhpf

Reviewer: sillywhippet
Date: 06/20/07 1:20
Chapter: Not Another One

Very well written, looking forward to more...

Author's Response: Thank you!!! i'm typing chapter 10 tomorrow morning, and i hope to have it in the queue b4 i have to go volunteer. wish me luck! ~Snhpf

Reviewer: Ortfeldi
Date: 05/08/07 11:56
Chapter: Not Another One

Please hurry with chapter 10, we've been waiting for ages, i want to know what happens!

Author's Response: i kno it's been forever, and i cant be more sorry that it's taken this long. at the very latest it will be in the queue by the 14th, 3 days after my last AP exam. again, so sorry for the delay, and hopefully it wont happen again ~Snhpf

Reviewer: 1_3_5_midget_7_9
Date: 04/20/07 13:17
Chapter: Not Another One

When is the the next chapter comin' up?

Author's Response: I might be able to squeeze it in this weekend, but it won't be more than 3 days after May 11th. That’s when my final AP test is over and I get my life back. I apologize profusely for not getting this chapter up for so long. It is inexcusable, I know it, but I hope that you’ll stick with me. I am again truly sorry for this taking an astronomical amount of time. Thanks for the review. :]

Reviewer: apotterfan247
Date: 03/20/07 23:28
Chapter: Not Another One

I won't think that you are a bad mother to this story if you won't hold my one year absence against me :) I can't wait for your next chapter.

Also...I didn't fail that test :)

Author's Response: YAY!! I totally won't hold it against you, and i'm glad that you didnt fail :]

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 03/16/07 15:22
Chapter: Not Another One

REally good job. my interperatation was exactly the same as Hermiones.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! When someone reviews every chapter, it's an awesome feeling for the author, and I thank you again for that as well!

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 03/15/07 18:01
Chapter: Parties and Professors

WHAT IS CINDY'S LAST NAME!!!!!!!!! I'm freaking DYING to know!

Author's Response: Well, you'll kno after I kno. I haven't decided if it's going to have sinister implications or if it's just simply going to have been a source of endless taunts through her school life

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 03/15/07 17:38
Chapter: Godric's Surprises

Lily and James seemed too portraity.

If you catch my drift.

Author's Response: haha, nice.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 03/15/07 17:27
Chapter: The Past and The Future

i really think you should have made the memory longer.

good job though

Author's Response: I fi ever have a free moment, i'll probably go back and edit that. Thank you

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 03/15/07 17:16
Chapter: Cindy, Mark Matthews and Sylvia Snape

llol i dn't understand the NRC. . . please explain

Author's Response: Haha, maybe it's a girl thing. Some of us are more obsessive than others in fantacizing their weddings, and for Cindy and Tonks, the club is mainly a wake up call for Mark and Remus. They're screaming loud and clear for left hand rings, and they're hoping that Mark and Remus get the message. Ginny and Hermione are mainly having some fun here. A little bit of them wants to marry their boyfirends that they're so obviously in love with, but they're not trying too hard to get Harry and Ron to propose anytime soon. Please let me know if you want to know more about it.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 03/15/07 9:27
Chapter: Will Rescue

I really wanna find out Cindy's last name.

-I really think it's not that great of an idea to post the chapter name because it usually gives away what will happen and erases much suspense.

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought about that, but the "Will" portion of the title technically applies to more than one thing.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 03/15/07 9:17
Chapter: Lost, Found and Lost Again

I sure hope that they "Will Rescue" Hermione.

Author's Response: Yeah, it is kinda a give away.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 03/15/07 9:09
Chapter: Starting Over at St.Mungo's

I thought hrry would'nt be able to do magic agin!

Author's Response: You're the first person that's voiced this concern, but the way he got his magic back will be important later.

Reviewer: James Jameson
Date: 03/15/07 9:02
Chapter: The Attack


Author's Response: That's the exact reaction I was going for :)

Reviewer: apotterfan247
Date: 03/15/07 0:24
Chapter: Not Another One

Sorry typo. I meant to say that I found this story after not having read it in over a year. My bad :)

Author's Response: No problem at all!

Reviewer: apotterfan247
Date: 03/15/07 0:23
Chapter: Not Another One

I found this review after not having read it for over a year. I left a review in your first chapter and I have to say that I haven't changed my opinion since then. I love where this story is going. It is very well written and I really feel like you do the characters justice. I also love the new characters that you introduced. You have managed to work them in flawlessly as if they have always been in the real stories. Keep up the good work and I will make sure I don't lose this story again. I added it to my favorites.

Author's Response: OMG!!! You're the test person!!! I just have to say, that the review you left in my first chapter gave me hope that someone at least liked my story. I was kinda down until i read that, but it gave me the confidance to continue writing. Even now when I think about it I can't help but smile a little. You have no idea the boost it gives me, even to this day. THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! And thanks for this review too. I hold your opinion in high esteem, as I do all my reviewers, and I hope to continue writing this story to your liking. You also pointed out what a terrible mother I am!! I forgot this story's birthday! I'm so mad at myself right now. Screw homework, i'm typing the next chapter. Thank you again!

Author's Response: Oh, and I really hope you didnt fail!! :)

Reviewer: mrsginnypotter13162
Date: 03/08/07 17:37
Chapter: Not Another One

cool so are you going to write more or are you busy

Author's Response: I have chappie 10 written, i just need to find a free moment to type it. I'm so sorry about the long wait.

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
Tom Riddle and the Cave of Living Waters by alittletiefling 6th-7th Years
What would happen if Tom Marvolo Riddle had been adopted by well-meaning squibs?...
Molly Weasley's Apple Dumplings by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
Molly has studied history and knows the old stories, but she also knows what...
Early, Early Spring: Professor Sinistra Reflects by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
I didn't know much about Professor Sinistra, the Astronomy Professor, until...
It Takes Two to Tango by lucca4 3rd-5th Years
They cannot keep doing this; it is only a matter of whose resolve will break...
In The Heat Of The Morning by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
Summary: In the heat of the morning, Katie and Leanne lie in the grounds...
Can't Fight the Moonlight by Acacia Carter 6th-7th Years
A life-changing disaster at work drives Neville Longbottom to seek aid from...
The History Teacher by iLuna17 6th-7th Years
Maybe he didn’t just love history, maybe he loved being a history teacher.
white on white by Padfoot11333 6th-7th Years
Three vignettes about scars, love, and sex.