Reviews For The Undivided Four
Reviewer: ravenclawmoon2001
Date: 09/10/08 15:03
Chapter: The Attack

Amy: ;-)

Sherri: ;-3

Reviewer: ravenclawmoon2001
Date: 09/09/08 16:26
Chapter: The Attack

Amy: No beats Fred and George!

Sherri: We're just good like that!

Author's Response: hahaha indeed :] ~Snhpf

Reviewer: ravenclawmoon2001
Date: 09/05/08 16:47
Chapter: The Attack

Am: So do we-

Sh: But we're not twins-

am: so this is a bit wierd.

Together: See ya later!

~Amy Amelia & Sherri

Author's Response: hahaha from the way you guys keep finishing each other's sentences, even in text, i think you could give the twins a run for their money :] ~Snhpf

Reviewer: ravenclawmoon2001
Date: 09/03/08 16:11
Chapter: The Attack

Together: Your Welcome!

Amy: Ha ha, fred and george much huh?

Sherri: Yep, thats us, troublesome twosome.

~"Amy" Amelia & Sherri

Author's Response: LOL i love fred and george! They're completely awesome on a lot of levels, and i hope to have them in quite a few more chapters :] Thanks for the review, you two! ~Snhpf

Reviewer: ravenclawmoon2001
Date: 09/02/08 18:46
Chapter: Not Another One

(Amy): Clever, very clever, I like your hint. Oh, I cant wait for the rest of the chapters

(Sherri:) Speaking as and experienced Romance beta [amy here really does get around], I want to express my congratulations on a job well done, and a great work in progress.

(Amy:) Hasta luego!

Sherri: Au revoir pour maintenant!

~Amy Amelia & Sherri ;-)

Author's Response: Thank you! I worked hard on it and i;m so glad that you two like it as much as i do :] ~Snhpf

Reviewer: ravenclawmoon2001
Date: 09/02/08 18:33
Chapter: Parties and Professors

(Amy:) *sniggers* love the passwords

Sherri: *shakes head and sighs* Only you, Ames. 'Toaster' and 'Mr. Cuddles'. Ah, I've got it, the only thing you can cok with and your favorite stuffed bear.

Together: Love it!

~Amy Amelia and Sherri ;-)

Author's Response: hahaha thank you both so much :] ~Snhpf

Reviewer: HarrysGirlJLN
Date: 06/03/08 0:25
Chapter: Starting Over at St.Mungo's

Interesting idea for the transfer of powers from Harry to Ginny. I also like introducing Snape's sister. I imagine she'll be good and won't necessarily deserve to be hated like Harry hates Snape.

Author's Response: Thanks, that's one of the major plot points. Harry Ginny Ron and Hermione suck at it right now, but they will get better. Sylvia is a little bit of a wildcard at the moment. She has her good moments and her bad, though her cold demeanor does nothing to endear her to the gang. Thanks for reading :] ~Snhpf

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/21/08 23:13
Chapter: Not Another One

Great, truly original. You are doing a fine job so far. Keep it up!!

Author's Response: Thanks again, especially for reviewing all of my chapters. You have no idea what a boost it is to think that someone took the time to do that for all that i've written. Thank you so much. Chapter 10 got put in the queue today so look for it soon! ~Snhpf

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/21/08 16:41
Chapter: Parties and Professors

Very good. You are doing a great job, keep it up!! And remember to watch those typos!!

Author's Response: Thank you, and i will! :D ~Snhpf

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/21/08 16:33
Chapter: Godric's Surprises

Very nice. Like the way Harry's visit went. It was truly original. Watch out for missing spaces in between words. Great so far, can not wait to read the rest!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I really like how it turned out. I try to throw a bunch of my own twists into the plot because i'm working in an area and with a plotline that so many others are writing as well. Thanks for the review :] ~Snhpf

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/21/08 16:19
Chapter: The Past and The Future

The memory was extremly funny. Nice plot, overall a great chapter. Watch for spelling typos.

Author's Response: Thanks! I will go back through the chapters and re-edit sometime soon, for now my priority is the newer chapters. ~Snhpf

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/21/08 16:07
Chapter: Cindy, Mark Matthews and Sylvia Snape

Love the end. Extremly funny. Can't wait to see where the NRC ends up.

Author's Response: LOL the NRC was the product of a few conversations with my editors and a crazy dream i had. And never fear, it's a little addition that i dont intend to let fall by the wayside in future chapters. Besides, any fic needs its lighter moments :] Thanks for the review! ~Snhpf

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/21/08 15:53
Chapter: Will Rescue

Good, very good. Hopefully the club will be explained later. The ending with school was a typical fan fiction occurence, but nonetheless, it eas very good.

Author's Response: Yes i know that them going back to school is basically chiche with fanfics, but it is a fmailiar place and somewhere where they can research as well as have a home base to work from. I hope to throw a bit of a twist into the mix where authors usually dont by having them teach classes, and what they learned in those classes will end up helping in the fight against Voldemort. Thanks :] ~Snhpf

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/21/08 15:42
Chapter: Lost, Found and Lost Again

Very good, although, I have to say that I am a little sad about hermione's capture.

Author's Response: Yes it was a bit rough to write, but it does end up having a purpose in the long run. thanks for reading :] ~Snhpf

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/21/08 15:28
Chapter: Starting Over at St.Mungo's

Very good. Nice introduction of a new spell. Also, nice reference to a "mortal enemy".

Author's Response: Thank you! That spell will become important down the line :]

Reviewer: hermione-freak
Date: 03/21/08 15:27
Chapter: The Attack

Good overall, nice plot. Can work a bit on spelling typos.

Author's Response: yeah, i am spelling-ly challenged >.<. thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Hollett5
Date: 11/09/07 15:40
Chapter: Not Another One

Hey.....Great Story so far!!! How long until we get chapter 10?

Author's Response: i'm trying to rework the plot because the mods seem to think it's unlikely, but it effects all my plans for the future so the revamp is taking a while. that and i barely have time to breathe from the homework load from school. junior year = death.

Reviewer: Shezz05
Date: 09/21/07 11:01
Chapter: Not Another One

hey that was brilliant loved your whole series pls kept on writting just dieing to find out what happens next!


Author's Response: i kno and i'm sorry for the wait. the mods say that the next chap needs some plot tweaking, so i have to figure out how to do that and stiill do what i want to do down the line. once i figure out that, you'll have your next chapter. ~Snhpf

Reviewer: bstybyz
Date: 08/24/07 22:59
Chapter: Not Another One

turning into a realy good story so far keep it up :):):)

Author's Response: Ditto.

Reviewer: bstybyz
Date: 08/24/07 22:59
Chapter: Not Another One

turning into a realy good story so far keep it up :):):)

Author's Response: haha thank you!!

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