this site has given me a really bad back, im reading something and i get more and more interested then i lean forward to the screan and... tada instant bad back
beautiful story .. i think with each word i read on this site it will cost we a few pounds in treatment for my back... thankfully none yet... lol...
sirius black sorely underestimated the danger of curtains
strange i normally only say something like a bit too cheesy or lovely or beautifully written and very romantic, why have i written essays for the last 2 reviews *ponders*
aaaaw beautiful, for that u and your story r going onto my faves, lol look at my faves evry one of them has something in common : answer they have almost all writen ron and mione romance fics
Awww. I set out to find some pre-Valentine's Day fluff to read. Well, I found it! Great Story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you found what you were looking for.^^
Aww, this is so sweet. And very canon, too, which is refreshing. Nice job!
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AAWW!!!!! i loooooved it!
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Awwwww! That was so incredibly sweet! I love how awkward Ron was, and how Hermione over-analyzed everything. I just had to read this since you said that it was the prequel to Wedding Complications, and I'm so glad I did!
Author's Response: Aww thanks Amanda! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hermione was fun to write, but Ron was really hard. I hope you enjoy the sequel as well. *hugs*
Great story. I really enjoyed it. I thought that Ron's inability to talk about his feeling was very IC. Grade: B+
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
That was great. It was full of fluff and that was a good thing. God! I'm starting to cry now, but I think that is partly because I'm listening to 'All By Myself' and pther sad love songs like that. But it could be because of you story! So consider your self honoured because I hardly ever cry over something as trivial a fanfiction story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! I'm feeling honoured that my story moved you, even though your tears weren't necessarily caused by my story, it's still nice to know that it made you feel something.^^
A gorgeous bouquet of red roses had been waiting on her desk. ~I'm not sure if the British practiced this as well: 'white' roses are what's usually used for apology. Red is to convey love/passion - well not all guys know this, though florists usually does... and I expect Ginny to know this little thing as well.
They neared her door when Ron suddenly asked, ~ typo ^_^
Ron looked shell-shocked, ~ nothing really wrong, but I would suggest 'stood' instead because it conveys a better image
The only shadow on their blossoming relationship was cast by the fact ~casted
All nitpicking aside, I just have to say that I especially love that transition from Hermione's thoughts to that awful tapping sound. Fitting that it was caused by Pig
Your characterization for both Ron and Hermione was head-on. The was Hermione would be consciencious of her work, the way she'd analyse things. The way Ron would stutter at times and go over-enthusuastic about Quidditch.
The best part of the story is that you show the slow blossoming of their relationship and the little details like how Ginny pushed Ron, How both Ron and Hermione was unsure in taking this forward, it make it all the more real and sweet somehow. You show us how the relationship started and how is slowly got deeper. It's not instantaneous and the transition was smooth - it's no wonder this piece won :)
I didn't even know that white roses were used for apologies, so thanks for pointing that out. Over here white is used as a symbol of friendship and read would be love, but the apology thing works even better.^^
I had loads of fun writing this, especially Hermione getting all flustered and expecting the worst before getting Ron's letter was fun. I'm glad you think I managed to keep them IC, Ron's little speech at the end gave me some trouble, but my beta and I managed to fix it.^^
Please make more chapters for this its AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!DUHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I gave it A 1110000
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettttttttt as sugar topped muffins!!! lol! it was great keep writing!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I've never written romance before, so I'm glad you think it's sweet, that's exactly what I wanted it to be.
I loved it! It was the best and I would love to read more!!!!! 10/10!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it as I had loads of fun writing it.
You already know this, but I really like this story!! It has all the right componants in it, like Ron and Hermione's first date, where they ended up fighting in the middle - I thought that was so perfect for them! Also I liked the sentimental bits in it too, like the last line. I hope you'll be writing more R/Hr fics soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you still like it after having to go through all my typos;) I'll see about writing another R/Hr sometime, if I get another bunny perfect for them I most certainly will.
Very cute! I really enjoyed this story. I noticed a couple typos, but otherwise its a very sweet Ron and Hermione love story! (And I do love a good R/Hr love story ;-) !)
Thanks for your comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, I had a lot of fun writing it;) I've never done a R/Hr before, but this plot bunny was just perfect for them.
I'll see if I can find the typos you were talking about, thanks for telling me I had them in there.