Reviewer: draco_lover333
Date: 09/05/06 14:01
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

my god ur story is SOOOOOOOOO good
i love it
its sooo well thought out!
keep up the good work and i cant wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thank you! Manda*

Reviewer: gingercat
Date: 09/04/06 0:19
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

The letters were so sad. James is so cute, and Ron will make a great dad. I am just sorry Hermione didn't tell him about it from the beginning. Great story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Manda*

Reviewer: Bluenellow
Date: 09/03/06 23:10
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

sooooo cute! it all makes sense now...!

Reviewer: Dr Pepper
Date: 09/02/06 14:27
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

aww soo sad but so cute i love it write more!!

Reviewer: Mrs Liz Potter
Date: 09/02/06 13:35
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

Yeah you took a very, very VERY long time to update but it was sooooooo worth it! I love this story even though every time I read it I cry a little. You write this story so beautifuly but I like never get to read it! Please update soon and I will praise you even more!

Author's Response: Omg, you are so sweet! I'm tearing up a bit reading all of these wonderful reviews. Thank you so much. The next one is already on it's way. Thanks again! Manda*

Reviewer: relouis92
Date: 09/02/06 7:30
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

awww, it made me cry, and believe me it takes some great writing for that to happen.
You are awesome, as is this story.
The following chapters are going to have to be amazing to live up to this one!

Author's Response: *smiles* Thanks so much! That is real sweet! Manda*

Reviewer: amsies360
Date: 09/01/06 23:30
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

I love it. up date soon

Reviewer: AKA294
Date: 09/01/06 19:55
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

Really good! I love your story, but Luna just seems a little bit OOC to me... I guess I just can't believe she actually grew up in the end!

This is great. I can't wait for more. Hopefully, it won't take as long to update as it did last time.... That wait was forever! (Even though I didn't review until today, sorry for that) I really thought that this story was really realistic sounding, like all of this could end up happening in the books, so that made it even better (and much sadder). I am really looking forward to chapter 7!

By the way, where are you from? I saw the "y'all" in one of your notes**

Ashley :)

Author's Response: Wow. Thanks so much for all of this critique and review! Yes, Luna is a bit OOC, but in my mind, no matter what, when she grows up, she's gunna change. It won't take as long, I promise! lol. I'm from Arizona. But you probably can guess where I grew up... :) Thanks so much again! Manda*

Reviewer: AKA294
Date: 09/01/06 17:38
Chapter: Letters

why in the world would hermione not deserve ron? how could she think that? oh well thats really sad how harry and ginny died. I want to know how they did, and how they knew they were going to die and how they had time to write their letters before then

Really good story!

Reviewer: Wileycat
Date: 09/01/06 15:12
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

Those letters made me cry they were well written. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: magicalmuggle818
Date: 09/01/06 14:27
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

omg this is a really good story
your a good writer but please update it soon coz i can't wait lol

Reviewer: Cheshlin
Date: 09/01/06 14:21
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

The letters were perfect. The feeling and the facts that came from them really helped show what all was going on. James is so cute! I loved when he asked where his Daddy went. That was the perfect part. I look forward to seeing what Hermione's memories are, and I hope you show the B-day party. This story is really moving in the direction that I would love to see it go. :) I want Ron and Hermione together, surrounded by their family and friends. I look forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Manda*

Reviewer: gingercat
Date: 09/01/06 12:48
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

Ron will make a wonderful father. Still the letters are soooo sad....can't stop crying. J is sweet.

Reviewer: connieewing
Date: 09/01/06 12:33
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

wow I cried it was that good. I can't wait for the next chappie. keep it up

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 08/30/06 16:25
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

*dances* First reviewer! YAY! I am glad the Daddy....*forgets title* somethin! WOOT! WOOTWOOTWOOTWOOTWOOT! My story thing got deleted when mugglenet was hacked, but Im gonna submit again like you did! Oh yeah, I love this fic, if you hadnt noticed.....*is amazed at how much time is on my hands*

Author's Response: lol. Yep.

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 08/27/06 13:18
Chapter: All Answers Cause Questions

Did the sixth chapter get deleted??? *cries hysterically*

Author's Response: It did, but I'm just going to fix it up and send it back in...

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 08/25/06 22:25
Chapter: Letters

I dunno I just felt like asking a random question cuz Im bored

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 08/22/06 21:22
Chapter: Letters

OMG! I have probably read the letter from Ginny to Ron about fifteen times and every time I promise myself that I am not gonna start crying but I always break it! The fic has to be really good for me of all people to start crying, because I laugh during Sleepy Hollow when people are getting their heads cut off (I know its mean) so I just abosoloutely love this fic. I wish the fic I submitted (that still isnt validated...No!) was as good as this! Then I woud probably start crying tears of joy! This fic is so original and soooo frickin good! It is kinda gonna go on my favorite page thingy on my internet! I love it! Oh btw how long to you think this ficcy will be?
PS. This is totally random but do you watch the TV show Lost?

Author's Response: Wow. I don't actually know how long it's going to be. In the next chapter, you get to see the past that Ron has missed and seen. And then prolly another two chapters after that. So not too much longer. Let me know when your fic is validated, I'll have to go read it. I used to watch Lost, but I missed a few weeks and became quite lost, so I stopped. Why?

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 08/15/06 1:13
Chapter: All Answers Cause Questions

WEEEE! FIC! Sorry, just submitted my own fic and im hyper. I LOOOOVE this fic! I have probably read the letters about eighteen times and Im not even kidding! I really hope you do post the next chapter. I am uber glad I found this fic again. It is love! Yeah I said it.
This fic=love!

Author's Response: lol. Um, thanks. I have submitted the next chapter, so it's on its way!

Reviewer: Xxdeath_eaterxX
Date: 08/09/06 1:42
Chapter: All Answers Cause Questions

Okay here is my theory: Ginny got pregnant with Harrys baby. Hermione carried it for her. Every time the answer gets close, you make it disappear! lol sorry! great fic! Oh and could you tell me if my theory is right? Cuz if it is wrong i will find a a new one

Author's Response: lol. Ummm, you will find out if your theory is correct soon. I promise. Thanks again. I'm really glad you like it! Manda*

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