Reviewer: Riiroo
Date: 04/14/12 8:04
Chapter: Daddy's Back

Please upload the next chapter!! i love this story! xx ♥

Reviewer: Riiroo
Date: 04/04/12 16:41
Chapter: Daddy's Back

I am actually crying!! please finish this i would be sooo happy!! i love this so much u have clearly put a lot of thought into this so please finish this Fic ! PLEASE! xx

Reviewer: KBWeasley
Date: 01/06/12 12:47
Chapter: Daddy's Back

Cant wait for the final chapter

Reviewer: gingercat
Date: 01/10/08 1:13
Chapter: Daddy's Back

I love this story. I hate that Harry died, but....Hermione and Ron were so sweet together, and I hope they can be that way again! Please hurry and finish this is such a tear jerker!

Reviewer: ObsEssedHRHLS
Date: 11/11/07 16:10
Chapter: Daddy's Back

i love this story. when's the next chapter going to be up?

Reviewer: gingercat
Date: 11/03/07 21:13
Chapter: Daddy's Back

I never read Harry dying....but this is really good. Ron and Hermione are so good together in this story.(I am a Harry and Hermione shipper, but Love this one). Please update since it is the LAST is now November 3rd.....I keep coming back to check and reading the last chapter again, and crying......Hope to see an update soon. thanks.

Reviewer: Hermione529
Date: 10/07/07 17:35
Chapter: Daddy's Back

I really love this story!!! Your a fantastic writer.

Reviewer: harry and ginny 2019
Date: 09/30/07 21:29
Chapter: Daddy's Back

I Love this story, please keep writing.

Reviewer: ObsEssedHRHLS
Date: 09/23/07 15:59
Chapter: Daddy's Back

One more chapter! Hurry! lol I can't wait to read it!!

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 09/04/07 18:05
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

wow that was amazing. you left me speachless. i love james and how he has taken ron as his dad. this is incredible. I want to read more i want to know what happened so please please please with cherries on top update soon

Reviewer: ember
Date: 09/03/07 12:15
Chapter: Daddy's Back

omg! this is so awesome!!! hurry up with last chapter

Reviewer: gingercat
Date: 09/02/07 23:48
Chapter: Daddy's Back

I NEVER read stories where Harry dies! But this one caught my attention. It has made me cry many times. Ron is great, and I really hope he and Hermione can give J a wonderful and happy life. Nice Story.

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 09/02/07 17:06
Chapter: Daddy's Back

I had read this story ages ago, but I just found it again. I love it. This is one story that I can truly say made me cry.
Only one more chapter? Is a sequel possible?
Update soon!

Author's Response: thank you. i'll let you in on a secret: writing it was very hard. I was sad and depressed, so i ended up writing most of the last chapter a while back, after i wrote the very first chapter. i get very intune with my stories and the characters. i'm very glad you like it. i'm thinking that there might be a prequal. not sure about a sequel though. Never say Never! ;) xoxo manda

Reviewer: SiriusPotterFan1
Date: 08/17/07 20:44
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

Awh, what a sweet story. Good idea, and well written. I felt like crying at the letters, but I loved it!

Reviewer: SiriusBlack1113
Date: 08/09/07 22:51
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

omg i actually sort of cried while reading this,
i usually never cry during a story
it's amazing!!!

Reviewer: Omagus
Date: 07/30/07 1:38
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

Dang... deeeep. How do you come up with this stuff? Perhaps it's J.K.R. in disguise... ;)
I decided to read this after seeing Never What It Seems. My gut tends to get a little squirmy when I switch gears from a story I really like to a brand new one, but like with Never What It Seems I was pleasantly surprised (To be honest, I started reading fics just to stave off Potter withdrawls after powering through all 7 in a week and wasn't expecting much, thanks for proving me wrong!).
This is a great read and I really think that with this you have Ron and Hermione's characters captured extremely well. Ron reacts much the way I'd expect him to and I can quite esily see Hermione being a Healer. Ron's brothers feel a little out-of-whack to me, I have a hard time seeing them as emotional support for Ron (particularly Fred and George) and also Ron accepting it. I suppose that the war and the obvious loss of his closest friends would make them more sympathetic, but I personally think that among brothers the way to express it would be to not bring it up. However I suppose that the age gap between Ron and Charlie takes away much of the sibling rivalry and with it some of the awkwardness of discussing personal issues, Fred and George did leave him to do the talking I suppose...
I find myself stunned at myself (if that made any sense at all) for liking the letters. Very emotionally charged, it's MUCH different than what I'm used to reading (namely Scifi/Fantasy war novels) so I'm rather shcoked to find that I enjoyed it. It's a nice little gap-filler for the books, if perhaps a little exaggerated, as the relationships (not only Ron/Hermione but several others too) are breifly covered and then magically (no pun intended) warp to happily ever after or death. It's nice to see the inner workings a little clearer, which is wierd to hear myself think but I suppose I appeciate this take because it fits in so well with the universe of the books I like so much.
Are you planning on continuing this? The last updated date shows it as having been about a year...
(Hehe... nuther long one, feels a little out of place. The 'Revews' section seems to be more used as a quick little comments area so it feels wierd putting in this much...)

Author's Response: Wow. Yes another long one, but yet still amazing. Thank you so much. I'm so glad (more than you can imagine) that someone appreciates all of the time I've put into my stories. JKR in disguise, oh wow. Thank you so much. To be honest, I was skeptical about the scene with the brothers. I knew that Charlie and Bill would be awesome to put in to help Ron; however, I thought that putting Fred and George in would show how the war and Harry & Ginny's deaths changes and affected everyone. Thank you again so much. I am continuing this story, working on the next chapter today, actually. 'Never' is my baby, but 'Sometimes' is just as important, so I finished the next chapter to 'Never' and now I'll do 'Sometimes'. I appreciate your comments. Because of you I seriously have inspiration to finish these stories and now I know that I will. Thank you so much! xoxo manda

Reviewer: Pigwidgeon92
Date: 05/20/07 21:27
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

This is so great! I cried and laughed all in one chapter haha baby James is so cute! and I cant wait for an update! Hurry please!


Reviewer: danbarn
Date: 05/14/07 10:35
Chapter: Daddy, Come Back

I keep checking back on this story for a fresh chapter. I've read all your others works and enjoyed themvery much but I this is my favorite and I am beg beg beggin you to please continue it.

Reviewer: Rumo Zamonien
Date: 04/08/07 18:36
Chapter: Revelations and Tears

“Luna COMMA he got married two years ago."
And what kind of a name is "Star"?
Nice until now, although there's a lot of crying.

Reviewer: Rumo Zamonien
Date: 04/08/07 18:24
Chapter: Letters

"You deserve her COMMA Ron"

You did much better than many other authors in putting commas! Thank you!

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