Reviews For The Undivided Four
Reviewer: Harrys gone nuts
Date: 02/23/06 16:41
Chapter: The Attack

I liked it.If you write good story you get good review(lol)You created your own spell.Good job.100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000/10-Nuts the - = signing of

Author's Response: i'm glad you liked it! the spell was mainly for cliffie-type purposes, but it may become more of a factor later. you never kno. thanks for reviewing!

Author's Response: Okay, the spell isn't just for cliffie type purposes. It makes a difference... a difference that will be revealed in chap 9/10

Reviewer: harryginnyforever
Date: 02/22/06 14:04
Chapter: The Attack

GINNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If you kill her, I kill you!!!! I have a wand and I'm not afraid to use it! Must! Put! Story! In! Favorites! So! I! Can! Look! Every! Day!

Author's Response: OK, OK! DON'T KILL ME! lol. thanx for putting me in your favorites, i really appreciate it! chapter 2 should be in soon!

Reviewer: HermioneHair
Date: 02/22/06 11:07
Chapter: The Attack

DON'T KILL GINNY!!! DON'T KILL GINNY!!! DON'T KILL GINNY!!! DON'T KILL GINNY!!! DON'T KILL GINNY!!! DON'T KILL GINNY!!! If you kill Ginny I'll........I'll........I'll......welll I'll cry for days.....and at the moment I really don't feel like crying!!!!!!! DON'T DO IT!!!!! Oh, and I really like the story, by the way. It's in my favourites now. UPDATE!!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! XXXXXXXXXXXX

Author's Response: i wont can't kill ginny this early, its a r/h & H/G fic! can't leave out the 'G'! chap. 2 is in the queue, so just hold out a few more days!

Reviewer: Hot48cricket
Date: 02/22/06 0:10
Chapter: The Attack

Evil cliffie!!!!!!! Lime green light - that's not A.K.!?!? You DIDN'T kill Ginny in the first chapter????!!!!!???? (if so, please await my Howler!) Can't wait for Ch. 2.

Author's Response: i kno and i'm sorry bout the cliffie! i submitted the second chapter so it should be in soon. there's no way i'd kill ginny in the 1st chapter, she's too good of a character to kill! nice eyes with catching the 'lime green' description......you'll have to wait till chapter 5 to get an official andwer tho! srry 4 that!

Reviewer: _Ginny_W
Date: 02/21/06 23:39
Chapter: The Attack

omg! this goes straight onto my favs. its really great and i only hope the 7th is this good! you've totally captured all the characters personalities and more! its brilliant. fantastic.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! that was such a moral booster! comparing this to book 7?!?! wow! thanks again!

Reviewer: sinful xx angel
Date: 02/16/06 0:51
Chapter: The Attack

Amazing talent. I love it even better than when I was reading it in class. Look forward to the edited chapter two! P.S. I'm typing Chapter 3 tonight!

Author's Response: Ditto.

Reviewer: sinful xx angel
Date: 02/16/06 0:38
Chapter: The Attack

Amazing talent. I love it even better than when I was reading it in class. Look forward to the edited chapter two! P.S. I'm typing Chapter 3 tonight!

Author's Response: thank you so much! chappie 2 is w/ beta and thanks again for typing my chapters. you know you so rock.

Reviewer: bishbop56
Date: 02/13/06 7:18
Chapter: The Attack

wow, that was soooo much better than expected, im very much looking forward to chapter 2.

Author's Response: thank you so much for the support! i hoped someone would like my story. chappie 2 is being edited and should be in soon.

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